Reviewer: papersxpen 

Leopard's Curse: applejuice456 

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(-MIGHT CONTAIN SPOILERS-)

(some things might come of bland and straight leading to hurt certain emotions, if they do i apologize prior to that)

(i am sorry for this much delay...i was caught up in some other activity, if you can try to understand...)

TITLE- 3/5

i cant see how the title is relevant to the story but it feels intriguing...probably i'll have to read more to find out.

COVER- 3.5/5

the cover isn't much attractive, probably seek for an apt one from a cover shop. i neither can find relevance to the story though idea does match a bit.

BLURB- 4.5/5

blurb is a solid one. the initial part only gives me thrills and i would definitely wanna read it!

its an overall view of the story. neither too revealing nor short on info. obviously, there could always be improvement and you only need to change it if u think of something cooler than this and i would say don't change it, its good enough

GENRE- 3/5

i dont think 'mystery' would be an appropriate genre to categorize your book into. it seems more of an action/adventure book or any other genre would work but this. its so because when we speak of mystery as a genre stories relating to finding the killer through clues are more which pops into minds.

ORIGINALITY- 8.5/10

your writing style is too good. its similar to those who might be already successful, i really liked it. the narrative part too was good and so are the dialogues. i can totally feel the emotions you are trying to express through your words and so keep up!

DESCRIPTION- 9/10

the description too is good and totally understandable.

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT- 9.5/10

i liked the character development. it was at a right pace., it obviously could have been a better but this was good enough. your writing is gripping the reader and that's a good sign.

PLOT- 9/10

i haven't read much stories of this plot and these kinda stories are what i like. the idea of vigilante is a nice one because similar stories are very similar but you do have some special factor.

GRAMMAR- 15/15

grammar was good however do check again for errors because i can recollect finding some.

STRUCTURE-4 /5

there could have been some changes in structure. i noticed there were dialogues and descriptions in one paragraphs so you might wanna change that because dialogues should be highlighted independently, otherwise dialogues might hide when someone just scans.

VOCABULARY- 5/5

vocabulary was alright and i don't look much into it either way 🙂

OVERALL ENJOYMENT- 9/10

i liked the story flow, i liked how you wrote it and specially the fighting scenes which could be tricky but you pulled it alright, i liked the characters and development overall it was a good read!

TOTAL- 82.5/100