Reviewer: D_S_Dodie 

Daughter of the Gods: ProdigiousFlames 

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☆Title: 3 /5

☆Genre: 4 /5

☆Cover: 5 /5

☆Blurb: 2 /5

*Your synopsis did not make me want to read the story, so I think rewriting it will definitely do you some good.

☆Description: 3 /10

*As far as I've read, there was a huge lack of descriptive writing. Help me envision the setting, important characters, etc.

☆Originality: 7 /10

*It was pretty unique, however, there were a lot of cliche tropes. It definitely needs a lot of work.

☆Plot: 7 /10

*It's an OK plot, but I feel like it can be so much better. It almost feels insignificant really. So, you might want to go back to the planning board and see how you can make your plot stronger.

☆Character Development: 2 /10

*Your characters felt one dimensional. There was no depth in any of them besides our two main characters and even then it wasn't much. So, I guess work on building your characterization.

☆Grammar/Punctuation: 2 /10

*There are a lot of errors in your story. So much so that I would recommend finding a proofreader because it makes your story so hard to read and follow.

☆Vocabulary: 4 /10

*Needs some major work.

☆Structure: 3 /10

*Structure needs drastic changes. It was confusing to read at times and there were moments where I wasn't even able to decipher who was talking.

☆Overall Enjoyment: 3 /10

*The story wasn't really my cup of tea. Maybe because I just wasn't the intended audience. There are a lot of flaws that I just can't get past which also plays into the reason why I didn't enjoy reading. I definitely recommend finding an editor who can help you fix up your story because right now it needs a lot of work. However, it's a good start to your story-telling career. Sorry if my review seemed harsh, but without constructive criticism there is no growth. Good luck on getting this piece to a better place and thank you for choosing me as your editor.

Total: 45 /100