Reviewer: -crazydw- 

The Blueties & The Beasts: everydaydreamingxxi 

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Title: 3/5

The title does match the story, but it looks unattractive and simple in my opinion. It can be more modifed while taking some attractive supernatural names.

Cover: 2/5

I know making the cover matching to the story is hard and you did it perfectly but it lacks a few things. The cover is looking a little dull. The blue light on Jimin is really taking its show and the text placement can be improved.

Blurb: 3/5

The blurb is good as it gives a clear info of the story... But try using more cool words instead of common ones.

Instead of humans are hunted by the beasts that rule the world-

Beasts are now at the top of the food chain and can be used instead which would look more attractive and will make interest for readers to read.

Genre: 5/5

I like the supernatural genre myself, and it fits with the story perfectly.

Originality: 10/10

It was diferent from supernatural plots and had a touch of originality. The groups and beasts were showcased diferently and I never read a story with a plot like this. I can see the creativity while writing the chapters which is a great thing....

Description: 10/10

I really like how all the things were introduced well to clear the confusion... All the four groups were divided with information and correct representation.

The character's introduction is quite good too although it is just name and group but only the important information needed!!

Character Development: 9/10

The characters were developed well throughout the chapters.. There were no lazy dialogues and interesting plot made the characters dialogues with drama and spice. I really like the personalities of the main characters which were the blueties. Their personalities and interests were showcased beautifully and I really loved that.... :)

Plot: 10/10

I really liked the plot. It had imagination and creativity. The touch of originality really made my interest more. It was not like other common plots- ik I mentioned it above but it was something diferent. The deployment of characters was good too with amazing dialogues.

Grammar: 12/15

The grammar is not that bad, but it still needs to be improved. The use of commas in between really bugs up. The plot will surely attract readers but grammar plays an important part and I don't think it is making an efect on the story. Try using uncommon and attractive words instead of common ones :)......

Structure: 4/5

The structure is quite good with the dialogue placement. I liked how the chapters were neither short nor too long. The description paragraphs are correctly placed with the introduction of the book.

Vocabulary/spellings: 7/10

There were no spelling mistakes or hardly any, but the vocabulary really turned me of. Too common words were used making its show dull. There is a way to attract readers and having a good vocabulary does that job, so it really needs to be improved. It was not that bad tho like some other stories but try replacing simple words with unique and acceptable ones.

Overall Enjoyment: 9/10

I really enjoyed the story as I am an army too. The plot and the characters are quite good. The creativity and originality never bored me throughout the story. :))

Total: 84/100