Reviewer: -crazydw- 

Aragons: earlfangs 

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Title: 4/5

The title really matches the story. I was confused with the title at frst but it got cleared as I read the blurb.

Cover: 5/5

The cover is really cool in my opinion. The sword looks exotic and I really like the cover. 

Blurb: 5/5

Full marks to the blurb. Instead of just starting with the introduction, the words at the starting and end really makes the show of description beautiful.

To save and to destroy-

May the light be with you-

These words are matching with the blurb and the placement is also good. Genre: 5/5

The genre perfectly matches the story. It doesn't go of route or something outside the genre and it fts perfectly.

Originality: 10/10

I will give full marks to originality. It was not like other common stories on wattpad. It had a touch of originality and the plot was written beautifully. I like the diferent plot with some new words.

Description: 8/10

The description is quite good but I don't think sign matters in the introduction of characters. The character's introduction was short but I may say it was good not like a big boring full intro no one wants to read. Try to add personality traits in the characters introduction instead of birthdays and signs.... :)

Character Development: 7/10

The characters were given interests and their personalities were cool. Their appearance was well introduced. I like the raia character the most. The spice and drama was added and lazy dialogues were avoided which made my interest more. I may say characters were developed well throughout the story.

Plot: 9/10

I loved how the plot had its touch of originality. Not a cliché common plot but an interesting unique one. Creativity and imagination are main components and I can surely say that they both were used accordingly.

Grammar: 13/15

The grammar is quite good in my opinion. The chapters were edited once and given time to write. Mostly the words were in passive voice, but they had a good impression on the story. It still needs a little improvement in dialogues I may say.

Structure: 4/5

The dialogues and main parts were divided correctly. Like itself in the frst chapter-Her name is Raia was written while leaving space and I really liked the plotment....

The paragraphs were written short and long paragraphs really bores the reader so I think it was too interesting to read that way.

Vocabulary/Spelling: 10/10

I will give full marks to vocabulary and spellings. Common words were not used often and spelling mistakes were avoided. The vocabulary really impressed me from the frst chapter itself so I may say there was no doubt I will give it less than full.

Overall Enjoyment: 9/10

I really enjoyed the story and plot. Dark fantasy is not one of my favorite genres but I loved it. The grammar and vocabulary made it more interesting to read....... :)

Total: 89/100