He Is Sin - MissScintilla 

Reviewer - tummie07

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TITLE [5/5]

The title is perfect for the book and genre, it also very enticing.

COVER [5/5]

The cover is really good too, it matches the title and it looks very nice. If I see it I would definitely want to read your book.

BLURB [5/5]

The blurb makes me want to read your book. It makes me itch for more "who is she going to choose?" this question was on replay in my head, it's a really good blurb.

GENRE [5/5]

The genre fitting is absolutely amazing, good job.

ORIGINALITY [8/10]

That is pretty much one of the most original books I've read, I am giving you an '8/10' because spiritual isn't one of the genres I go for, i go for teen fiction mostly thus making your book the first spiritual book I would ever read, and due to shallow knowledge i gave you that score.

DESCRIPTION [9/10]

Your descriptions are very key and easy to understand.

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT [9/10]

The characters are very unique.

Maeve is a very unique character. I like her.

They still keep to the plot not suddenly changing so that makes it good.

PLOT [9/10]

The plot is really good, there are no plot holes and it's really enjoyable.

GRAMMAR [13/15]

The grammatical structure is really good, although you should not forget to capitalize your personal pronoun "I" and I have a question: why do you use "_" instead of "-" just wondering why?

STRUCTURE [5/5]

It is structured accordingly and it's pretty amazing.

VOCABULARY [9/10]

The vocabulary you use is pretty simple and straightforward, the spellings are accurate but there are devils like "typos" so you should really check it over and over again just to be safe.

OVERALL ENJOYMENT [10/10]

I really enjoyed the book and I am looking forward to finishing it if time permits. I love to say a good job, well done.