Partners in Crime - 4everSherlocked

Reviewer - cwang1

Title [4/5]

I liked your title a lot; it really captures the story well. The only thing I would remark on is that the title is a bit cliche, so you could try to make it something more interesting, like "The Greatest Mastermind," which I think is also a great title.

Cover: [4/5]

I loved the rustic vibes your cover gave me! I really liked how the title really popped. The only thing I would remark on is to make sure that all the text is readable. Right now, I can't really see the author's name, so I would recommend making that a bit bigger.

Blurb: [3/5]

I really loved the content in your blurb! It was definitely really intriguing and made me so excited to read your book! I would like to comment on your sentence structure, and how you can switch up your sentences a bit to add more clarity to your writing. For example, I would recommend changing the "Once a year..." part into something like "Every year, all Moltaires that are of age gather with their henchman to earn the title 'The Greatest Mastermind.'"

Genre: [4/5]

Yes, I think that this is an adventure book. Personally, I find it to be more of an action book, but it could really fit in both genres. After all, there isn't a clear line between genres, and many books can fit in multiple genres.

Originality: [10/10]

I certainly haven't seen many books like yours; it's very unique! It isn't any sort of cliche romance story!

Description: [10/10]

Your description is definitely your forte; you were able to weave in fitting vocabulary words, and you never let yourself get too carried away. None of the description was confusing, either.

Character Development: [7/10]

I thought that the character development in your book was actually really fleshed out, and I felt that the main character (Harry and Tizzy) did change. I would recommend perhaps describing the other characters, like Tizzy's father and Uncle Morty, a bit more at the beginning.

Plot: [8/10]

Your plot was really interesting, and I genuinely enjoyed reading your book! The one thing I would like to point out is that a lot of your chapters felt incomplete. I think this is because of the place you ended them, so I would try to pick a different place to end your chapters.

Grammar: [10/15]

I thought that, for the most part, your grammar was correct. However, I did see quite a few places where your sentence structure was a bit choppy, and the sentences didn't really flow together. I would just recommend going back and trying to make the flow more. I also noticed that you used an extra comma in some places, so I would just recommend going back and checking over it. You also tend to use a lot of ellipsis in your dialogue, so I would just watch out for that.

Structure: [4/5]

For the most part, I thought you structured everything well. I liked your use of italics in certain places. The only thing I would recommend is to break up some of your longer paragraphs, as that can be a draw-back for readers.

Vocabulary/Spelling: [8/10]

Honestly, I didn't see any spelling mistakes, so great job on that! I did think that, at certain places, you could use a bit more descriptive vocabulary, which enhances your writing. Other than that, great job in this category!

Overall Enjoyment: [10/10]

I absolutely loved your book! It was such a great read, and I truly enjoyed it! Your book was really interesting and unique. Great job!

Total: [82/100]