In the first post, I'd mentioned that showing is the first rule of writing. That is how important showing is with creative writing. So it's time to flip the telling switch off and start working on flipping the showing switch on.

It's not the easiest flip to switch on in writing, but hopefully, through these posts, we will learn together how to tackle this one.

The first post was about words that are linked to telling, how to identify them in your own writing, and then rewrite those posts into showing.

With this post, we are going to talk about how to rewrite those boring telling sentences with the following.

Describe Body LanguageUse Strong VerbsFocus on describing sensesPractice every day (a bit of homework).

https://youtu.be/YAKcbvioxFk

To read more about the post: https://kdpeters.com/show-vs-telling-2-describing-body-language-and-emotions/

Thanks for learning with me