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||#9: Surrounded by Boys*

@_LivingTheNightmare
Reviewer: @loveeboat
Genre: Fiction

Summary/Excerpt:

Her parents made a mistake. A pretty big one as a matter of fact and now Riley is stuck being the only girl in an all boys boarding school.

Cover: Your cover is really cute! I love the outfit on the girl. She looks very stylish. I wish I had such long legs! The only critique I have however is changing the color of your title. It is really pretty and all but I just hate pink. lol that's not really a critique it's just my craziness. 9/10

Description: Your description is a bit vague but I kind of love that. You don't expose too much or make it too excessively long. You leave enough room for readers to want to enter and continue to explore how you develop your characters. What was the mistake her parents made? How does Riley feel about going to this all boys school? These are great questions that readers like myself think about once seeing that. 8/10

Content:
Your first chapter was okay. I did find myself annoyed with some of the characters but I guess that's just me. The whole story of her parents sending her to the wrong school is a bit repetitive on Wattpad but you seem to make it work for your own story. I didn't find myself wanting to compare it to other books I've read because it was well written and the humor was nice. 8/10

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