@hiii-its-just-me
Reviewer: @loveeboat
Genre: Teen Fiction

Summary/ Excerpt:
Ok. I realized my life is kind of like a story. So it started with hate and went into a tunnel of darkness to a rollar coaster of confusion and now to the middle of nowhere. It meaning, my emotions - they've gone a long way and left me with a mess. There's this boy, Michael and a girl- me. And here is the story I thought we'd never see. To be honest, I hoped it would stay that way. But of course it didn't. How it happened I don't know. Where do we stand, does he know, what should I do- it's all a mess. Help me. Just a girl and a boy. Hate, adventure, fun and stupidity. School with mystery. Its like a roller coaster with the ups and the downs but the choice is your to scream or enjoys the ride.

Cover: I think the image on your cover is so beautiful. The birds and the sunset with the couple is pleasing to see. However, I don't really like the placement of your title. Your username/pename shouldn't take up more attention then the title. I think you should switch their places, adding the title above your name so that is what people look at first. Also, you should move your title up a bit, so it isn't just stuffed on the bottom of the cover and it should be prioritized. I suggest making your name a little smaller in font size. 7/10

Description: I don't like your description for the sole reason that it's not really a description. You say that her life is a story and she is going through these ups and downs with a boy. You also include the various emotions they (I'm guessing) go through in their relationship. This doesn't draw me in as a reader. We all have some type of distress when it comes to school. All of our lives have some story that we want to tell. How does this character differ from all the other girl characters out there on Wattpad? What's the problem in her life other than a boy and school? I'm assuming you want to be relatable, but this description was kinda cut short. 5/10

Content: I think your stories plot has potential. However, the way you execute it is a bit odd. Your sentences weren't vomit inducing or anything like that. They were just a bit awkward, and I found my self reading the same line multiple times to understand what you were portraying. You do have grammatical errors. You have to remember to use the handy dandy comma when you write your sentences. Your chapters are short so is it really in the teen fiction genre or should it be a short story? Also, I saw that you put that your story isn't just about a romance and stuff. You shouldn't have to justify yourself to your readers. They should be able to understand and enjoy your story and you should be able to write it smoothly without explaining yourself. Always write for your own pleasure. 7/10

Next Steps: Proofread your story and add those commas! Also, try to combine chapters or elaborate on details because your chapters are too short and the descriptions are vague at certain points.