Yay I just learned how to do print!! My first chapter was deleted and now I got to do another one

Foxleap leaped on the rock gazing over the territory. He notice scavengers circling something black on the ground. He signal his tail to Cinderheart and Brackenfur to stop. He warily crossed the open ground near shadowclan. Then he realized that the black thing was alive and  was a kitten.

As he crept closer he realized she was awake and stared at him.
"Hello" she echoed "Who are you?
 "I'm foxleap " he declared, he examined her she had huge talon marks scraping her back and when she tried to stand she fell again.
A shadowclan cat appeared "well.. Well.. What do we got here!" Applefur sneered his dappled fur showed muscles and his green eyes were menacing.
" tsk! Tsk! Mind you own business! " foxleap reported grabbing the kitten by the scruff he carried her away. Cinderheart was surprised when he came back. Foxleap thought Cinderheart is mine! And don't you forget it lionblaze!

This is the shortest chapter I ever made! I will write longer! Pressure me!!