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They showed the picture of Heer .

Kritika : kyu chahidi hai twanu ? Aur tussi loka nu eh kudi nahi milegi .

Goon 2 : kyu ji ki lagdi hai twadi yeh .

Kritika (shouted angrily) : beti hai meri aur kuch sunnae chahidiye twanu. Hun twada khatam ho gaya ho te nikalo jahan to .

Goons : lagda hai tu eve nahi manegi tera bhi kaam tamam karna padega . (to his partner) maaro isse kudi nu ...

Kritika (to herself) : hunne dasdiya enu te hote de puttar na hoye te .

Soon the goons came and started attacking Kritika but little did they know with whom they are fighting with . According to Kritika's mentality which we all know that she is a kinda feminist and her thoughts regarding the strength of a women/girls says that one women is equivalent to 4 boys . So being full of strength and with full of shaking anger boiling in her she just jumped into the pit of WAR .

Sahil : Varun bro what is this going on ? How can she alone fight with goons ?

Varun : don't know man ! And moreover those bloody goons are having knife in their hands. How will be able to save herself ?

Sahil : exactly man and she is only one and goons are almost 6.

Varun : i think we should help her .

Sahil : ya come lets go .

As soon as they stepped forward to help Kritika , Kritika saw them with the corner of her eyes and showed her left hand ✋ to stop them and then she made a first of her that hand moving her index finger out☝ and waving at them indicating them that she can handle the goons by herself and she wants them to stay away from it while glaring at the goons badly making them shivere a bit but they didn't showed up but as Kritika being Kritika she smirked seeing their expressions  .

Now whole college was there standing away from there but yet enjoying the silent WAR going on between Kritika and goons but here teachers are being scared regarding Kritika's health .

Now there in the hospital....

Heer was been taken to the OT immediately as per the command of Kritika as Kritika being a brilliant student , she was favorite to all the doctors and teachers .
Also looking at Heer's condition it was a way too risky for Heer to wait .

Akash , Jeet , Virat and Meera were standing there outside the OT tensed .

Meera : Akash ji didu ?

She said suddenly .

Akash : ohh god leave her please this is not the time .

Virat : bhai she is your sister how can you say that?

Meera : exactly .

Akash :  i am not worried for her but i am worried for the poor goons .

Meera , Virat , Jeet : huh ?

Akash : Jeet you stay here look after it and we all will look after the show .

Jeet : ok bhaiya ji but even i wanna see the show .

Akash : don't worry the show will be viral on the net ok.

Jeet : cool .

Soon trio went outside and joined the crowd standing near Varun and Sahil who are biting their nails while being tensed .

Akash : what happened till now boys ?

Sahil : nothing just the silent WAR going .

Akash : ohk .

Varun : what ok bhai here your sister is going mad by risking her life and also saying us to not to help her and you are so relax here ?

Akash : ya because she is in her real face today . She is an unstoppable women right now with a shivering anger standing in her .

Varun , Meera : what does that mean ?

Akash : wait and watch and Virat make this fight viral on social media live

Virat : ok

And here all averted their gaze on Kritika and goons only to see that Kritika breathing heavenly while moving looking at goons angerly like a tigress and the goons covering her in a circle .

Soon goons started to attack on her thinking that she a girl and would be weak for them who just entered the fire ring in her anger .

All closed their eyes not wanting to see Kritika being beaten up except Akash and Aliya .

Akash was eger to see his sister fighting bravely while Aliya was eger to see Kritika's defeat .

Soon they all heard a hitting sound and they all quickly opened their eyes and were shocked to see that Kritika hitting her head in backward direction breaking the nose of 1 goon who held her from behind .

This injury on their partner made goons angry and soon they started attacking Kritika furiously and Kritika started showing her KARATE MOVES ..

Yes KARATE MOVES !

This shocked Varun , Meera , Sahil , Virat .

Varun : she ..she knows Karate ?

Akash : hmm that's why i said i am worried for those poor goons .

Meera : who actually are you didu ?

Now they all can see that one goon took out the knife which scared the shit out of everyone but Kritika was being so cool .

Kritika was somewhere furious about the goon taking out the knife so when he attacked on Kritika . Kritika held hand tightly and was squeezing it in a very bad manner making the goon leave the knife but again at this goon was being furious and pushed her hard making her fall on her front and then he kicked her by her stomach making her roll .

Thus made all worried for her even Akash but seeing this Aliya was being so pleased .

But this thing of that bloody goon made Kritika's temper out of control and she got up and started beating the shit out of her .

(refer to this for her moves )

Soon the goons sensed that she will be out of control and this will be their death if they didn't went away from there so they quickly ran off from there being scared of Kritika .

And seeing this Kritika calmed a bit .

Then whole college went on giving the claps for her bravery but she didn't cared for it and quickly ran to their gang and said them to rush inside the hospital .

Virat ended the recording and posted on the social media with the caption "Stand for your right and fight for yourself not because being a girl you are weak but being a fighter stand for the truth and don't let any bad power to over power you .

Go girls FIGHT FOR YOUR FREEDOM!!"

In the hospital

All rushed to the OT and all sat there except Kritika whose tears were not letting her to be in peace .

Kritika was roaming gear and there being tense and all were getting worried for her as they all never say Kritika this weak .

Virat : Akash bhai why didu is crying so much and is loosing herself ?

Akash (looking at Kritika) : because she is her jaan , her life , her first child , her best friend , her sister, her only support system in the house inshort her everything.

Meera : you mean her doll ?

Akash nodded at her in acceptance .

Kritika : yes and if something will happen to her then Nitin will see my wrath .

Meera : ohh god this should not happen .

At that moment the OT light went off indicating that the operation has been done and there Kritika was praying to her Gannu ji to make everything all well .

Doctor Meenakshi came out and as soon as she came out Kritika went to her and asked her about Heer's condition .

Kritika : ma'am how is she now ? She is fine na nothing happened to her na ?

Meenakshi : Kritika first you calm down and you all come to my cabin write now .

Kritika :  yes mam sure . Jeet and Virat please be here .

Jeet & Virat : ohk .

Soon all went to Meenakshi's cabin .

Meenakshi : see Kritika and Akash , first let me tell you that she was 1 month pregnant .

Kritika : what ?

Meenakshi : yes she was but i am so sorry to say that , that baby was aborted and hour or so before only we took her to the OT .

Kritika and Akash and all present there exchanges the looks .

Meenakshi : and i am sorry to say that...huh.

Kritika : wh...what ma'am ? What are you sorry to say what?

Meenakshi : i am so sorry Kritika , Akash that she cannot conceive baby now every again in her life .

All looked so shocked and Kritika and Akash shattered .

Meenakshi : yes its true because when we were treating her we found purple - blue marks around her whole body and specially on her stomach which seems like someone kicked stomach badly and also used belts to hit her and she was also been pushed badly which hurted her Uterus and made her baby be aborted . And seeing her old scars i can say that she was being treated very badly ..i mean she was been under domestic violence.

Hearing the word of domestic violence Kritika went out of control and her anger reached at the peak .

Kritika : Bhai ?

Akash : haan .

Kritika : i want that bloody bastard Nitin in front of me in next 1 hr by hook or crook. Whatever he has done with my doll na after that i will not at all leave him ... Now he is gone.

Akash : Kritika please calm down . We can find other way as well na to get that bastard to his limit haan .

Kritika : no bhai why always girls have to fight back for their freedom haan ... Why? Bhai why ? People like Nitin thinks that girls are weak . Girls don't have that much power to fight back that's why they use innocent girls like my Heer , bhai he used her like a tissue and just threw it off . Is this the life of a girl she is so innocent to know what happening with her is right or wrong but  enough now . Now its him turn to suffer and bhai if you love Heer na you will not stop me because i am doing this for her justice not for mine.

Akash nodded because Heer was his another sister which he cannot think of loosing though she is his cousin sister his and Kritika's maasi's daughter .

Kritika : Varun ?

Varun : yes.

Kritika : your dad has the contacts of police right?

Varun : umm yes we have it .

Kritika : good then call him up, i wanna talk to him.

Varun : ohk .

Varun immediately called his dad .

Anand : hello , yes son how did you rememver me ?

Varun : hello dad , dad actually gere in the college a problem has occurred .

Anand : what ? What problem ?

Varun : that you will get to know with the help of social media but right now Kritika wanna talk to you .

Anand :ohk .

Varun handover the phone to Kritika .

Kritika :  namaste uncle . How are you ?

Anand :  namaste child , i an absolutely fine . How are you doing ?

Kritika :  not good uncle , right now i am shivering with anger boiling within me .

Anand : why child did Varun did something ?

Kritika(crying) :  no no uncle Varun didn't do anything actually the thing is my sister was been treated .... I..i mean she was going through a domestic violence by her husband and in laws and in that she lost her baby . I .. You understand na what i mean to say .

Anand : yes child i git it what you wanna say but please calm down and tell me what can i do for you ? What you want me to do?

Kritika : uncle i just want police permission to hit him like not more and ya i also want to make an FIR on him but before police take take him along with them i want to make him go through the same pain when he hit my sister badly . Please uncle i want to take the revenge from bastard like him and for that i need to take the law in my hands please uncle i beg you .

After thinking for sometime he agree with Kritika and said that her work will be done.

Suddenly the nurse came there .

Nurse : doctor that OT patient got conscious but is going crazy she is crying and banging her head to the wall , two boys are trying to stop her but she is being unstoppable please doctor come fast .

Hearing the "OT patient " all got alerted and ran off to there .

They reached there and the site they all saw couldn't take it but Kritika knew that it was not the time for showing any emotions but at that time her Heer needed her the most .

Kritika quickly ran to Heer and held her from her arms but no Heer just oushed her away without seeing her and just carry on with banging herself . Kritika again tried to go grab her but no she was again backfired and Kritika had only ine way left with her. She fulled Heer and slapped her which made Heer numb for few seconds and grabbing this opportunity Kritika immediately hugged her and made her face her as soon as Heer faced Kritika she started crying badly hugging her .

Kritika : bas baacha bas sabh theek ho jaega .... Shhhhh .... Mai hu na ... I am there with you na nothing will happen ok .... Your didu is with you na ...(enough child enough everything will be alright ....shh... I am there with you na )

Heer (crying) : didu ... Aaaahhhh ..huhuh .... Why didu ? Why my baby left me ? Why ? 😭😭.
Didu aapko pata hai ussne toh abhi duniya bhi nahi dekhi thi didu phir kyu ? (you know he didn't even see this beautiful world then why ?) Didu aap...aaoki pata hai Ni..Nitin ne na mere pet pe bohot zoor se maara ... Belt se bhi maara kyu? Kyunki mere baache ko gir..girane ke liye uss..use yeh baa..baacha nahi chahiye tha aur bhala woh kyu? Kyunki woh kisi aur se pyaar karta tha   (you know ...you know Nitin hit me on me stomach badly ... With belt also why? Because he didn't want this child and why that so ? Because he loved somebody else )

Kritika(: baacha you faced this much and you didn't even called me . Why ?

Heer :  Didu i wanted to call you but he broke my phone also and ...and you know he..he bad worded about you also ... He ..he said you "do kaudi ki ladki" di trust me i shouted and trued to protect myself and my baby but he... He mudered my baby and..and this nurse was saying that i can't conceive again ... Didu didu please say that this is not true please didu please🙏🙏

She said literally folding her hands infront of Kritika while bending down on her knees  .

(just look at Jigyasa singh's crying please ignore Akash and the words just focus on her crying reaction)

Seeing them all started crying .

Virat : Heer you shouldn't loose hope .... Only god knows the good for us na . We should trust on him right , he might have stored something more good for us haan .

Heer (crying) :  no he hadn't because if he would have then he wouldn't take away my baby from me and even if he took away then atleast he should have made me capable of conceiving again but no he didn't what else was there left for girl to take in when she can't be a mother . Why he took that precious thing that precious blessing from me why ? 

Akash came forward and hugged her both the sisters and cried his heart out and there Sahil, Jeet , Meera ,Varun and Virat also cried .

This scenario was seen by Varun and Virat's family along with the Principle who came to check on them and they were also having tears in their eyes and Shehnaaz being most emotional cried hugging Gautum  .

Kritika : shhhh enough Heer enough ... Its enough baach now you are safe and we will get you divorced by that monster and trust your didu she will not at all leave that bastard . I am there na .

Heer (scared and crying) : didu no ... No you will not fight with him he will also take you away from me i have only you didu as my family please ...please no i can't loose you as my child please didu please...

(guys actually Heer has no one as her dad expired on the time on the wedding day only and the mother expired 1 year ago so she had only Kritika and Akash as he support system basically Kritika who gave her the motherly feeling and love )

Kritika (wiping her tears) : shhh shhh baacha you don't need to be scared from him anymore and ya your didu is a sherni and you know that right . She will be fine .

Heer (shaking her head with scared expression) : no.. Didu .. No please ... Please don't go please....(started crying again ).

Kritika : acha acha acha ok ok fine i will not fight with him you come and sleep . Take some rest orelse your stitches will open please come and i am here only with you i am not leaving you ok .

Kritika made her lie on the hospital bed with her head on her lap and started caressing and pressing her head and Heer hugged her tight through her waist as she was scared of Nitin still as she thought that he will kill her even along with her didu .

Even Kritika hugged her tightly and started crying silently looking at everyone and seeing her crying badly Meera came to her and hugged her crying while rest Sahil , Virat, Varun and Jeet went to console Akash who was getting shattered seeing his sister's going through alot .

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Promo : Kritika's faceoff with Nitin and Heer still being in shocked .

I will not set any target because i don't want to judge mine this part ...

I was literally crying writing this off because this same story i have seen infront of me in the real life just in front i mean i saw her bangibg her head and crying for almost 3 months but its obviously that not exactly i said in the story but ya the reason and the husband hitting was same . I was too small that time i clearly remember that i went to her house during my summer vacation and saw that all were trying to keep her happy but she was continuously crying but i didn't know the reason but seeing her cry literally pained my heart so to distract her i went near her and said that please help me in making my project . She first denied me but then when elder pressurized her to do that for me and also to teach me the craft she did it forcefully while crying but made me learn the way . When i rolled the paper it went wrong and with the pout i showed it to her that it went wrong teach me again , she left her smile out to me after so long . That was enough for me .

Just want to say my heart out . If boys are reading my story then please never do this kind to behaviour with tour partner please i beg you 🙏🙏🙏. If you love someone then just say them no need to treat them and do such kind of behaviour pleaseee .

#staystrongheer