Um, hello

Well let me start this off, I wasn't dead.

Family issues and depression have been hitting hard but we all gotta chug along am I right?

But this is a quick question to those that have read through this story. This was the first story I ever wrote, wasn't thinking it would go far and didn't overcheck things.

With more people commenting about the daft mistakes I have made, I have this running through my head.

Should I rewrite the story?

What i would do is I would either delete the part with an updated version or just write them and place UPDATED at the end.

What do you guys think?