Review For: @spoopylapis

[Name] Cupid Breakheart
[Age] 20s
[Pony Type] Unicorn
[Colors] Her coat is a light orange, her mane and tail are two different shades of pink and her eyes are red
[Cutie Mark/Talent] Her cutie mark is three hearts - Two of them are joined by a line, but the other has a crack through the middle - Her talent is matchmaking, but no matter what she does, somepony always ends up getting hurt
[Family] Bloom Wilt (Sister, 20s, Pegasus)
Lollipop (Mother, 50s, Pegasus)
Dewdrop (Father, 50s, Unicorn)
[Weaknesses] Performing strong magic, she's not too organized and she gets mad too quickly
[Quirks] Her quirks are swishing her tail when she's nervous, and blinking more than average when she's talking to somepony
[Backstory] Cupid got her cutie mark after setting up two students in her class. She pursued a career as a writer, one of her hobbies, but it didn't work out. So she set up a matchmaking business, but with awful results. Because of the many relationship problems she had caused, she has been banned from many parts of Equestria. Giving up, Cupid went to live with her sister Bloom in a village on the outskirts of Ponyville and decided go take her job more seriously. Today she works as a relationship counselor, and couldn't be happier.

[Feedback]
First off, I really like the play on words in her name. It's really interesting to me, and I think it's a captivating feature of the character! I also really like how her cutie mark represents her talents very well, without making it too too complicated. I really enjoy how you kept her weaknesses and quirks realistic to the point where someone can relate to her a lot. I like her backstory, though it does bring up a few questions for me - for instance, what inspired her to pursue a job involved in relationships? And really, why would her simple mistakes lead to her being banned? To me, that just seems a little too extreme for a few badly-matched-couples. Other than that, I really enjoyed your character - great job!

[Mary-Sue Percentage]
0.5% - I wouldn't say she's Mary-Sue, in particular, but there are just a few holes and questionable events in her backstory.
@spoopylapis
Hope this helps!

10/19/2016 - OC 3/5 Month of October