Review For: @Nic363

[Name] Ocean Breeze
[Age] 16
[Pony Type] Changeling (Normally takes the form of a Pegasus)
[Colors] Ocean colored coat, white and mint mane and tail, deep blue grey eyes
[Cutie Mark/Talent] A black trident
[Family] Moth Eaten - Big Sister
Cookie Spice - Little Sister
[Weaknesses] Her dramatic flair - Shyness - She gets confused easily
[Quirks] Stutters when she's nervous - Waves her wings around madly when she's talking emotionally
[Backstory] Ocean used to be called 'Mothi'. When she was a young filly, she was teased by a few other Changelings for wanting to be a pony, but that didn't make her give up her dream. So one day, while disguising herself as a pegasus, she snuck away and found Ponyville. There, she met a few new friends and took the name 'Ocean Breeze'. In Ponyville, she also found her little sister, Cookie Spice, who had disappeared from the Hive and was thought to be dead. She has grown to like her new form, and she tends to stay like that in public, though she acts like a Changeling around her sister. She tries to keep both of her lives separate, and she created her cutie mark based on what she was good at (and to fit in). But she is still the same Changeling as she always was. She's currently dating Oren Nye, a unicorn who likes sleeping, nature, and is extremely clumsy.

[Feedback]
Overall, I like her character, but it is once again the overly popular theme of a Changeling who wishes to leave the Hive and live as a normal pony.

[Mary-Sue Percentage]
17% - Once again, just the cliche theme of a wannabe pony Changeling.
@Nic363
Hope this helps!

12/25/2016 - OC 5/5 Month of December