it hasn't been long but i'm already doing a redraw of it??

(ignore the shitty hands plEASE I BEG YOU)

but here's the original if you're too lazy to go back to the first book

it's from the 12th of april so, yeah, hasn't been that long

but the things that bothered my was the anatomy, the lack of hands because they're supposed to be gloves... the one that have parts for your fingers to go into, and the lack of direction because her hair and clothes are just going everywhere even though she's supposed to be floating ; i just wanted to put some direction of wind in the drawing so everything would go in one direction because i'm bothered by the lack of direction hahah ;;

also the shading bothered me too ;u; because i was getting used to lining and hadn't shaded since what? my last style?

also i can't stop listening to for forever and im angry