I know I said I wouldn't change her book but she had a few grammar and spelling mistakes that I found... yeah I didn't get all of them but I did fix most. Tell me if you find any in my chapters or her chapters so I can fix it. It just really bothers me.

Okay. Here I go!
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A thick fog had laid thick across the Willows camp. It covered the grass and leaves in a thick dew. It sun had not yet risen.

In the twisted thorny bramble laid a few wolves, curled up in separate nests. Error laid in the very back of the den. His chest slowly rising and falling. It had been a rather long night for him. He just needed a bit of rest.

At the entrance a shadowy figure stood and gently called into the den. "Error! Error come here please." They said hushly. Error groaned a bit in protest but got up anyway. He let out a small yawn and carefully stepped over his den mates.

His dark muzzle slid out of the bramble entrance of the hunters den. His golden eyes locking with dark icy blue ones. "Reaper. What do you want?" He huffed. A bit of worry nagged him. Am i in trouble?

Reaper only smiled and nodded for him to follow him to his den. Error slid out of the brambles, hissing a bit as a thorn snagged his fur, and followed his leader to the large Willow that made Reapers den. The solid black wolf slid through the roots and disappeared underneath. Error followed him in, his head down to not hit the roof.

Error sat down at the entrance as Reaper settled in beside his nest. What peaked his interest was Geno who sat in the nest. A scowl on his face. Error glanced a Reaper nervously. "What's this about?"

Reaper smiled, "Error, as you know spring has finally taken over. The pray is running in heavy numbers again," he looked at Geno who was mumbling to himself. "But... that means the DarkWoods are more of a threat now that they can get there strength back. And in case of another attack, we need new, skilled hunters." Error leaned in. "What are you saying."

Reaper turned and nudged Geno. Geno growled, grief and anger shining in his eyes. Reaper frowned at his reaction. Geno looked over at Error and sighed. "Goth is old enough to.... become a to-be..... we want you to be his mentor." He frowned. Errors eyes widened, his tail thump the ground a few times showing his happiness. "R-really? You want me to be a mentor?" Error stood. Geno suddenly snarled making him sit back down in alarm.

"Yes. Only because I trust you with my baby, and he seems to like you the most." Geno snapped before standing up and thrusting his muscle into Error face. "But if anything happens to him a swear to the sky wolves I'll rip out your throat and feed it to the crows!"

Error bowed his head in understanding, "I promise to protect him at all costs." Reaper gently licked his mates cheek before facing Error. "So you'll mentor him?" Error sat up and nodded. "Of corse I will, thank you for giving me this opportunity." Error smiled. Reaper nodded. "Then we'll have the ceremony at sun high. After the dawn patrol and hunters are back." Reaper smiled happily. Geno nodded in slight approval.

Reaper soon dismissed Error to talk to his mate. Error slid out of the den and gazed around. The sun had begun to shine over the forest, clearing out most of the fog.

Trotting to the hunters den he couldn't help hum in delight.