this is my first fanfiction so plz don't hate

*after school*

I met this new guy by my brother garroth his name was Laurence he was so handsome even better than my brothers he couldn't stop looking at me I started blushing and then out of no where " why are you blushing mackenzie?" garroth said I was quiet for a second and then I yelled "ITS BECAUSE OF LAURENCE!' I ran home and locked my bedroom door and then I hear a knock on my door I knew who it was until garroth threated to knock my door down