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~Become A Demon Completely~

"Queen? Are you sure? He might be coming here." Nandini said looking outside the window.

"I am not sure, but Manik or Jayden is not the one who gives up easily on anything, mainly on you." Queen soul said.

Nandini turned to her,"Can I know the reason why you told me to leave with the king, to avoid Manik?" 
Queen soul looked at her, yes when the conversation going on queen soul spoke in her head to choose to go with Raman, which Nandini as is it.

"Because it's needed." Queen soul said.

"Why?"

"Exactly after 24 hours, is the day I died.." the queen soul said, shocked Nandini.

"What?! So??"

"The only day, I could kill the person who destroyed my life and my child. I won't leave him." The Queen soul said angrily.

"But..Manik didn't do it wantly. He was not in the right state of mind." Nandjni spoke to his side, and the queen soul looked at her angrily.

"I know, but someone behind it. Manik can be manipulated easily when it comes to me.'' The Queen soul said angrily.

Nandini looked at her, "What happened exactly?" The Queen's soul looked at her.

Flashback

"Nandu, are you sure?" Manik said to Nandini who was dressed behind the waterfalls. 

"Manik Malhotra I will kill you, if you ask any other questions." Nandini shouted, Manik palmed his ears, bit his tongue.

~She never listen.~ Jayden said, rolling his eyes. When they feel a beautiful smell in air, turned to see Nandini only to make him numb. 

~She fucking planning to kill us.~ Jayden murmured looking at Nandini up and down, who walked near when in white grown which is off shoulder, veil over her head, blocking her face.

"Manik..Manikkkk." his trance broken, Nandini smirked, circling her hands around his neck, Nandini just looking at her.

"Planning to kill me." He asked.

"Is my palm working?" She asked, leaning towards his lips. He pulled her closer to his chest, making her body touch her.

"Totally.." smashing his lips with her, smoothing it deeply, chewing it. Nandini hit his chest making him break the kiss, he glared at her.

"First marriage, then you can have your kiss.." Nandini said.

~Only kiss..~ Jayden smirked, kissing her neck, Nandini giggled.

"More then..come." Nandini pulled Manik to Clift top, she looked at the sky and prayed to moon goddess approval, Manik just stood casually admiring her.

Stars shining in the sky, soon a shooting star came which Nandini was waiting for, she smiled and turned to Manik.

"Manik...i think she came approval." Nandini said, standing in front of him.

"I don't need her approval, what we are going to do is a big thing. Just promise me, whatever happens you will be with me always." Manik said, Nandini smiled and held his both hands together.

"I promise Manik Malhotra, till my death I will be with you." Nandini said, Manik smiled, forward his hands, soon two rings appeared, Nandini took one and another Manik.

First Manik make her wear one and Nandini did, "I promise." Both murmured and joined their lips into a deep love kiss. Soon climate change, thunder was striking and made them separate.

"Nandini.." Manik wanted her tough eyes, Nandini shifted her hair one side , and showed her neck to him.

"Mark me..and make me yours." Her voice held determination, Manik sighed and opened his mouth, where his fang came out, pulled Nandini closer, kissed her neck where he was going to bite.

"I love you Jaana.." he whispered and bit her, digging his fang more, making her scream in pain. After a few minutes he pulled out, Nandini held Manik's shoulder tightly, keeping his head on his chest. Manik kissed her neck, and saw his mark turning into a devil Mark.

~Are you fine?~ Jayden asked, Nandini nodded and looked at him with a smile. He smiled, laid her down on the floor, came on top of her, cupped her face and started giving fishy kisses, making her feel like food.

"Make me yours.." Nandini said, removing his coat. 

"Your father will be burning now.." Manik said, making her giggle. He started kissing her bare shoulder, his hands went behind her gown, unzipped it, traveling his kiss down her cleavage, making her moan in pain.

~Fucking gorgeous.~ Jayden said, looking her bare body, made her blush. Manik gives hickey all over her body. Manik tore his dress stood in his glory, made her blush turned around.

"When my nandu become so shy?" He lay above her, whispering in her ears, biting her earlobe.

"Manik.." Nandini became impatient because of his teasing, he smirked.

"What happened Jaana?" He asked innocently, Nandini glared at him, he made her make her body burning in desire.

"Make me yours, Manik Malhotra.." she said loudly.

He kissed above her head,"Sure Mrs. Malhotra, your wish is my command." He said, his finger teasing her pussy, held his member in the center of hee. Looked at Nandini in confirmation, who nodded. He entered her slowly making her moan in pain, tears rolled down her eyes, which, whipped by Manik, kissed her cheek.

~Jaana, relax..loosen up..~ Jayden said, she nodded and nude him to continue. Manik moved inside her in a rhythm, continued kissing her body, Nandini just lay down moaning in pain which turned into pleasure. 

That night an unexpected one happened,a demon and angel united which created a history.

"Love you." Nandini murmured, breathing heavily, caressing his cheek bone.

He turned his face to her, smiled,"Love you jaana.." he kissed her forehead. Both lay down absorbing each other.

"Manik..Did you feel something is coming?" Nandini said sitting hugged a Manik coat around her naked body. Manik heard someone coming from afar, immediately made Nandini wear her gown and he wore his clothes and stood up.

Soon Nandini's father and Lucifer came into view with demons and angels at their side. Nandini held Manik's arms tightly.

"Nandini, what is this??What the hell have you done?" Nandini's father shouted.

"Papa, I married him. What's wrong?" Nandini said, adding fuel to their anger.

"Married, are you mad?? You married a demon..It's not right. Come to me." Raman shouted, Nandini nodded and hid behind Manik.

"Manik, for this only I grown you up. Leave her." Lucifer order.

"I can't, I love her and married her. I won't leave her for someone." Manik said.

"You spoiled my Nandini mind and trapped her..You bloody.." Raman shouted and cast a spell on manik, which didn't hit Manik as he is powerful.

"Huh?? Your poor spell don't work on me." Manik chuckled sadly. Raman looked at Lucifer who nodded.

"Nandini, listen beta...You have the rules. Please come to me beta." Raman said sadly, Nandini came and stood in front of Manik.

"Papa, please i love him, want to spent my life with him. We will assure nothing will happen..i.." before Nandini completely heard Manik's painful voice.she turned to see manik on ground, some imaginary circle tied him in his place.

"Manik...ahhh.." Nandini tries to touch him, but her hands Brun. Raman rushed near her and pulled her.

"Pappaaa..leave me...Manik??" Nandini shouted and try to remove his hands but his father held tightly. Lucifer walked near Manik, kneel down beside him.

"Manik, don't do any stupid..come with us..leave her behind." Lucifer said, Manik glaring at him, looked at Nandini who was struggling and crying to her father.

"If you do come with us, he's going to die.." Raman shouted, looking at the manik who was screaming. It's Lucifer who controls Manik which both don't know, as in Manik's view he is a good father to Manik.

"Come..." Raman pulled her with him, and Nandini turned to Manik for the last time.

"Remove this..i want her.." Manik shouted, which echoed through the whole forest.

"Manik, I don't want to hurt you but understand....give time..when time comes, you will get her. Relax." Lucifer said, remove his spell. Manik stood in the air, holding Lucifer's neck.

"I want her.?She is mine....only mine.." Manik growled.

"You will..for that you have to be strong and take the throne." Lucifer said.

Manik left his neck, remembering Nandini words, "Don't take the throne Manik, if you did..then you will be fully a demon who won't be having goodness in you. So please."

Manik nodded no,"I won't take the throne..i need my Nandini." Disappeared from there. 

Lucifer stood in anger,"Will see..."

Nandini was locked in her room for days. She can't escape or contact Manik through mindlink which was painful for both. After marking and loving each other, a couple can't stay away from each other.

Both Are in pain physically and mentally too, both need each other. Manik was chained in basement because his anger can't be controlled, he will destroy all, so he himself caged in chain and hurting himself. All demons felt bad, said to Lucifer who said them to not do anything.

"Ahhh..What happened to me?" Nandini washed her mouth nth time, she threw up all, held her stomach in pain. 

"Moon goddess....ah.." Nandini sat holding her stomach in pain. Something he realised, rushed to the mirror, lifted her stomach, touched it, closing her eyes, and soon tears rolled down.

"Omg!!...omg!!..moon goddess..my..my child.." Nandini plamed her mouth in happiness, hugged herself.

"Thankq...Thankq....Manik..He should know this..But how...Manik please come..back..i need you." First time, she cried..for her love.

After days, she was eating and taking care of herself for the Abby at least made all suspicious in angel said to Raman who talked to Nandini who didn't say anything.

Bang!!

Nandini woke up from her sleep to see a dark soul standing in front of her, which made her frown.

"Manik.?" She called, and the figure walked near when she saw his face, which was clearly Manik. She rushed into his arms, hugged him tightly.

"Thank God..Manik.....I thought I never meet you.." Nandini said, cupping his face but frowning at his neutral face.

"What happened?"

~Let's go from here..we will say.~ Jayden said, Nandini frowned and went with him. Both landed on a clifftop where they got married and united.

"Manik..let's leave from here...we can't be here anymore.." Nandini said, Manik just stood looking at her.

"Manik are you hearing me.." she asked, Manik nodded,"We will leave forever." 

She frown,"What?..Ok..i have to say that...I am pre..." Her voice stopped, looked at her stomach which was stabbed by a specially made knife, and looked up at Manik in shock.

"I am sorry Jaana..we can't live with each other..So.." he stabbed her again, made her shout in pain, her pain changed into an angry one.

"I won't forgive you for this..I hate you...You..ahh.." Nandini said holding her stomach, Manik smiled painfully and stabbed himself, and jumped from Cliff holding unconscious Nandini.

Flashback end

Nandini sat in tears,"I was so happy to get a life in me..and wanted to start a new life but he..he destroyed it." The Queen soul said in tears and her fist tightened.

Nandini stood beside her but couldn't touch,"Don't cry..please..your baby will come soon." 

The Queen's soul looked at her and said,"I know, I'm waiting for it." A Smile touched her stomach.

Suddenly the climate changed, both moved near the window to see clouds turning into dark one, thunder striking near the demon side.

"What's happening?" Nandini asked in confusion.

Queen soul turned angered,"Manik.." Nandini turned to her in anger.''He took the throne.."

"So..what might happen now?" Nandini asked.

"He will be fully a monster...Who can't be controlled. The little human in him is completely a demon now." Queen soul said.

"But Jack is a Werewolf na..he might not change." Nandini said, in shock and trust, Jack might stop them.

"Which I believe too..Jack can stop them from doing back..But demons can't be stopped.. Mainly Jayden." Queen soul said. Nandini turned to the window in worry.

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Demon world.

Manik is completely covered with black, a long coat dragging behind him, standing with a crown above his head, his dangerous aura increasing his dangerous attitude now.

~i seriously hate this idea of yours~ Jack said.

~shut up..if you need Nandini~ Jayden warned him, Jack blocked him angrily. Manik didn't stop them as now he was fully angry, wanted Nandini back.

"I am happy Manik, at last you took the throne.." Lucifer said, Manik smirked evilly.

"Even I was waiting," he said.

"Waiting? What have you planned?" Lucifer asked in confusion.

"Need to visit one place.." he stood up smirking, his fastest speed he was in front of God castle. Demon can't enter the castle.

Mohini and Raman came out to see him. Seeing him standing with so much anger, Manik has burned the whole area around the castle. People try to stop that but manik in anger kills everyone.

"Lord do something, he is killing everyone."Mohini  said, Raman just seeing Manik. Manik smirked at Raman, pulled a person to him, Manik bit the person's neck hard while eyeing at Raman, pulled his head separately and threw away shocked Mohini, holding Raman hands in fear.

After a few minutes the place was filled with blood, fire was burning. Manik is standing and smirking.

" If you try to keep her away from me this only happens. Don't worry she will come back to me and take me to my place forever. Till that do whatever you want."Manik smirked and left from there in his speed.

"Lord, he came here means will take our daughter again."Mohini cried seeing Manik's dangerous acts.

"He won't.." Raman said, turning to Nandini who saw all in fear and tears.

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