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First part...do inline comments..line by line comments

Important:- Jack sentence will be underlined
Jayden sentence will be in bold..others will be in normal form.

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~God is happy and demons is crying~

A dark night, whole city empty, no even a single person on road, no shops open, because all scared for their life. For five years, they are many mysterious death of some people, girls missing out, many cases were reported, made all scared to core so after 7 no one come out their house. Except clubs, local gang hideout places, hospitals and emergencies nothing will be open.

"Uff, so Awesome baby..." Abhi trying to catch Mutkhi who is fully drunk and dancing on the floor, they are in a nightclub, owned by them, enjoying their Sunday.

"Baby, it's enough..You are high." Abhi said snatching the bottle from hed, who pouted.

"Pleach, one more.." Mukthi said, Abhi nodded strictly.

"No ways..come.." Abhi pulled her to the vip area, where cabir and Navya romancing. He pushed her on the couch, and sat beside her whining like a kid.

"What happened?" Navya asked, caressing Cabir's hair who was busy kissing her neck.

"She already drank two bottles, it's the third. I am trying to stop her but....Mukthi." Abhi shouted seeing Mukthi trying to touch the drinks bottle, in inhuman speed Abhi was beside her, pulled the bottle from her.

"I will say to your brother, then next time he won't even allow inside the club." Mukthi glared at Cabir who was smirking.

"If you...i won't let you come near your mate." Mukthi said, Cabir growled loudly and made all flinch back in the bar, except Abhi, Mukthi and Navya.

"She is mine." Cabir said possessively cup Navya's face and kissed her, Mukthi rolled her eyes and hugged Abhi who caressed her hair.

Werewolf are so possessive for their mate, so damn possessive.

"Where is he?" Abhi asked Cabir, who broke the kiss and looked at Abhi.

"Same as usual, quenching his thirst." Navya said, looking at Abui who sighed.

"Ask him to stop killing them at least...It's increasing." Abhi said in worried.

"As if he 's going to listen."-- Nick(Cabir wolf) said.

"That's right, but he has to understand it." Cabir said.

"Navya, any possibility.. at least now he can get a mate." Abhi asked Navya who thought something deep.

"Don't know yaar, it's been 9 years, he didn't get still. We got our mate at least at 19 years old.. Don't know what moon goddess decided for him." Navya said sadly, Cabir and Abhi glanced at each other and tried to mind link Manik who blocked both and enjoying themselves there.

In one dark room in that same club, moon light is the only source there. A man sat drinking something, looking out the dark sky. His face has no emotions, his heart and soul feel nothing, living like a dead soul, he is actually yes. For two births, he was alone, all alone in this world, which slowly changed him into a monster. He hates this loneliness but he can't come out of this too.

Two hands crawled around his body from behind, made him smirk, turned his face sideways to see a girl in short dress, maybe a waitress at the bar, seducinhim.

"You want anything, handsome." she asked in a not so sweet voice.

"Are you new here??" He ignored her words, and asked This made her frown, nodded yes which he got to know without turning back.

"That's why you came to me." He said, smirking, took a glass of wine and sat on the couch, like a king.

"What can you do?" He asked, drinking his wine.

"Anything.." she said, rubbing her arms, seducing.

"First make me hard..then I will think." Manik said, she smirked and switched on music, walked to the pole, and danced. His attention went somewhere else, then seeing her.

~Chii, you see this dance and all...~ A voice heard in his head, made him roll his eyes.

"Who asked you to see?" He asked his wolf, Jack.

~Manik...let's get out, she is so bad. I don't like her.~ Jack said.

~No Manik, I need blood...I am starving from morning..~ Jayden jumped from nowhere into his head.

~Who even called him? You both killed many girls, at least leave her~ Jack said.

~Aww!!goodie boy, Like you survive on food..I need blood to survive, shut up and get lost, dog.~ Jayden said.

~Don't call me dog, you disgusting bat.~ Jack growled at him.

~You...

"Shit up, and get lost, you both.." Manik blocked both, giving him a headache. Jack and Jayden are part of him, but both torture him more. One is completely opposite to each other, fighting like siblings but one thing is common is, they want mags even though manik's and Jayden hate his mate, Jack is adamant to find it.

Mate one word, make Manik angry. It has been 9 years, he is 27 now, not even finding his mate who needs to be found by his age 18. But that fucking moon goddess testing his patience.

"Come here." Manik said rudely, made that girl stop her dance and walked near him, rubbing his chest, slowly, sitting on his lap.

"Can we go to bed.." she whispered, biting his earlobe, Jack made a yuck face and blocked himself.

"We will....But you didn't made me hard." His words made her embarrassed.

That girl noticed his black eyeball, turned into red, whole eye changed completely black, made her gasp in fear, and tried to get up, but Manik pinned her against a wall nearby.

"Afraid? Don't be.....I just like to taste you.." His fang came out, Jayden took full control over Manik, girls crying seeing his change.

"Si..sir..please...leave me...Sir...ahhhh..." She shouted, when felt a sharp pain in her neck, her blood being sucked out of her body, soon her lifeless body fell on his lap.

He pulled back and rubbed his bloody mouth, "Not nice, but ok blood."

~ After ducking 3 liter blood, see what he is saying~ Jack said rolling his eyes.

~did I call you?~ Jayden asked, laying that girl on bed, who became unconscious.

~No..But JD stopped... Don't kill her.~ Jack warned him, but Jayden already slit her neck, bloody coming out, which he fed on.

~God!! You never change monster.~ Jack shouted.

~Stop speaking like Saint...she got what she deserve.~ Jayden said, give control back to Manik.

~What? Manik what he blabbering~ Jack

"This girl sold her two younger siblings to someone for money..They were slaves in some factory..that's what Jayden is saying." Manik said, straightening his clothes, and walked out.

~Don't know how he found the reason to kill all.~ Jack said, hitting his head.

~ Because I am smarter than you, dog.~ Jayden smirked.

~Get lost..~ Jack growled and blocked himself, Manik sighed at these two kids.

He walked to see Navya and Mukthi sleeping on their partners respectively, Cabir and Abhi having a mind talk.

"Killed her?" First question Cabir asked made him smirk.

"Capo, stop it.... cases are increasing which are not good for you or people too." Abhi said softly.

"We spoke about this many things...stop it..and let's leave.. Tomorrow an important meeting is there.." Manik said and walked out, Cabir and Abhi sighed.

"He never listen.." Cabir said, picking up Navya, and walked out. Abhi picked Mukthi and went behind him, and drove to their mansion.

Manik 's life goes on, morning work, night blood lust, he can't change himself from his routine, not unless he finds his mate. He never slept with any girl, because Jd or Jack never allowed him too, they need their mate for this, even though JD hates his mate like him, it's against rules sleeping around. He even feels disgusted to sleep around, so only for blood he touches any girl.

People call him devil and monster, for the Werewolf world he is Alpha and for the demon world he is the king of demons, but for him, he is a loser who doesn't have anything. But he deserves it, for what he did. But he didn't feel sorry or felt bad for it, as he did what he felt.

He looked at the dark sky, which even calm just like his mind, "wherever you are now, I hope we will meet soon, not for love, ust to make sure and show you how much pain I went through.." he thought about his mate, and stood looking out whole night, he rarely sleep.

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Next morning

Far away from the place Manik stayed, there is a beautiful mansion decorated beautifully, but it's beautiful only from outside, inside it's covered by darkness.

"Ahh..." A girl got up, holding her head which was in pain, even her body. She looked around, seeing her dress scattered on the ground, here and there. Last night a scene came to mind, made her cry at her fate, and looked beside to see a man sleeping peacefully after destroying her life.

She got up, covered her body with clothes and walked slowly to the bathroom, closed it and leaned on it.

She wants to cry, shout, scream and make him stop it, but she can't..She loved him and married, never thought in her lifetime her love will change like this.

Bang!!!

"I don't have time... fresh up and come out." She startled hearing his shout, quickly took bath, controlling from screaming As her wounds hurt. Her body is full of buries, which make her more ugly.

She wore a saree and came out to see her husband standing with an angry face, making her step back in fear, "Princess needs an invitation for all, go and do breakfast..," he shouted and went inside the bathroom, slamming the door hard.

Nandini sighed, saying that she didn't get beat and walked to the kitchen, to see the maid cooking, cleaning. She smiled at them, wished good morning, and made breakfast.

Every maid feels pity on her, all morning they see new bruises on her face or body. Nandini knew this but didn't say anything.

It doesn't mean she is a weak girl, she try to fight back, change him, nothing worked. She was broken when he said she married her for money.
she tried to complain to the police but didn't take any action as he is rich, and he warned her, if I say anything to anyone about his behavior to me, he will kill my parents and Pihu which I don't want. I stopped speaking with them, for this.

"Let me alone face it..I don't want anyone to get hurt. I found the hell myself." Nandini thought, arranging everything. Varun came down in his expensive suit, speaking on the phone.

"No..I need that appointment... meeting him is a big thing yaar. ....no..i need it...It's a benefit for our company...Ok..make a meeting with Manik Malhotra..."

Nandini shocked hearing Manik Malhotra, he is Capo of Mafia..Who don't know. She shivered hearing his name, why is Varun doing busy with that devil.

"Nandiniiiii.." her trance was broken, looking at Varun who was glaring at her.

"So...sorry.." she murmured and served breakfast, he glared and ate, talking on the phone. Nandini's toof is nervous.

Varun got up after breakfast, saw Nandini standing nervously, "Varun.."

"What?"

"Hmm...?can I ask you something?" Nandini asked slowly

"I asked what?? Don't waste my time." Varun shouted.

Nandini flinched back, "Hmm...You said Manik Malhotra na.. Don't deal with him. He is a criminal..please..."

Varun smirked, walked near her, made her more nervous. And scared he going to beat her,"So worried for me?"

Nandini looked into his eyes which she loved once but now, she feels nothing except pain.

"Ahhh..." He held her hair tightly.

"Don't fucking out your nose in my business.....I will do any deal with anyone, so shut up. And you know many things about him..Did you and him any night...?" Varun asked, smirking, and made her numb. Did he just say me and Manik had.....??

Nandini in anger pushed him and ran up, leaving Varun behind smirking.

Nandini sat on bed crying, "Ayyappa!!how could he even think that?? I loved only him, how could he?...I thought at least he respects me as his wife now..no..he thinks of me as lsut who sleeps aorund... God!!!That Manik Malhotra is the devil..he will kill people... I said in concern but he..." Nandini said, crying.

"Let him kill varin..we can be happy at least.." Nandini's subconscious said, made Nandini shocked.

"Killing someone is a crime.." Nandini said

"That evil like Varun needs to die..for torturing you.." subconsciously shouted at her, making her quiet.

She never wants anyone to die, just she wants to leave this place which has been suffocating for her for two years.

She slept in tiredness, woke up in the evening, hurriedly finished dinner, as Varun might be any time.

She arranged everything, but was startled when she was picked up in the air by someone.

"Ahhh...Varun leaves me..." Nandini shouted, but Varun laughed.

"Varun please...my head is spinning." Nandini said, holding her head, Varun kept her down.

"I am so happy.. finally I got what I want.. finally.." Nandini saw Varun so happy. This Varun only she saw two years back, fallen for.

"Wow!! What is it?" Nandini asked, smiling.

"I finally got a deal with Manik Malhotra company..It's great things for us." Nandini smiled after hearing it. She doesn't feel good about it, Manik Malhotra rules this city, has power across the world, and hurts people which she hates.

"Oh...fine." Nandini murmured.

"Fine? That much only, I need something else wifey." Varun said, kissing her neck, removing her pallu from her waist. Nandini bit her lips knowing what was coming next.

"Hmm...not today please.." Nandini said, but Varun was nowhere going to listen. Varun picks her up and moves to their room, and does this job, which results in Nandini in pain.

It's her fate, she wants someone to save her from this but she lost hope, that for two years she has been crying and praying.

(A/N:- I won't be explaining it, as I can't see my Nandu in pain....all happens for a reason..wait and read🙏..no bashing or negative comments.)

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"Bhai, why did you accept that low class company deal?" Mukthi asked Manik.

"What deal?" Cabir asked, concentrating on his food.

"That Varun Singhania deal...Shit i hate him man..like he was seeing mutkhi as if he will eat her.. pervert." Navya said with a disgusted face, her words made everyone angry.

"Did he touch you?" Abhi asked, Mukthi nodded no.

"Manik..cancel it." Abhi said to Manik who was drinking something in a big glass, which contains blood.

"I can't...I need this company.." Manik said, casually.

"You can take that company without making a deal." Cabir siad rolling his eyes.

"Manik Malhotra likes to play..let's play this game.." Manik said, all sighed.

All having dinner, when suddenly Navya held her head, all became alert.

"Baby, what happened?" Cabir held her.

"Navya, you see anything?" Mukthi asked, within a second she was beside Navya.

"I ..see something.." Navya siad holding her head.

"What is it?"

"Don't know...i hear a crying sound...someone in pain.. calling for help...I can't see clearly.." Navya said looking at four, Manik had a frown reaction.

"Wait....I see something....It's a girl...Who is crying...She is showing her back, wearing white dress.." Navya said, looking into Manik's eyes.

"What connection is there?? Who is she?" Abhi asked in confusion.

~we got that same dream Manik...~ Jayden murmured in shock, making Jack and Manik shocked. Ecen all.

"Manik...You know this?" Cabir asked, Manik stood up immediately, running out in inhuman speed into the forest. His heart is uneven, can't think properly about anything.

How Navya got the vision of the same Dream he saw one week back, he heard someone calling for help but didn't know why he was getting it. Soon the sky changed into the same and started raining.

Manik stood on top of Clift, looking at a city which is so silent,"Where are you?"

Nandini lying on bed, covered by a thin sheet after a hard night, her eyes looking at the rain which is flowing suddenly...how a day's climate often changes.

But she heard from her mother, if rain comes, God is happy and demons are crying... Nandini always wondered why demon's cry.

Is any demon in pain, other than her??

"I thought I was only living in hell..but the demon itself is in pain?" Nandini chuckled sadly, looking at the rain.

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