Ladybug's POV:
"Cat Noir, try to distract Critic, while I try and figure out where the akuma is," I said. " On it me lady, replied Cat Noir. "Hey Critic want to interview this!" said Cat Noir to Critic (Miss Shammock). "Let's see what luck Lucky Charm has to bring, I thought to myself. " Lucky Charm!" I shouted. "Two spring!" I said. "What am I supposed to do with two springs?" I question my self under my breathe. "How can two springs help us?" said Cat Noir. "I'm not sure," I replied. "While you think of something, I have a stray cat on the loose and I think she needs a leash." said Cat Noir and dashing through the streets and began jumping on rooftops. "Hmmmm!" I said and began looking around. Then suddenly, a TV in an appliance store turned on. "Great, she can control every appliance that can be possible to view the news!" I thought to myself. "Hello viewers, those who don't know of me yet, the name's Critic and I will give you the update on the news every minute on the minute." said Critic. "...But I'm not alone, I'm here with Paris's most outstanding hero, So Cat Noir, how does it feel to soon be wiped of the face of history, said Critic.

Cat Noir's POV: " Me Ow! Come and get me Ladybug, A.S.A.P." I shouted into the microphone, but she then grabbed my tongue and said, "Whose Cat has your tongue now?" Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha!!!!!!! she said and laughed mockingly. " Hey, those cat jokes are my thing! And it sounds better with me saying them, and you didn't even got the joke right! Let go of my tongue or I promise this cat will bite!" I said sounding weird because she's holding my tongue. 'Oh, poor kitty where are your manners don't you know you should never talk with stuff in your mouth for punishment, you minus 30 seconds, that means if Ladybug doesn't show up in the next 30 seconds, the cat gets it, because I said my news will be aired every minute on the minute. " said Critic. "Where are you, Bugaboo?" I wondered in my head and began worrying since I was unable to fight back when the broadcasters and the camera crew ganged up on me by surprise and I can't use cataclysm since I'm tied up,*GULP* where ever you are Ladybug you better hurry up or I'm toasted.

Ladybug's POV: *GASP* "I need to think of something fast," I said in my mind. I can't believe Cat Noir made them take him by surprise. I need to hurry before my earrings start beeping. I took out my Yo Yo and tap and tried to find Cat Noir using the GPS installed in it. "Got it!" I shouted after picking up his tracker in his staff. I began jumping on rooftops, flipping and cartwheeling. *Beep Beep* "Oh no this can't be happening!" I need to reach there in the next 30 seconds, or Cat Noir will be in trouble or even worst she could take his ring, or everyone will see who I am on national TV,or...or.... 20 seconds left, it can't possibly get any worse." I began worrying." Oh, it almost slipped me I haven't used the springs as yet, so I thought about putting the two of them on the heel of my shoes, one on each foot. And I decided to run stupid me. "Aaah!!!!!!" I sprang very high up in the air but I landed safe on two feet. And it went a lot faster.

Hawkmoth's POV: "Critic, grab his miraculous now while you still have the chance! Chances come once in a lifetime, or you may never get the opportunity when Ladybug arrives. " I said quickly and serious. " Yes! Yes! The ring! Take his ring, the miraculous is the ring and then when he gets sad and angry at Ladybug for not coming to his rescue on time I can then send an akuma for him to take Ladybug's miraculous and then both their miraculouses will be mine! Ha, ha, ha!!!!!!!!" I laughed gladly and proud. "At last they will be mine!" I said calmly.

Ladybug's POV:
"Not so fast Critic, I've allowed you to do so many things while I was gone but, not this, you will not just take his ring and go, over my dead body!" *Beep Beep* "Ha,ha,ha!!!! You're going to stop me, I'd love to see you try and your about to change back. Don't make me laugh anymore than I already am doing because, I don't intend to, said Critic. I stood there wondering what to do now she was about to take Cat Noir's ring and then was gonna throw him of the rooftop of the broadcasting building. I guess this is over but I just can't stand there and do nothing because then she would be after me and would know my face and in fact the whole of Paris.
Just then, " Mommy!!!" said Manu. "Manu, I mean little girl you can't just come into a fight scene like this, she's not herself because Mommy is not feeling very well," I said. I then got a very brilliant idea! I think the akuma is in the microphone she has it in her hand 24/7, because she's always waving it around like a wand, that's probably how she turned those innocent people into news broadcasters to hold cameras around. And then I thought if she was in that state when Manu was playing with my dolls causing Manu to get very upset and becoming the puppeteer. So I told Manu to step right at the edge of the rooftop but don't jump pretend to jump I told her the key was to get her Mom very angry but don't listen until her Mom wasn't looking like a supervillain. Manu did exactly as I told her. And it seem to have worked. "Hey, Mommy, I'm playing jump of the roof!" said Manu. "Manu get away from there!" said Critic .My plan seems to be working. So I quickly sneak up to Cat Noir and so I could untie him. "Ladybug, just the bug I need to see," said Cat Noir. "Okay you see that microphone over there in your hand, try using cataclysm to destroy it so that I can.... *beep beep* ...get the akuma and quickly before I change back.

Cat Noir's POV: Everything was going smoothly, the way Ladybug planned until Critic burst out saying, " But Hawkmoth why should I leave her in her misery soon to come,because of falling, you know how high it is from the ground she could get seriously injured plus she's my daughter, of course I remember the deal, okay hawkmoth I will get you those miraculous. Sorry Manu!" said Critic. "Me Ow!" I said feeling sorry for Miss Shammock. "Quickly, Cat Noir before she realizes!" said Ladybug. " Cataclysm! " I shouted and ran towards Critic and touched the microphone and Ladybug quickly swiped her Yo Yo and swing it and caught the akuma in the nick of time and said "No more evil doings for you little butterfly" Then she taps her Yo Yo and says "Bye, bye little butterfly and then threw the two springs in the air and said,"Miraculous Ladybug! " Then this is the best part, when millions of little ladybugs fly around luminated with red light which fixes and repairs any damages done to an area and restores everything back to normal. And then we fist bumped and said, "Pound it!"

Author's Notes:
I've read over Chapter 1 and realized that they were so many mistakes I hate my bad use of grammar. Well I've decided to re-write it and update it because it was so bad. Well here's the new version, I just made a few changes. Please don't steal picture above, i drew it my self,if you want to use it ask me,CDC2003 OUT!!!!!

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