ZJCWeasel created this entry, so full credit to them :)

Creativity: 7/10

It's beautiful and, though it doesn't have much of a creative scene, doesn't spoil too much of the story and that's fine by me. The background could be more interesting but I understand that backgrounds are difficult to make.

Relevance: 7/10

Something that I noticed is that Honeypaw is looking all calm while Sunpaw is looking excited and is on her paws. That really shows the difference between their personalities! However, there's not much of a special scene from the story, which would probably make it more eye-catching (But honestly it still would've caught my eye if I was an unsuspecting reader)

Quality: 8/10

Your art style is really pretty, and you got Honeypaw's and Sunpaw's appearance right, which I really appreciate :)

Total: 22/30

Thanks for your fantastic entry and good luck!