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This was the previous tag that PokemonRio tagged me for. I JUST CHANGED IT TO THE RIGHT NAME SO DON'T KILL ME RIO!
Here it is, one of the only free articles of writing left.
Third Grade - Boo
"Boo!" A girl yelled. The guy in front of her fell backwards and banged his head into the wall. "Did I scare you?" She asked. The boy nodded his head. "Why did you scare me? You know I get scared easily!!" He cried.
"But, but I only meant it in a good way!" She said. "Really?" He asked. "Yeah!" She said. "Yay! You're my new friend!" He exclaimed happily.
Oh my god, I think I was hyper when I wrote this as a kid. Apparently I had good grammar for my age back then, and I hadn't skipped grades at the time. Lies, my grammar was horrible. Before you say anything like "But nothing's spelled wrong!"
I was in the advanced spelling class in my grade! And I'm reading it over from the paper exactly. Don't tell me that.
Present - I don't have a title yet, but it's a Rave Master and HunterXHunter crossover. This is in the 4th chapter.
The dark-haired boy stared at the white dog with curiosity etched in his eyes. The colorful, ancient stones that hung around the dogs neck gleamed, even when there wasn't any light except for the one it was emitting. The dog was shivering under the boys gaze, but it didn't look like it was from fear.
"Gon, what're you doing?" A white-haired boy asked from his perch on the rubble. Gon looked up, his dark eyes meeting his friends crystalline ones.
"I'm looking at the dog! There are these cool stones around it's neck! Come on and take a look Killua!" he replied excitedly, motioning to the stones on the odd dogs neck.
"Hm, how much money do you think we could get from those?" An older man asked, his glasses glinting from the light, as he bent down from his position next to Gon to get a better look. A blonde-haired guy that looked younger than him wrenched him back up to a standing position.
"Don't even think about it Leorio." he stated, his eyes flickering from brown to a bloody red. Leorio tch'ed, pulling away from Kurapika. He remained silent after, the shock setting in after the endless amount of curiosity he experienced. Gon and Killua didn't seem to fazed by the sudden change in events, unlike himself and the blonde.
"Wh-who are these people?" A girl muttered. She was next to her dark-haired companion, who started to clutch his silver necklace. They both didn't seem to be any older than 18 or 17, one of them brandishing tonfa guns.
That's in the middle of the chapter. I'm still working on the whole plotline, but I'm doing chapters in a random order. I actually ended up doing Chapter 15 first XD
Let's see, future writing now...I'm not completely sure what to do for this though. I'll have to update this part later...
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