EDIT: i am sorry if people took offence to this book. I wrote this ages ago when i was still a brat, my opinions HAVE changed!

Edit 2: If you are new here, please know I was very young when I wrote this. My opinions have changed and this book isn't that great since all my opinions are immature. I apologise.

Here is an example of a badly written fanfic:

"I just felled from the skies i explain as they looked me curiosely. "Realy becase i though you was came from oceun!" naruto grinned and drag me along to eats at ichiracku!

I must have read stuff like this a MILLION times. Now, let's correct that, and see just how much better it looks!

"I just fell from the skies!" i explain as they look at me curiously. "Really? Because i thought you came from the ocean!" Naruto grinned, and dragged me along to eat at Ichiraku's!

See how much better it looks? Use adjectives, but- damnit, i sound like an english teacher!

All i'm saying is, grammar, spelling and paragraphs REALLY do affect your stories. Less people want to read a badly written story! I am going to write a EXTREMELY cliche badly written, non-paragraphed short story for naruto. Then, below it i will write it again, but less cliche, and better written. Just read through! The differance is phenonomal!

No. 1:

My name is Amy i am 17 years old and very very, PRETTY. I has long red hare that coms to my back and i  have big blue eyes. As i walk out the schools hear thunder so run i run so fast i nock into an oldish lady with grey hairs. I falls back and my cloths get wet. "Sory child i wadsnt loking wheere i was going! She apologsise. She hand me black stone and disapear so i wish on the stone. "I wish i cold go to naruto world i think and everything fade to black. When i wake up i am in naruto world so i tell gatekeepers to take me to hokage. WHen we get in, i says"I wants to saty here to be a ninja!" so he sais yes and i go to my apertment he gave me it very nice. I lay don and go to sleep . Today was really exiring!

No. 2:

My name is amy, and i am 17 years old. I am very, very pretty, with long red hair and large sea-blue eyes. As i walk home from school, it starts to rain, and i hear thunder, so i run. In my hurry i accidentaly bump into an old looking lady. The force of the collision sends me flying back, and i land in a muddy puddle, dirtying my clothes. "Sorry, child. I was not looking where i was going. As an apology, take this magic stone!" she says, handing me a rectangular black stone, before vanishing.

I look at the stone, and decide to see if it really is magic. I hold it up, and whisper: "I wish i could go to the naruto world!" At that moment, everything faded to black.

When i wake up, my surroundings have changed, and i realise that i am now in the naruto world. I walk over to the gatekeepers of konoha, and asked them to take me to the hokage. When i see him, i ask: "Please, may i stay here to become a ninja?" "Of course!" he said suprising everyone in the room. He hands me the key to my new apartment, and this week's rent. I run to my apartment, it actually looks pretty good. Exhausted from what happened today, i fall back onto my small bed and fall aseep. Today was very exiting!

Do you see the differance? It's astonishing, rite- i mean right! So yeah, next time you wanna make a fanfic of naruto, or anything really, CHECK YOUR WORK, BECAUSE IT MATTERS!