Storrifate decided to make the effort to make a review for TL, AD, TW & TW as well (see my previous review). Here it is!

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We are introduced to Diana's morning routine, my first criticism is the over detail, the constant use of and is vexing,we don't need to know everything she experiences. She washes her face she goes downstairs and makes herself breakfast, instead of saying breakfast, we have to read every single item on the menu, this book is set in 1940,
and for the people who slept during History class,
in England there was a thing called rationing (look it up),
It would have been impossible to get such a large and varied breakfast. Then our heroine goes outdoors, has a small chit chat with Mrs Mcready (who seems more a loving grandmother than, well Mrs Mcready) a song about hoping to one day see her father(spoiler it's aslan) a very looong song,
made even more confusing because she is doing numerous activities, then bam it's dinner time!
We are introduced to Professer Kirke, they have a chat, and the mc describes her day (which we just read) in full detail, instead of saying something like: "I had a lot of fun riding today"After putting on some clothes that didn't exist in that time we are introduced to the Pevansie children, and her first thoughts are
(A) They look scared,it must be awful to be uprooted from your home and taken to somewhere new, where you don't know anyone, maybe we can be friends
(B)Why are they here? Doesn't The professor like me anymore?
(C)*ooh those boys are cute, even though Edmund looks snobby
If you guessed C than you are correct, our heroine, who is by the way 9 years old, is less worried about new people coming to her home than the fact that Edmund looks snobby.
Now alas the subsequent chapters were removed before I could read them, so My final thoughts on this book, it isn't the worst thing I have ever read, in fact if you changed one or two things around,
this could be a hilarious satirical take on Narnia fanfic, I was laughing as I read it, so I would say to the author, ( Jeizel_26 )
don't revamp, keep it the way it is,
all you have to do is add a bit about it being a knock on fanfic and it would be great!
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