1. Uuuuuggggggghghhhhhhhhh that was horrific

2. GRAMMAR

3. SPEELING

4. NAMES

5. Bloody hell, this is too much for me.

6. Beautifulfacedpersonthatrobinloves, dwarfman and wolfcaptain all haVE NAMES

7. I think Storri will be happy to explain the Mary Sue element of this to you.

8. WHAT'S WRONG WITH EDMUND

9. How did Peter get into that castle suddenly?

10. How did they defeat the witch?

11. Overall, WHAT THE FLYING F- Alright, that's enough.

12. Oh Aslan, there are so many more.