The Awakening by: Kay_Ro

Remember, these are just my opinions. Feel free to argue with or agree with any points I make.

Alright, let's begin. The introduction is good.  I like the set up to the rest of the story. Though I feel as though we could get a more Atlantis feel. I don't know, it just feels like a normal world, nothing really screaming 'Atlantis'. I suppose maybe a better description on this brief world before it's sunk to the bottom of the ocean. It just comes and goes so fast.

The overall body is good. No grammar, spelling, or dialogue issues. The characters are set up well, we see the world that Ayesha lives in. The spacing is fine throughout the story. I do think that maybe the pacing for the first few chapters is kinda fast. We don't know Ayesha that well, but the first thing we read about her is she's getting married to a guy she doesn't even know. I feel as though we could see the world she lives in a little bit more before she's thrown into that situation. 

I do like the cryptidness of it, with the secret players being revealed slowly. I also like the dates, to help you get a sense of time passing with story. 

Keep up the good work.

Summary: 

Pros:

The above mentioned

Cons:

The need for more world building 

Fast pacing in some spots

If you wish to survive the floods, then listen to the voices in your head. The Awakening will be the only thing to keep you alive.