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Soccer is Freedom by: _Flower_Princess_21_

Remember these are just my opinions. Feel free to argue with or disagree with any opinions I have.

Let's begin Flower Princess. So, the introduction does set up the story. However I am confused as to the universe the entire story is set in. Where is exactly Mai's home world? I didn't really understand that aspect of the story, though maybe I just didn't read far enough in. 

For the overall body, I have some issues. I do not like the emoji's set within. It feels like I'm reading a text message Wattpad story, instead of a real story. Most of the grammar is fine, as is the spelling. I don't recommend using quotation marks however for  internal dialogue, since italics is enough to separate inner monologue from the rest of the story. The plot I think goes along nicely, though at times the wording sorta loses me. Finally, I don't really understand the point of bolding or underlining some words. It doesn't really have any extra effect for me at least. 

I think the characters are fine. Mai seems a little overpowered, but I get it's sorta like an anime so that aspect makes sense. The pictures are nice, sorta visualize some things for me I probably couldn't otherwise visualize. 

Summary:

Pros:

Well paced plot

Good characters

Decent grammar and spelling

Cons:

The emojis

The confusing wording 

The certain bolding of words

If you want to find out if freedom is in fact soccer, read this story to figure out the truth.