Author: Kenassandrally

First impressions: 8
The cover is clean and interesting, the title gives a sense of a sad story. I'm unsure if this is what the author wants but that is the vibe it gives off

Description: 4
The description is cleanly written with no errors, however it is rather short and provides little information about the story which will often deter readers

The story itself: 7
The story starts immediately, with no set up or back story, this is fine though. To throw the reader into the story immediately is entirely acceptable but it may confuse some readers. There were more than a few spelling errors or typos and in the second chapter there was soft adult content, this will prove disturbing to most young readers

Overall total: 6
The story has a good plot however it proved a little lacking in descriptions and setting the scene. This seems to be a common problem that is simply fixed by more practice and a bit more time in bringing the story to life