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The layout of this review will be a little different from the other's due to special request

Sincerely, Lost

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Author: janicehans

First impressions: 8
The cover is nicely made, and when coupled with the intriguing title it really gives the feel that this will be the story of two star bound lovers. However, the cover does seem a tad pixelly

Title: 9
The title is certainly intriguing, if you know mythology well then you'll know the background of sirens and you'll want to understand how she fell in love. There does seem to be a few too many dots at the end however

Description: 9.5
The description is good, giving just enough info to get the reader intrigued but not enough to spoil much of the story. It's cleanly written, however a little short, and I spotted no spelling errors

The story itself: 9
The story was good, setting the stage for what is to come in the story, in the first chapter (Centuries Ago) one of the characters names kept changing between Magom and Magon. As for the rest of the story, I only spotted a few other misspellings, but, I did notice quite a bit of mispunctuation, these are rather simple though, just a few commas that were too early or ones that shouldn't be there in the first place

Overall total: 9
It's a good story, the author has a very good idea on their hands with loads of potential. I can say that if you're looking for a good love story then this one will not disappoint, I suggest this one for all you readers who want a good quality love story