Okay, so, I'm just going to say right now: this is probably going to kill you because of all the cringe. I wrote this when I was 13, so cut me some slack. This isn't my first story I've written, but it's the first one I'm uploading. Please, please, PLEASE give me some constructive criticism. I REALLY need it. 

Thanks you so much for actually deciding to read this! You've made my day!

-Mel