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On the next morning they got ready quickly and went for the alternate works after sharing their quick love yous, kisses, teases and etcccc.

Vayal

Siv:Hii mama!!

Ponvannan turned towards her squinting his eyebrows.

Pon:Inga enna pandra?Avan innu varla nee veetukku po..

Siv:Aiyo naan avara paaka varla..

Pon:Apro?Summa vandhiyaa..appo andha oramaa poi nillu..keela engayaadhu vilundh..

Siv:Aiyo mama..naan summa nikka varla..vela paaka vandhen..

Ponvannan raised his eyebrows at her.

Pon:Vela paakavaa..inga laa kanakku vela pakaa kood..

Siv:Haiyo naan kanakku vela paaka varla..dho..

She ran towards the aged woman who took the paddy straw to tie it with the jute rope and stopped her.

Siv:Paati kudunga naan idha pandren..neenga poi oivedunga..

Woman:Illa thaayi kudu naane pannudhen..

Siv:Aiyo paati naan pandren..neengale evlo vela paapinga naan paakuren kudunga..

She pulled the bunch of straw and started to tie it by spilling some of them down.Ponvannan sighed and moved towards her.

Pon:Adha kudu..

Siv:Mama please naan pandrane..

She showed her puppy face at him.

Pon:Seri neeye pannu.. naan solli tharen kudu..

She grinned and gave it to him.

Pon:Idha mothamaa ipdi puduchukanu..

She nodded grinning still.

Sivmv:Workout aagudhu workout aagudhu..

Pon:Apro apdiye nalla iluthu kattanu..appodha keela vilugaadhu seriyaa?

Siv:Haan okay..

Pon:Enga nee adha eduthu kattu paaklaaa..

She nodded her head and took the paddy more than usual.

Pon:Avlo venaa..konjo kammi pannu..

She putted some down and showed it to him.

Pon:Mmm podhum..modhala adha kaila pudi..nellu size ku kooda illa un kaiyu nee aruvada panna vandhutiyaa?

Siv:Mama..

She whined at him.

Pon:Seri seri pudi adha nallaa..keela podra paaru..

She gripped it tight and showed it to him again.

Pon:Aah adha oru kaila puduchuttu andha sanal eh eduthu kattu..

Siv:Oru kailayaa?

Pon:Aama apro yaaru katturadhu?

Siv:Neenga kattunga..namma work eh share pannikalaa..

Pon:Share pannikalaamaa?Apdiye ellaathukku pannaa rendu naal aana kooda velaya mudikka mudiyaadhu seekro kattu..

Saying he turned back to continue his work but turned towards her again hearing her gasp.He looked at her and saw down to see the every straws which was on her hand before are on the ground now.

Siv:Sorry mama..en kaila adha pudikka mudila..

He glared at her but other workers all started to laugh out loud which made him also to shook his head smiling.

Siv:Haan yen ippo ellaaru sirikinga..??Naan idhaa first time theriyumaa..en kai ellaa paarunga pink aayirchu andha nel ellaa puduchu..

Pon:Seri nee adha pudikka venaa..Vasundhraa akka..neenga adha puduchukonga..ava sanal vachu kattuvaaa..

Vasu:Seringa thambi..

Siv:Aii super uhh..akka akka edunga..edunga..

Vasundhra smiled and took the straws and she tied it tightly around it.

Siv:Aama mama idhukku dha ippo machine vandhiruchu le yen kai le pandringa?

Pon:Adhellaa vaangikalaa nee modha idha paaru..

He said and left from there.She twisted her lips.

Siv:Vasundhra akka ivaru yeppavume ipdidhaana?

Vasu:Adhu vandhu papa..

Pon:Aama naan yeppavum ipdidha..nee velaya mattu paaru..

He took the tied paddy straws and went from there.

Siv:En vaai dha enakku sani..

Vasundhra chuckled at her.

Here in Saraswathi cotton mill.

Dharma:Nee inga enna pandra?

Ash:Kanakku paaka vandhirukken mama..

Dharma:Yaaru yaarukkku mama?

Ash:Neenga dha enakku mama..

Dharma:Aiyaa nu laa kooptutu irundha?

Ash:Adhu appo..ippodha naan en kattaya..chii unga ponna kalyanam pannikittane..appo ini neenga enakku mama dhane?Adhuvu veru mama illa..maama..naarrrr..illa chinna chinna mama..?

Veeran gulped.

Veeran:Aa..aa..ma..

Ashwin smiled at him nodding his head.Dharma looked at Veera raising his eyebrows like "Idhu yeppo le irundhu?"

Veeran smiled nervously at him.

Veer:Thambi uh Ponvannan anna uh mattu illanaaa neenga veliyave vandhirukka mudiyaadhu le naah??Adhaa naan..

Dharma:Adhaa nee..?avanga pakkam thaaaveete apdidhane?

Ash:Aama..

Dharma turned towards him glaringly making him gulp.

Ash:Illa illa..naan velaiya paakalaa nu sonnen mama..

Dharma:Unakkulaa inga vela kudukka mudiyaadhu kelambu..

Saying he moved towards his chair but gasped and stepped back when Ashwin fell on his feet.

Ash:Vela mattu illa nu sollaadhinga mama..neenga vela mattu kuduthu paarunga..naan ungalukku naai maari vela paapen..

Ashmv:Indha vela mattu naan paaka neenga othukalanaa..enakku ava soru kooda poda maataa..

Dharma:Enna Veera idhellaa?

Veera:Paavo naah..namma paiyan dhane?

Dharma:Ohh andha alavukku poyiruchaa..?

Ash:Mamaa please mamaaaa..

Dharma:Seri modhala endhiri..

Ash:Illa neenga velaiku sethukurenu sonnaa dha naan endhirippen..

Dharma:Veera avana endhirikka sollu..

Ash:Mhum naan yaaru sonaaalu endhrikka maaten..

Dharma:Haiyo seri pa velaikku eduthukuren.. endhriri podhu..

Ashwin stood up smiling wide.

Ash:Thanks mama..

Dharma shooked his head sighing and sat on his chair.

Dharma:Aama nee kanakku vela paapanaa.. Veera enna pannuvaan?

Ash:Chinna chinna mama ellaaru nallaa vela paakuraanga laa nu paapaarung mama..

Dharma:Ohhooo..ellaa mudivu panniyaachaa neengale?

Ash:Aama..

Dharma glared at him.

Ash:Aiyo illa illa..neenga sonnaa dha execute pannuvo illa chinna chinna mama?

Dharma:Adhenna da chinna chinna mama?

Ash:Aama avaru unga rendaadhu thambi dhane?Chinna mama vandhu Rang...

Ranga:Naanu..

Ash:Dho vantaaru en chinna mama..

Dharma:Ellaarume onnu sendhaachaa..serii..nadakkattu.. Veera inniku ethana moota vadhirukku?

Ash:Mama..ippo naan dha adhellaa solluven..inniku 150 moota ippo varaiku senjirukko mama..

Dharma:Ohh ellaa market ku anuppiyaachaa?

Ash:Illa mama..innu namma mill oda seal vakkala... vachittu irukkaanga vachadhu anuppeerlaam..

Dharma:Moota ellaa vandhu evlo nero aachu?

Ash:Ara mani neram irukkum mama..

Dharma:Ara mani neramaaa enna pandraanga seal vakkaama?

Ash:Ippo vachirupaanga mama..neenga vandhu paathinga naa anuppeerlaa..

Dharma:Mmm vaanga..Veera, Ranga neenga enna pandringa..poi vera edhaadhu vela irundhaa paarunga..pattunool(silk thread) ellaa enna pandraanga nu paarunga..chithiraa pournami vera vara pogudhu naraya pattunool dha velaiku pogu ellaa thayaar aah irukkaa nu paathu market ku anuppi vainga..

Ranga:Adh..

Ash:Adhayu ellaa moota pottu vakka solleeten mama..rendume neenga paathadhukku apro anuppi vachurlaa..

He said smiling wide.Dharma lips curved slightly but he left out leaving the trio alone.

Ashwin grinned seeing his disappearing figure but gasped when Veera straddled neck from behind by his arms.

Veera:Nalla ice vakkiriyae da..apdidha ennayu vachuttiyo?

Ash:Chinna chinna mama...enna ipdi solleetinga neenga dhane naan kettadhum othukittinga..neengale ipdi kekkalaamaa?

Ranga:Vidu Veera paavo..

Veeran left him smiling.

Ash:Thanks chinna mama..naan poi avarukku help pandren bye..

Saying he ran out from there.

Veera:Ellaa nalladha nadandhaa seri anna..

Ranga:Adhellaa avan paathuppaan..nee avana manichutte.. epdi?

Veera:Mannikardhukku enna naa avan apdi panneetaan?Avan dha nammala manikanu..epdilaa peseerpen naanu..appovu avan dha enta vandhu kenjuraan...ellaa andha nanbargal naala dha... seekro seri aaganu ellaa..

Ranga:Mmm ippovaadhu avana purunjukuttiye..vaa..enna pandraanga nu paapo..

And the day off like that with their attrocities around their own fathers-in-law.

But on the another side of the village..,

The man moved towards the big banyan tree and hided behind it and took his phone calling someone..,

Man:Hello..

"Sollu..enna nadakudhu?"

Man:Ellaaru sandhoshamaa dha irukkaanga nammala thavara..

"Irukkattu..ellaa konja naalukku dha..inga indha phone kedaikardhe kashtamaa irukku da..enna pandradhu nu therila.."

Man:Neenga ippodhaikku ullaye irunga Durai anna..appodha unga mela yaarukku sandhegam varaadhu..inga naan ellaathayu paathukuren..

Durai:Seri da..aal ellaa thayaar panniyaachaa..inniku raathri ellaarayu ore nerathula mudikanu..nyabagam irukku le?

Man:Irukku naah..ellaaru thayaar aah irukkaanga..inniku raathri 12ndra (12:30) manikku..ellaathayu mudichurlaa.

He said smirking.

But got startled hearing the throat clearing sound.He turned back and widened his eyes gasping.

Man:Sadhanaa..

Sadhanaa smirked at him before saying..,

Sadh:Naane dha Arul..

Arul gulped.

On his way to his house Ashwin stopped his cycle and took his phone.

Ash:Hello..

"Anna naan Dharshini pesuren.."

Ash:Heyy Dharsh..epdi da irukka?

Dharsh:Anna naan nallaarken..aana inga Suriya ungala paakanum nu dhideernu romba adam pudikuraa..

Ash:Enna da soldra?

Dharsh:Aama naah..naanu epdiyaadhu samadhanam panlaa nu nenaikiren aana mudila..kalaile endhiruchadhule iurndhe unga paera dha solleetu irukkaa..mudinja alavukku epdiyaadhu inga seekro vara paarunga naah..

Ash:Kandippa vandhuren da nee vai naan poi veetla solleetu kelamburen..

Dharsh:Ser..

"Ashwinnnnn annaaa...seekro vaa..enakku pasikudhu"

Ashwin's eyes filled with tears hearing her.

Ash:Naan vandhuttu irukken nu sollu da..vandhuren..

Dharsh:Seri naah..

He disconnected the call and pedalled towards his house fastly and ran inside.

Ash:Ammaaaa..

Saranya:Ashwin enna da aachu?

Ash:Amma..ammaa..

Saranta:Yen da... enna da aachu?Yen ipdi kannellaa kalangi irukku?

Ash:Amma namma suriya..

Saranya:Suriya vaa?Suriya ku enna da aachu?enna da aachu.. sollu da..en ponnuku enna da aachu?

Ash: Amma bayapudaadhinga Suriya ku onnu ila..ava kaalaila irundhu edhuvu saapdaama en paeraye solleetu irukkaalaamaa..

Saranya sighed slightly in relief.

Saranya:Apdiyaa..seri appo nee poi paathuttu vaa.. romba naal aachu le?

Ash:Aama ma ippove kelamburen..avanga laa enga?

Saranya:Innu yaarume vayal le irundhu varla da kanna..

Ash:Ohh..appo solleeru ma avanga kitta..naan kelamburen..ippove mani ettaachu..

Saranya:Seri da paathu poitu vaa..naan avanga vandhadhu.. Sivaangi eh unakku phone poda soldren..

Ash:Seri ma..

He rushed inside their hut and packed his dresses before stepping out but hissed in pain when the steel door frame scratched his back palm making it to bleed a little.

Ash:Shh..idhu enna ivlo sharp aah irukku..ava kaila kuthunaa enna aaguradhu..idha epdi naan paakaama vitten..

He placed his bag down and took the stone from outside and hitted the door making the sharp edge to bend in.

Ash:Mmm ippo okay..enna pandraa nu therilaye innu..rendu nimisho wait panlaamaa..?

He thought but his sister's love made him to shook his head and rush out after informing his mother.

After 2 minutes of his leave..

Here everyone reached the house and sivaangi stepped front to run towards their hut..,

Siv:Aththaan naan unakku Parotta vaangeetu vandhirukane..

But Saranya stopped her.

Siv(frowns):Ennaachu aththa?

Saranya:Thangam..adhu avan anga illa..

Siv:Peravu enga irukkaaru?

Saranya:Adhu..

Siv:Avaru room le irukkaaraa?Illa innu varlayaa?

Saarnya:Illa da avan ippodha chennai ku kelambi ponaan..

Sivaangi gasped in shock and her hold of the parotta cover fell on the floor.

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Siv:Enna aththa soldringa?

Saranya:Aama da Ragahavan oda thangachi phone panni Suriya romba alaradhaa sonnaa..adhaa avan..

Siv:Enta kooda sollala?

Saranya:Illa da adhu..

Siv:Neenga poi soldringa dhane?

Saranya:Illa da..naan yen ma poi solla poren?

Sivaangi stared her simply and ran towards their hut and opened it to see none.

Pon:Enna ma idhu..solleetu poga maataaanaa avan?

Mug:Enga kittayaadhu solleerkalaa le enna panni vachirukaan..naan poi avala paakuren..

Sak/Kavin:Naangalu varo..

The trio ran towards the hut but gasped seeing her trying to unlock the back gate.

Kavin:Sivaangi enna pandra..inga vaa night nerathula anga pogaadha di paambellaa varu..inga vaa Sivaangi...

Siv:Naan vara maaten..idha open pannunga..amma ippodhane avaru ponadhaa sonnaanga naan bus stop ku poi paakuren..open pannunga..

Sak:Seri namma mun vaasal valiyaave polaa nee inga vaa sivaangi modhala..

She rushed towards them and ran past them towards the main door.

Ponvannan tried to stop her but she pushed him and ran out

Pon:Aiyo indha pullaiya vachuttu enna dha pandradhu..naan jeap eduthuttu poren avala kooptu bus stop le avan irundhaan naa naan apdiye avalayu kooptu poga soldren..

Saranya:Seringa..

Kavin:Appa naangalu..

Pon:Illa da neenga irunga naan poitu varen..

Kavin nodded his head and Ponvannan left from there.

Here after waiting for the bus to arrive for more than 5 minutes he took the auto and went from there towards the nearby village's bus stop.

Ponvannan made Sivaangi to sit on the passenger seat and drove towards their village bus stop.She ran out once they reached and searched him everywhere but her eyes pooled with tears on seeing him no where.

Ponvannan sighed.

Pon:Nalaike vandhuruvaan da yen ipdi alara ippo?

Siv:Illa mama enta sollaama poga maataaru..enakku yedho thappa nadakura maariye irukku mama..

Pon:Yen da apdilaa nenaikure..nee vaa modhala..namma veetukku polaa..

Siv:Mama avarukku phone panni paaklamaa?

Pon:Avlodhaane vaa poi panlaa..modhala veetukku polaa vaa..

She hummed and moved inside the jeap after seeing the road hear and there in the thought of seeing him anywhere.

Ponvannan strated the jeap and drove towards their house.

Saranya:Ennaachu nga?

Pon:Avan kelambeetaan pola ma..

Saranya:Shoo.. Sivaangi inga paaru..

Siv:Solleetu poga maataaraa..yen ipdi pandraaru?Enna pullaya valathu vachirukinga?

Boys trio giggled.Ponvannan and Rajammal smiled hearing her.

Saranya:Avan apdidha di.. thangachi naah apdidha poyiruvaan..

Siv:Adhu munnaadi..ippo naan inga oruthi irukkan le ennalaa kannuku theriyaadhaa avarukku?

Rajammal:Ava seriyaa dhane Saranya kekuraa?Neeyaadhu avana irukka solleerkalaa le?

Saranya:Illa ma naanu Suriya ve pathi dha yosich..

Sivaangi stood up immediately in anger and stormed towards their hut and locked the door from inside.

Mugen ran behind her banging the door.

Mug:Sivaangi kadhava thora..

She searched his bag but sat on the floor with thud not seeing it too.

Mug:Sivaangi..

Siv:Onnu illa naah... naan nallaa dha irukken..thoonga poren.. neengalu poi thoongunga..

Mug:Ulla vandhu thoongu da thaniyaa epdi thoonguva?

Siv:Illa nahh paravala neenga ponga..

Mugen sighed and went from there.

Siv:Solleetu ponu nu kooda unakku thonala le..sonnaa enna naan venaa naa solla poren..yen ipdilaa pandringa..chey..pesave maaten paarunga..

She wiped her tears and spreaded the mat before placing the pillow on it and covered herself with the duvet closing her eyes.

Here..,

Ashwin reached the nearby village bus stop and waited for the bus for another one hour..,

He sighed seeing the time as 11'o clock in his watch and huffed seeing here and there.He sat on the passengers' bench and took his phone.

Ash: Idhulayu charge illayaa..shoo..semma kaduppulaa iruppaa chittu..Inga vandhu wait pannuvenu therinjirundhaa avalayu koopte vandhirukalaa..chey..

He balanced his elbow on his thighs and rubbed his face with his palms.

Like that another half an hour passed.

He frowned when the street light blinked twice and got off.

Ash:Current eh vera pudingeetaanunga laa..

He stood up but got startled when someone got dashed on his left arm.

Ash:Yaaru..?

"Thambi"

Ash:Laxmi paati?

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