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Ocean was chilling in Bunker Nine, as if the prophecy NEVER happened. "Yo! Leo! Can you make me an overly complicated tech weapon that I could use to my advantage?"she asked.

"Sure!" Then he pulled out a super cool giant Celestial Bronze and Imperial Gold canon out of his tool belt, and gave it Ocean (despite her small form, could pick it up without falling over).

"Can you also make me a phone that won't attract monster?" she added.

He rolled his eyes. "Of course, I can. I'm Valdez." Then he gave her a IPhone that he made in, like, two seconds.

"Thanks!"

Leo smiled. "Your welcome, I love you."

"Whateves!" Ocean said, then left a pouting Leo behind.

Ocean then came across a son of Nemesis. "Hey, I'm Ocean! I'm awesome! What's your name?"

"I'm Seth," he grumbled in reply.

"You are so hot and brooding, you obviously must have an angsty past," Ocean said.

"Well, yes. You see, my best friend was killed by a monster--"

"Who cares! Anyway, you want to be friends?"

Seth looked her up and down. "You mean with a one dimensional cardboard like you? No thanks." (BURN!)

"You don't like me?...*gasps* You must be a villain!"

"Yep. And I'm going to run this camp to the ground, for revenge for leaving my friend to die!" he growled.

Ocean rolled her eyes. "So angsty."

Seth scoffed, then stole Blackjack and took off flying away from CHB.

"I have to stop him!" Ocean declared heroically, because she was a hero (😒).

"Can we come with?" asked Silver, Trinity and Kyle were beside him.

"Of course, I needed some sidekicks!" Ocean said brightly. "Now let's go defeat Seth!"

"Maybe we can try talking to him?" Kyle suggested sheepishly. "He really had a hard life, before we hurt him, why don't we try to convince him to--"

"Shut up, Kyle!" Ocean groaned. "We don't need to know about the villain's feelings and ambitions! We need to know how to kick his butt!"

"Agreed," Silver said. 

"Death is always the answer," Trinity murmured.

"Death!? Who said anything about killing Seth!?" Kyle gasped.

"How else are we suppose to stop him?" Ocean said sarcastically, rolling her sea green eyes (same eye colour as Percy's XD).

They were off on an epic quest, on a huge flying ship called the Ago III, it looked exactly like Ago II, but better.

"Make sure to save Blackjack!" Percy called to them, before they left. "I hope they'll be safe, right Wise Girl....Annabeth?" Searching for the missing daughter of Athena.

Meanwhile, Annabeth was in Bunker Nine tapping at her laptop, trying to figure out what the Hades was going on. "C'mon. C'mon!" she urged, tapping rabidly, while finishing her eleventh can of Red Bull.

"Are you OK?" Leo asked.

"I'm fine," Annabeth insisted.

"You been staring at that laptop for the past two hours."

"I have to know what's going on."

"O...K. But how about I take these away," Leo said, gingerly reaching for her Red Bulls.

Annabeth hissed at him, and Leo quickly withdrew. "Or not."
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1#: you can't use Leo for everything! If he is going to make a gadget for your OC that doesn't attract monsters, it would have to be time consuming and many problems would have to occur to get it right. Just to make it realistic. Leo is an inventor, not a freaking magician.

2#: the villain is always the grumpy one that has an angsty past. Not that it's a bad thing that he had a bad past, he does need some motivation. Try making him less brooding, and make him shield his true feelings with charm, and make him  persuasive. I like this in a villain, but if you have your own ideas, that's cool

3#: Leo declares his love for the OC, and is rejected. It's Leo, guys, you NEVER reject someone like Leo!

4#: don't make your supporting characters plain sidekicks. They need depth and personality, not just there hanging on your main character's every word

5#: Ocean and her sidekicks can't easily agree to kill a kid their age. Demigods or not, murder is murder, and it's bad. Real heroes wouldn't be so merciless.

6#: where did the freaking Ago III came from?? Oh, wait, Leo made it. Nevermind, mystery solved.

7#: I'm actually rooting for Seth to win.





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