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Nathan Rivera's POV

"Oh well, your dad and mom says they both got sick at the same time, looks like they had fun last night." I said as I winked at Janet making her roll her eyes.

"Aren't you shipping them too much?" She spoke with her arms crossed over her chest making me enjoy the view. "The weather was a bit chilly last night so they got sick, my mom would rather punch herself than be with dad again." She said with a sad smile.

"I know. But don't you see, neither of them are wrong. Its just your dad is blinded by lies and he is not going to listen to any of us." I told her as I sat on the couch beside her. She sighed heavily and nodded her head whilst laying her head on my shoulder making my arm go around her.

"Soon enough we will try to tell him. How about we both go out today?" She exclaimed as she faced me with her bright smile.

"I got an idea, dress up we are going out on a date." I said as I kissed her cheek and got up with her beside me.

"So should I wear something fancy?"

"Well yeah, you would look gorgeous in anything or nothing at all." She blushed as I smirked at her, hitting my chest she walked past me to the bedroom.

"I am taking a shower." She slammed the door after saying it as I couldn't help wanting to go after her but stopped myself. Let her enjoy for now.

Janet Rivera's POV

I was done with the shower and dried my hair with the blower. I walked out towards the suitcase, took out the black lingerie I bought. I think it's time. I felt myself shiver as I wore the black lace. It was smooth so I was comfortable in it. Taking out the dress I bought with it, when I examined it, I was having second thoughts.

Isn't it too short?

Arrghh... There is no going back now, I wore the dress and let my hair flowy as it could cover up my shoulder. I wore makeup all over my shoulders and legs, covering up the bruises and then finally done my face a simple look. When I was done, I was proud of how I looked, grateful that I didn't mess up my make up.

I wore my heels and then got a text from Nathan.

Downstairs by 7 😉

I smiled at the text as I glanced at the time, only 10 mins left.

Be there in a min.

I wrote him back as I took a hold of the purse and quickly locked the door of the apartment. It would be hard to use the stairs so I took the elevator and reached over to the main lobby. I looked around to find him but I couldn't.

"Looking for me?" I turned to face the man of my dreams in a black leather jacket with blue jeans looking ravishing as always. I shook my head and blushed as I tried to think straight.

"You look great." I told him as I walked over to him. Soon enough he pulled me by my waist making some people turn to face us as my heart started beating twice against my chest.

"And you look sexy, I might let this date slide and stay at home and do stuff, you know." I blushed deeper as I tried to push him off.

"Nathan! Stop. People are watching." I finally got off him and walked outside the building only for him to comment.

"Oh la la, that ass." I turned around to cover it for him as he bit his lip making me roll my eyes again.

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We went to the restaurant, just like before Nathan booked us a private space. We ate many dishes and then danced to differet songs. Sometimes I think about how I was, I would have never guessed how life changed for me. I would have laughed at the person who would tell me that one day I would be dancing with my husband as his arm wrapped around my waist in a tight grip, his forehead on top of mine, his minty breath hitting my face, his fingers intertwined with mine as he kept peppering kisses on my lips.

I still can't believe it but I am glad to be here, if not for him, I would have lived in the shadows and never see how brave I am.

"Lets go for a walk?" I nodded my head as we went out towards the beach. I took my heels off as Nathan took his shoes off. We walked barefoot while enjoying the chilly wind and the sound of the waves crashing.

We played in the water and then had a race, played tag and so much that we got tired. My dress was a mess by now and I was getting cold as we sat in the cold sand.

"Damn, you are shivering." Nathan spoke as he took his leather jacket out and wrapped in on my shoulder as I gave him a grateful smile.

"Nathan?" I called for him as he hummed but kept staring at the moon.

"I am ready." Just as the words slipped out of my mouth, Nathan faced me with his eyes widened and lips ajar making me chuckle.

"Don't laugh, I can take you here, right now." I stopped as he spoke. I gupled and blushed as sighed and raked his hand over his hair.

"Janet, be sure. I won't stop later then." My mind started racing with thoughts.

Should I be doing this? Am I really ready? But I do want it, its just that I am really nervous. He wants it too, our timing is perfect. There is no going back now.

"Yes I do." I whispered, enought for him to hear. We went silent for a few minutes and I wanted to know what was going through his mind.

"Let's go then." He stood up and then held out his hand for me to take it.

"Where?" Stupid Janet! Really it that even a question!

"Apartment." He said with a smirk as we both walked back to the apartment since it was near with the shoes in our hands while the other intertwined with each other. I was sweating, but I felt cold and had goosebumps all over my body.

What is wrong with me, I wanted this! Just chill Janet. He loves you, he will never hurt you. Once its done you would be grateful. Thoughts ran in my mind and soon enough we were outside the building. We entered the building as he turned to face me, his arms captured me between him and the wall. His palms were on the wall and his breath on me as my heart flipped with the distance.

"It will be alright. You got to trust me in this. I will stop once you say stop. Okay?" I nodded my head as he leaned closer and closer. Touching his lips with mine but making no movement to kiss me. The elevator dinged and soon enough he pushed himself away from me with that devilish smirk as if he won. I gulped and walked towards our apartment. He unlocked the door and we both walked in, I placed my heels on shelf as he just threw them making me roll my eyes, placing them.

"Bedroom now." He said making my insides tingle as I listened to him and walked into the room. I took off the jacket and placed it on the sofa.

"On the bed, my love." He sure loves commanding me. I held my breath and sat on the edge of the bed with my head lowered. He tucked a curl behind my ear and the feel of finger made me shiver. Suddenly everything went so quiet, I could hear every breath he took, with his gaze etched into me.

His fingers trailed down my cheek to my lips, outlining the shape of my mouth. He bent down, his lips against my cheek, brushing it lightly. Shivers ran through my whole body, making me tremble. He brushed his mouth against my temple then traced the line of my jawline making me close my eyes.

The aching anticipation for his kiss was suddenly too much but I didn't dare to move. Finally he took my lips in his gently, carefully, but I don't know what happened to me. I, all of a sudden knotted my fists in his shirt, and pulled him closer. He was shocked as he got on top of me while my back hit the bed.

"In a hurry, aren't you?" He chuckled into the kiss making me blush deep. He kept staring at me as he took off his shirt making me gulp. He dropped the shirt and then picked me up by my thighs and properly laid me in the middle of the bed. For a moment, he kept staring at me and then finally his fingers took off the strap of my dress and the the other. There was no zip in this dress and it was hard to take it off, as I saw Nathan struggling.

"Who the fuck doesn't put a zipper on a tight ass dress?" He said, frustrated and I couldn't help giggle.

"You think this is funny? This will take alot of time, I got a better option." He smirked and it happened in a second as he tore the dress from the middle making me gasp.

"Nathan!!" He hastily took the torn piece of cloth out of me while I pouted. The dress was really pretty.

"I'll buy you another one, my love." He said as he kissed my check and when the cloth fell on the floor his shocked eyes gazed at my body. Oh the lingerie...

"Janet, you are such a little minx." He said as he bit his lips making my cheeks burn in embrassment. "But I would love it if you were out of these as well." And then he kept proceeding to remove every article of cloth from me. His hand travelled lower to the south making me shiver. His cold finger touched my clit making me moan, his fingers gave me indescribable pleasure as he spread my lips and pushed one of his finger inside. I felt myself getting wet as he went in and out with his finger. I clenched around his finger making me cum too quickly.

He added another one as I was a moaning mess and speed up his movement. I was once again on the edge as I held his shoulders tight. He gave attention to my neck as well, finding my sweet spot, sucking and licking as he always loves it. The pleasure was too much as I came for the second time. He stopped and stared at me as I tried to breath properly. His eyes sparkled in the dim light making me want to pull him into a kiss. And I did, as he kissed me with so much passion that I could drown in his love.

"I could stop right now. Tell me, my love are you sure you are ready?" He caressed my cheek as I gazed at him and made my final decision.

"Yes." I whispered out as he sat up on his knees and unbuttoned his jeans. Pulling them out with his boxers as I stared at his hard on, he sure is large and I couldn't help but stare at it.

"I guess you still haven't gotten a used to it." He said as he gave me cocky smirk, making me roll my eyes as a shiver ran up my spine.

"Don't you dare roll your eyes at me like that. Unless I make you do it." I shook my head at his dirty words. I was not calm on the inside as I was sweating real bad and my heart was beating twice its rate. He got on top of me and then positioned himself near my private part making me yelp. His mouth attacked my breast making me moan louder. And then I felt him move inside me. It hurts bad, real bad. But I kept my mouth shut and squeezed my eyes close. He stopped in between as he groaned.

"You are tight, fuck!" His eyes stared at me as he groaned. He took my lips in his and smooch them while very gently pushing himself in. He didn't go all the way and pulled out. And again digged in me but this time with a little more force. And then I felt it, I felt something tearing inside of me which made tears appear in my eyes as I moaned painfully. But he kept going and I didn't stop him because I knew it would be more painful if I told him to pull it out.

When he was finally in, tears started spilling from my eyes. When his eyes meet mine, a look of horror filled his eyes.

"Fuck! You are hurt aren't you? Tell me to stop and I will." He wiped of my eyes as he was about to pull out but I stopped him, pulling him back and shook my head.

"I'm fine. Keep moving." I encouraged him as he groaned and gently pulled out a little and pushed in. He was going too slow and it was giving me immense pleasure. I couldn't describe how I was feeling. His eyes stared at me with love as his palms showed me how much he adored me while his gentle love making was enough to totally make me fall in his amazing trap of love.

"Are you still hurt, my love?" He asked as he pushed a strand out of my face. I shook my head as I started to move my hips with his rhythm making him groan and curse. His attention went back to my breast and he speed up making me moan really loud. The pain finally diminished as I arched my back whilst he gave me such satisfaction and I cummed for the third time. But he didn't stop there, he kept going and he quickened his pace making me clutch my arms around his shoulder. The bed started creaking below us but he didn't stop.

"Fucking hell Janet! I am close." The way he whispered in my ears made me lose my mind. He finally slammed into me, loading his seeds in me while I cummed for the fourth time and he for the first. I was exhausted and sweating after our session.

But he didn't stop there, he took me in his arms as I cuddled up to his side. Only a few minutes later, he once again came on top of me. I lost count of how many times I cummed. He was like a beast but he was a soft one as he didn't dare hurt me. He was gentle, steady and affectionate towards my every move. And I loved him for that.

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Okay I hate writing these scenes. Its so hard thats why it took time.

I need someone who can write these for me... Cause I do need them for another chapters. So write them and send it to me in Instagram. I will then shoutout your name. 😊

RAMADAN KAREEM 🌙

Sadiya out.