Reviewer: RJnonymous

                                                            Reviewee: NaveyLee

                                                              Hope it helps 😃😃😃

Title: 5/5 

It'd be better if you write it as 'Thoughts From a Dark Hole' 

 Cover: 4/5

I don't think the font and the colour of the title fits, the background is good, but I just don't feel the font and colour

Blurb: 4/10

You could have been more creative on the blurb, I think that it's enough to get the readers to just click on the read button, but you should aim on making them interested and be like "Oh wow this seems very interesting"  

 Figures of speech: 9.5/10 

Honestly, I'm not very good at figures of speech, but I think that you could be more creative with that.

Vocabulary: 8.5/10

You could definitely improve on this, but not too much, we do not want the readers to Google every single word now, do we?

 Writing style: 9.6/10

I really like it, you know how to turn emotions into words, even though it's not perfectly (You can still improve a lot) and there are some parts where it gets plain... meh 

 Overall enjoyment: 5/5 really enjoyed it. Also, one doubt, there's one para in one of the poems that goes: "You're a sky full of stars, And I'm breathing in the cold, cold air" What? I don't get it, what do those two statements have to do with each other? I mean, okay, the second person is a sky full of stars, what does that have to do with the first person breathing in cold air? I'm sorry, I just don't get it. 

Total: 40.6/55