Reviewer: -CHERYTAE-

Reviewee: x0RoseGold0x

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Title: 5/5 

The title is amazing. I haven't seen many books with the same title and thus this makes it unique too. You can change the title if you want, but I suggest to keep it the same as it suits your book pretty well. 

Cover: 4/5 

The book cover is also nice. The background clearly shows the wheelchair and it somewhat looks like a hospital area or a corner. The font used for the title is nice and suits the bg. But, I didn't understand that why you made the filter look red and somewhat bloody. I think you should change that. I also suggest you to add a quote in the cover to make it more attractive

Blurb: 9/10 

It's good too. I loved the way you quickly described the actual plot ir storyline of your book in simple and less words. Love the way of your writing blurb. Suggestion is to remove unwanted or unnecessary words from the description. You can also add a particular quote or line related to your book and the characters in it.

Prologue/ Opening: 10/10 

It was amazing and perfect to be honest. Love the way you describe each and everything. Loved ur writing style! Suggestions and tips are: try to change some sentences according to the scene, you can do it by re-reading your chapter. It helps a lot. Second thing which I want you to change is the way you write paragraphs. I suggest you to write medium sized paragraphs, it looks great and is easy to understand as well. If you have read your work, you may have seen very large paragraphs in it. Rest all is good and perfect!

Grammar: 9/10 

There aren't many mistakes in your book. But still some words are typed wrong. You can re-read your book to find the mistakes, it'll surely help a lot in improving and making it look more good. 

Writing Style: 10/10 

Loved your writing style! You have perfectly described each and everything. But keep practicing, or it'll affect your writing style. Character Development: 9/10Character development is good. I loved how there feelings changes and takes turn in each chapter. U recommend you to try to make it look more realistic, in their feelings not surroundings. Try adding more feeling to the characters. Everything else is nice and fine.

Plot: 10/10 

The plot was good. I never thought that meeting a disable could take such up and down in life. It's really great idea. I loved the characters names as well and also the way how you gave pro's and cons of each character. I think this is the first story with such type plot that I've read for the first time. Interesting. 

Genre Relevance: 5/5

Your story perfectly matches your genre. It's fanfiction, right? I can also sense mini ir side genres in this story. It's nice! 

Overall enjoyment: 5/5 

It's enjoyable and I truly enjoyed it even if I don't know who the the characters are in reality. Your story can be related by me sometimes. I enjoyed the scene in the first chapter where the mother and Mingyu were teasing Hao about Jun, it was just relatable situation. Loved it so much! There are more such scenes which I enjoyed and laughed about. 

Total: 76/80