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Nandini comes out from manik's ward after he slept having medicine..... she watched Sid sitting there..... he stands up watching her coming out.....  Nandini comes to him and hugs him..... Sid gets worried as she started crying badly Sid gently rubs her back to calm her down.....

Sid (worried):hy nandu..... what happen kyu ro Rahi ho Manik thik hai na.....

Nan(still sobbing):I can't see him like this Sid..... it's so heartbreaking I.. I.... can't

Sid released her from hug and made her sit on bench and sit beside him

Sid(wipes her tears): pehle toh Rona band karo

Nandini still weeping silently

Sid:I know Nandu it's painful for us to watch him like this but we have to be strong na we can't break down infront him

Nan:he is so scared Sid..... we can't even imagine what he is going through its... it's so difficult for him

Sid can understand her pain

Nan(teary):ye sab uske sath kyu ho Raha hai Sid

Sid(hugs her):we can't change anything Nandu..... hum kuch bhi nahi Badal sakte bas Bhagwan se pray kar sakte hai.....

Nan(with hope):woh thik ho jayega na?

Sid: main baki kuch nahi Bata Sakta nandu par mera Dil kehta hai ki use kuch nahi hoga woh ekdum thik ho jayega

Nan:mera bhi.....

Sid:ha toh fikar kyu kar Rahi hai bas Apne Dil ki sun (wiping her tears) aur ye aasu  Tujhe suit nahi karte tu apne sherni Avtar me hi acchi lagti hai

This makes Nandini chuckles and Sid smiles

Nan: bhai aur bhabhi kaha Gaye

Sid:I sent them to fresh n up and change..... they were here from yesterday na they must be tired.....

Nan: ha thik kiya.....

Sid: bohot mushkil se toh Gaye hai Abhi bhai..... cabir bhai forcefully took him

Nan(sighs sadly):Manik is his world Sid..... he already lost so much ki ab Manik Ko kuch hone ka thought bhi unhe dara Raha hai..... he loves him so much

Sid:I wish ye waqt bhi jaldi beet jaye aur humara Manik ekdum thik ho jaye

Nan:me too.....

After few hours

Manik was sitting sadly still staring blank walls his thought was broken by the sound on door open..... he turned toward that and watch cabir was there.....

Cab(with a big smile): good afternoon saale saab

Manik smiles little watching cabir

Man: good afternoon jiju

Cabir reached near him and sit beside him

Cab:how are you feeling now Manik

Man:I'm good jiju

Both sit in silence for few minutes at last cabir decided to break the silence

Cab:y r u so silent Manik..... kya hua.....

Man:nahi toh..... kuch nahi jiju..... I'm fine

Cab(cups manik's face):toh itna udas kyu hai baccha..... kuch hua hai kya, koi problem hai are you no feeling well.....

Man(shooks his head):nahi Jiju..... I'm fine koi problem nahi hai.....

He smiles sadly cabir understand his pain

Cab(holds his hand):dekho Manik I know ye jo bhi kuch ho Raha hai tumhare saath it's very difficult for you.... I know tumhe dar bhi lag Raha hoga..... but trust me manik this is just a bad phase ye bhi har bure waqt ki tarah nikal jayega....

Manik looks at him sadly

Cab:you faced alot in life manik..... tumne har mushkil ka Samna muskura kar Kiya hai aur us mushkil se bahar aye ho humesha..... ye bhi mushkil ghadi hai baccha aur tumhe isse bahar aana hai aur ye tum kar sakte ho I know.... I'm a doctor manik aud mene dekha hai kese kitne mushkil cases bhi successful hote hai just because of patients strong will power.....

A tear drop from manik's eyes which cabir wipes

Cab:and I know you are very strong baccha and you'll fight this battle too..... please fight for us, for Abhi..... you are so precious for us we can't afford to lose you.....

Manik hugs cabir and start crying..... cabir let him cry he know Manik is holding too much pain inside him..... he have to let go that..... he just rubbed his back softly

After almost good 15 minutes cabir gently moved him away and wiped his tears and handed him glass of water

Cab: drink it you will feel better

Manik drinks the water

Cab: feeling better

Manik nodded in agreement

Cab(softly):now tell me what is bothering you

Man:I'm scared Jiju..... what if I won't make up with the surgery and if I do then I got paralyzed or something else then..... you have seen my report na you already knew about the consequences.....

Cab(sighed and hold his hand):hmm..... I know and I understand ese thoughts ana natural hai..... akhir itni badi surgery bhi toh hai and it's ok to be scared..... but don't let that fear empower you baccha..... just thik positive na kuch nahi hoga tumhe..... jab bhi tumhe dar Lage think about positive things which happen in your life after so much suffering.....think your happy moments...... just thik about the positive side if surgery went successful you can live your life  happily and normally...... don't let your smile fade

Man(sadly):I'm trying Jiju but I can't

Cab:thik about Abhi...... manik...... uske Dil me kya guzar Rahi hogi tu uski duniya hai baccha woh already apni mom aur bhai ko kho chuka hai aur ab tumhe esi halat me dekh kar use kesa feel ho raha hoga...... aur teri surgery bhi use hi karni hai soch woh kitne Dard me hoga......

Manik looks at him understanding......  he was only thinking about himself he didn't think about his bhai

Cab:usne tujhme hi apni khushiyan dhundh li hai manik...... teri muskurahat use saare Dard bhula deti hai please don't be sad like this......

Manik wipes his tears by himself

Man:I'm sorry Jiju...... main apne Dard me itna kho gaya ki ye toh bhul hi gaya ki bhai kitne pain me honge...... how can I do this Jiju......I should have think about him too

Cab(pats his cheek):shh don't overthink...... it happens...... accha ab bohot senti baatien ho gayi now give me a smile humare manik wali smile

Manik smiles fully now he is feeling much better cabir's word gave him strength... strength of fighting

Cab(smiles back): now this is our Manik just keep smiling like this

He kissed his forehead at that time Abhi entered inside he smiles watching like that both looks toward him

Cab:aree Abhi idhar aana waha kyu khada hai

Abhi come near them Manik looks at him he is looking so pale and tired it seems like he didn't sleep and eat from two days...... he sighed sadly...... y didn't he noticed it before his bhai is suffering just because him and he can't let that happen......

Ab:how are you feeling now Manik

Man(with his cute smile):I'm fine bhai aap ho na

Abhi's eyes misted with happiness watching him smile...... manik's sadness is making him restless from the Time he got conscious...... but now he is feeling relief after watching him smile...... he looks cabir he know this is his work and he is extremely thankful for that......

Man:kaha kho Gaye bhai

Abhi(comes out from his thoughts):ha Kahi nahi manik

Manik pulls his to his bed and make him sit

Ab(worried):Manik kya kar rahe ho chot lag jayegi

Manik hugs him and snuggles to him placing his head on Abhi's chest which makes Abhi smile

Man(softly):aapke rehte mujhe kuch nahi ho Sakta

Abhi kissed his head at that time nurse enter with food...... Abhi takes it and ask her to leave...... cabir also leave from there giving them privacy as he know they need each other

Man(made face looking at the soup):kya bhai fir se Wahi soup

Ab(gently): bas kuch din kaam chala lo fir sab Apne man ka khana

Man:ha ab sabr toh karna hi padega...... but aap promise karo ki aap mujhe fir mana nahi karoge......

Both of them know what are the consequences of the surgery going to be but they are just showing themselves strong in front of each other

Ab:ha baba nahi karunga abhi toh ye soup peelo

Abhi feeds him soup which Manik have while making faces which makes Abhi chuckles he was feeling so relieved after watching manik back to the normal

Ab(forwarding the medicine):ye lo medicine

Man(grumpy):bhai do din baad toh surgery hai ab medicine ki kya zarurat

Abhi glares him

Ab(sternly):manikk

Man:ha ha kha raha hu ghuro mat

Manik have his medicine immediately abhi chuckles at his action

Ab:chalo ab rest kar lo

Man(pouts):main rest kar kar k thak gaya bhai ab kitna rest karu

Ab(smiles):duniya me ek tum hi ho jo rest kar k thak jate ho

Man(raising his fake collar):ab main hu hi duniya me eklauta special piece...... toh main kya karu

Ab:ha ha special piece abhi toh rest karna padega chahe aapka man ho ya na ho

Man(stubbornly):but mera man nahi hai

Ab(side hugs him):accha toh kya karne ka man hai  Mr Malhotra ko

Man:baatein karo aap mujhse I'm getting bore

Ab(smiles):toh kya baatein ki jaye ki tum bore na ho

Man:kuch bhi......

They keep talking about random stuff and laugh in between...... like this both just forget for sometime about their surrounding and their pain in the presence of each other...... they are really each other's peace

It's been 3 days since manik was admitted to hospital and today is the surgery day

Manik is sitting in his ward being tensed...... in one hour he have his surgery he don't know whether he is going to comeback or not and if the surgery won't get successful then this is his last day of his life...... tears welled up in his eyes thinking about this......

Saathi rey thoda thehar ja 

He looks around to the empty ward then remembered about his parents their love, their smile

Yeh paanv bhi ab sambhal se jaayenge

Phir wohi barsaat hogi 
Aur ashq saare dhul se jaayenge 
Roshni din-raat hogi 
Aur sab jharokhe khul se jaayenge

He remembers about abhi...... how they met each other in orphanage and keep blabbering nonsense this spread smile on his face......

Yaara tu hi toh bandagi hai 
Yaara tu hi duaa 
Yaara kaisi ye berukhi hai 
Kyun judaa tu huaa

Then he remembers how he scolded him for the discharge and then how they come close to each other and became each other's world

Kehna tha aur kya kya mujhe 
Neend kyun aa gayi phir tujhe

Na na…

He remembers Cabir and his antics how he always support him and loves him

Mmm… Saathi rey thoda sa thehar ja 
Abhi mausamon ka badalna baaki hai 
O saathi rey thoda thehar ja 
Kuch door saath chalna baaki hai

He remembers how navya and astha takes care of him and loves him

Phir unhi raaston pe 
Tere mere kadmon ka milna baaki hai 
Dard mein, ranjishon mein 
Sang bujhna aur jalna baaki hai

He remembers about nandini their fights and then their friendship how their relation changed from hate to love yes he start loving her after nandini's proposal he start getting attracted toward her and her chirpy yet caring nature

Yaara tu hi toh bandagi hai 
Yaara tu hi duaa 
Yaara kaisi ye berukhi hai 
Kyun judaa tu huaa

Then he remembers Sid how he always stood behind him always

Haan tere aur meri darmiyaan 
Ab bhi baki hai ik daastaan

He was lost in memories at that time rooms door open and abhi entered there he watched manik in tears and lost somewhere...... he can understand his fear he is also scared but he have faith in God......

He went near manik and pulls him in his embrace manik started crying

Ab:shhh baccha ese rote nahi...... you are my strong boy na......

Man(trying to control his tears): I love you Bhai you are the best brother in the world

Abhi feels overwhelmed listening manik word his love always overwhelmed him

Ab(caresses his hairs): and you are the best little brother one could ever have

They broke the hug

Ab(cups his face):you are the best thing happened in my life baccha and trust me I won't let you leave me ever

Man:I trust you bhai and I'll never leave you

Both hugs again at that time others entered

Cab:toh yaha Bharat milap chal Raha hai bhai

Manik and Abhi seperated from the hug and look at them

Nav:kya cabir tum bhi na kitne cute lag rahe the dono ese

Man:I'm born cute hu di

As(smiles):no doubt......

Navya went near Manik and sit beside him

Nav:hath aage karo

Manik confused but forward his hand Navya tied holly thread on his hand

Nav:matarani tumhari raksha karengi  (she kissed his forehead) jaldi se thik ho jao

Manik smiles in tears and hugs her

Man: thank you for everything di love you

Navya broke the hug and hits him gently

Nav(with misted eyes): love you too...... but mujhe nahi chahiye tumhara thank you...... tum bas jaldi se thik ho

Manik smiles

Cab(pats his shoulder): thik toh hoga hi Sher hai humara

Navya nodded and cabir side hugs Manik

Sid(giving him a quick hug):get well soon bro

Man(smiles):I will bro don't worry

Astha comes near him with a small bowl

Man(curious):isme kya hai bhabhi

As:dahi shakkar...... tum itne bade imtehaan k liye ja rahe ho na isiliye...... meri mummy kehti hai dahi shakkar kha kar koi kaam karne jao toh woh kaam humesha Safal hota hai......

Manik and abhi's eyes misted listening her she feed that to Manik and then kissed his head

As(ruffles his hairs): fight hard fighter boy

Manik nodded emotionally

Astha moved to Abhi and forward spoon with dahi shakkar to Abhi

Ab(confused): mujhe kyu

As(feeding him):kyuki tum bhi toh itni badi surgery k liye ja rahe ho na

Abhi nodded

Ab:accha ab sab bahar chalo...... Manik ko le Jane ka time ho Raha hai

All gets emotional and hugs Manik together...... he gets overwhelmed with the love they have for him...... now if the death also comes he'll go peacefully

All leave from there Nandini was about to go Manik hold her hand...... she turned being confused

Nan:kya hua Manik

Man:I wanna tell you something Nandini

Nan(puzzled):ha bolo na

Man(sincerely): Nandini I love you

Nandini gets shocked listening that

Nan:Manik

Man:I know tum kya soch Rahi ho...... Yahi na ki suddenly mujhe kya ho Gaya...... actually it's not suddenly Nandini...... I have feelings for you from long but I didn't realised that...... maybe because of our friendship and because of my messed up life

He holds nandini's hand

Man:but after you expressed your feeling tab mujhe dheere dheere realise hone Laga ki I also love you

Nandini's eyes welled up listening him she is too happy...... she was waiting for this day from so long and his stupid Love chose this day to express his feelings......

Man:I'm sorry Nandini for rejecting your feelings that day...... but it's all because of that only agar main woh nahi karta toh main apni feelings kabhi realise nahi kar pata......

Nan(chuckles in tears): bohot sahi din Chuna hai ye bolne ka tumne

Man(embarrassed):ab main kya Karu meri life me itne twist hai toh

Nandini  chuckles and kissed his forehead Manik smiles

Nan(hopefully): please come back soon

Manik(taking her hand in his):I will tumhe acche se propose bhi toh karna hai

Nan(smiles in tears):I love you Manik

Man(kissed her hands):I love you too miss ladaku

Nandini chuckles listening him

After meeting everyone Manik was taken to Operation theatre for his surgery...... Abhi and specialist brain surgery Dr Lewis who was called from England are going to perform his surgery......

Abhi was about to enter inside cabir rushed toward him and hugs him Abhi get startled by sudden hug

Cab(breaking the hug): all the best Abhi

Abhi gets teary Astha wipes his tears

As:hy kya hua ye aasu kyu

Ab(shooks his head): nothing just getting nervous it's not going to be easy for me...... Manik ka chehra dekhkar uski surgery karna......

Cab: it's not going to be easy but I know you can do it...... you are best at your work doctor Abhimanyu Thakkar......

Nav:ha Abhi aaj tak tumne koi case nahi hara don't forget that

Abhi nodded he is getting confident after listening their words

Nan:you promised Manik ki aap use kuch nahi hone denge and I know mere Abhi bhai kabhi apna promise nahi todte

Abhi smiles and pats her cheek

Ab:ab bhi nahi todunga I'll bring our Manik back

All hugs him tightly

All:all the best bhai

Abhi: thank you everyone

Saying this he went inside the OT his heart breaks again watching his brother lying there all ready for surgery

He went near him and caresses his hairs lovingly then kissed his forehead

Ab: please fight for us bacche your bhai can't live without you.... you are ray of happiness in my life please come back to me

He again kissed his head  

It's been 4 hours Manik's surgery was going inside..... here outside the OT all r standing worried & tensed.... These 4 hours are the worst hours for them of their whole life

Nandini was sitting numb her eyes were stuck on OT's door cabir was pacing there being extremely tensed...... Astha and Navya were in the hospital temple praying for manik's  successful surgery and Sid was sitting beside Nandini trying to comfort her...... everyone wants only one thing Manik to be fine as this surgery is not going to be easy for the doctors......

After approx 1 hour doctor come out with abhi..... all watched them immediately run towards them.... Astha and Navya also reached there watching doctor coming out

Nav(impatiently):abhi Manik is fine na..... kuch nahi hua na use....

Nan(crying):ha bhai surgery successful thi na?

All were bombarding them with questions but they are standing there with sad expressions...... which scared cabir as he is also a doctor whenever there was some bad news they have these expressions......

Cabir moved near Abhi and asked him

Cab:Manik thik hai na cabir.....he is ali...(he closed his eyes before completing the sentence)

Abhi shooks his head in no with expressionless face...... before he completes everyone's gets shattered it felt like someone snatched floor beneath their feets......

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