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Next morning @ 6 am

Manik,Abhi nd Cabir r still sleeping peacefully...... Manik is sleeping straight...... whereas Abhi is just putting his hand in manik's hand nd Cabir is totally cuddling Manik...... as he have habit of sleeping with Navya (😂)...... @ that time Manik sleep gets disturb he opened his eyes and was about to sit but feel something heavy on him...... he look at the direction nd smiles watching his both brothers...... he is feeling very overwhelmed from their gesture...... he don't want to disturb them that's y he still lying in same position...... after sometime again sleep overtook him...... 

After sometime Navya reach mm....... butler open the door she asked about the trio nd got to know they are still sleeping....... she shakes her head nd went toward manik's room nd watch the adorable site....... she smiles nd take out her mobile nd click their pics....... then went toward them and start waking them Manik nd Abhi wakes up immediately.......

Man(rubbing his eyes):good morning di.......

Nav(smiles and ruffles his hairs):very good morning Mani....... (to Abhi) good morning Abhi.......

Ab(smiles): morning Navu (look toward cabir) ye kunbhkarn nahi utha abhi

Manik chuckles listening this

Nav:itni jaldi kese uth jayega.......

Then Navya  try to wake him again....... but Cabir pulled and hugs her.......

Cab(in sleepy voice):sone do na navu....... aaj Sunday hai tum bhi so jao....... let's cuddle Babu.......

Abhinik chuckles while navya turns red in embarrassment....... she immediately push him nd stands....... but Cabir is still sleeping.......

Nav(glares his sleeping figure): idiot monkey ruko m batati hu.......

Man(teasing her): that's not fair di....... itne pyaar se bol rahe h toh so jao na.......

Navya galres him....... while Manik gulps in fear....... she immediately pick jug filled with water from side table and pour over Cabir....... he immediately gets up with jerk nd start shouting.......

Cab(shouting):baadh aagai baadh....... bhago navu bachao.......

Manik Abhi nd Navya start laughing loudly watching his condition....... listening their laugh Cabir comes in reality he watched trio who are laughing at him....... then remembered what he did few minutes ago with Navya....... he slapped himself mentally nd immediately runs toward washroom nd closed the door....... watching him like this they laugh more nd Navya shouts.......

Nav:are kapde toh lekar jao.......

She went near washroom....... Cabir slowly opens the door and peep little then snatch the clothes from her nd again closed the door....... Manik nd Abhi again laughs.......

Nav(turned toward them):chalo ab bohot has Liya....... now go nd freshen up m breakfast dekhti hu.......

Both nodded positively nd move from there

After sometime

Navya is arranging breakfast....... @ that time Cabir come there she glares him.......

Cab(smiles): good morning wifey.......

Nav(hits him playfully): stupid.......

Cab:accha tum ghar nahi gayi....... Nandini Akeli hogi na....... mujhe toh dhyan hi nahi Raha m kab so Gaya....... pata nahi kya soch Rahi hogi woh....... how could I be so careless.......

He was saying in one go....... ofcourse he is worried for her sister also.......

Nav(assuring): shh calm down Cabir....... m raat me ghar gayi thi msg bhi Kiya tha na tumhe.......

Cabir take out his phone nd see.......

Nav:and don't worry woh apni friend Siya k sath gayi h....... aaj uska birthday h toh....... she want to spend day with her woh sham Ko jaldi ajayegi.......

Cabir sighs in relief nd kissed her forehead.......

Cab: thanks.......

Nav(glaring him):ye thanks wanks baad me....... pehle ye batao ye Jo thodi der pehle tumne kiya woh kya tha.......

Cabir remember that nd ruffles his hairs in embarassment.......

Cab:aree yrr ab m kya Karu mujhe laga m Apne ghar pe hu

Navya hits him on his shoulder.......

Nav(glaring him):idiot how embarrassing that was seriously....... Manik nd Abhi kya sochenge.......

At that time manik's voice come from back

Man:koi kuch nahi sochega di....... we are adult....... we can understand Cabir jiju's situation.......

Both come near them.......

Cab(side hugs Manik):Bhagwan esa sala sab ko de.......

Trio chuckles listening him.......

Ab:tu nahi sudhrega.......

Cab(raising his imaginary collar):no chance.......

Abhi shakes his head in disbelief.......

Ab:breakfast kare....... mujhe bohot bhuk lagi h......

Man:ha mujhe bhi.....

Then they sits nd start having their breakfast

Ab(while eating):Manik ab tabiyat thik lag Rahi hai na....... koi problem toh nahi ho Rahi.......

Navya nd Cabir get attentive listening Abhi....... whereas Manik nodded positively.......

Man(smiles in assuring way):ha bhai I'm absolutely fine.......

Cab: that's great....... toh chalo aaj kahi bahar chalte h....... chutti bhi hai....... kafi dino se Gaye bhi nahi h.......

Nav(excited): great idea Cabir....... Manik,abhi are you agree.......

Man(very happy): I'm toh 200% agree   ask from bhai

Ab:u guys carry on....... mujhe bohot kaam h toh m nahi ja paunga.......

Trio's excitement fades listening him

Cab:aree yrr ye humesha ka h tera....... u r such a spoiler huhh.......

Nav:it's ok Cabir....... we can go some other time na....... use sach me kaam hoga.......

Cabir rolls his eyes as he always do this....... Manik gets sad coz he really want to go....... coz he didn't went anywhere from many days nd last few days r very bad for him......

Man(fake smile):m medicines kha kar aata hu.......

Saying this he leave....... cavya noticed his sadness.......

Cab: kya yrr Abhi uska mood off kar diya....... kitna excited tha woh Jane k liye.......

Abhi look toward him.......

Cab:uske liye hi toh bola tha mene....... pichle kuch din kitne sad and tiring they uske liye.......

Abhi can feel what Cabir is saying....... @ that tym Manik come down again....... Abhi looks at him he seems upset nd he really don't want that....... so he changed his mind of not to go.......

Ab:ok guys I'm ready....... let's go but Jana kaha h.......

Manik gets happy he immediately hugs Abhi in excitement....... he also smiles.......

Ab:but Jana kaha h.......

They start discussing where to go except Manik....... he wants to say something but is getting hesitate....... Navya noticed that.......

Nav:Mani tum batao Hume kaha Jana chahiye

Man(smiles):jaha aapko thik lage di

Nav:aree ese kese....... I know tumhe kuch bolna h bolo na.......

Man(hesitating):w...woh can we go to orphanage....... if you don't have any problem.......

Trio looks at each other then smiles

Cab(chuckles):Manik tu bhi na ye toh tu ese bhi bol sakta tha....... itna hesitate kyu ho Raha h.......

Nav:ha mani chalo fast fast ready ho jao....... hume nikalna bhi h.......

Man(happily): really.......

Ab:ha really....... chalo hume baccho k liye kuch Lena bhi padega.......

Manik run toward his room excitedly to get ready....... Abhi & cavya smiles watching him.......

After sometime

They reached orphanage with lots of chocolates, balloons, some gifts & some more edible things.......

They enter inside and watch kids r playing....... they smiles watching them.......

Man(shouts excitedly):hello baccha party.......

Kids turn nd watch Manik they gets super happy....... they immediately runs toward him nd hugs him.......

Kids(happily shouts): rockstar.......

Manik also sits on his knees and try to hug all of them....... Abhi & cavya smiles watching them.......

Man:how are you all.......

Manik broke the hug and went inside....... kids start telling their cute complaints  to their rockstar....... Manik is smiling watching their cute faces....... @ that tym head of the orphanage also come there he greets them and then turn toward kids.......

Man(pointing toward cavya& Abhi): dekho baccho aaj mere saath koi aur bhi Aya h aap sab se Milne....... (he went toward Abhi) ye h Abhi bhai u all know him right.......

Kids reply yes then he introduces cavya....... kids start talking with them too....... At that time a girl come near Manik nd pull his shirt Manik look down nd bent to listen her.......

Man(lovingly): what happen baby....... u need anything.......

Girl(nodded in no):rockstar....... today is my birthday.......

Manik nd others goes aww on her cuteness....... Manik immediately kissed her forehead then hugs her.......

Man:happy birthday Princess....... toh bolo kya chahiye aapko.......

Nav(pulling her cheeks):u know baccha ur rockstar bring cake for u.......

Girl(excited): really.......

Cab:haanji birthday girl what's ur name.......

Girl(cutely):mera naam sarika h .......

Ab:cute name sarika....... happy birthday chalo let's cut the cake.......

All children start shouting happily....... while they are also enjoying their company....... then they arrange cake on the table and then Sarika cuts the cake....... they all sings birthday song then she feed cake to Manik nd everyone one by one.......

Sarika(to Manik): rockstar please sing a song for me na please.......

Then all start insisting him.......

Nav(cutely):yes rockstar please Gao na.......

Manik smiles and agrees he take a flute from one kid nd start playing it....... then sing indicating toward tree.......

Dekho Dekho Kya Woh Ped Hai, Chaadar Odhe Ya Khada Koi

Acting like thinking....... then indicated toward sky.......

Baarish Hai Ya Aasmaan Ne Chhod Diye Hai Nal Khule Kahin

Children also start thinking....... while Navya nd Cabir chuckles nd Abhi smiles....... all kids start dancing.......

Ho Hum Dekhe Yeh Jahaan Waise Hi Jaise Nazar Apani

Manik start dancing with them

Khulke Socho Aao, Pankh Jara Failaao
Rang Naye Bikhraao, Chalo Chalo Chalo Chalo Naye Khaab Bunle

He drag Navya nd Cabir also to dance

Bum Bum Bum, Bum Bum Bum Bole
Hey Bumchik Bole, Are Masti Mein Dole

All start dancing while Abhi is enjoying watching them

(Bum Bum Bole, Masti Mein Dole
Bum Bum Bole, Masti Mein Tu Dol Re) - 2

Manik ask from one girl

Bhala Machhliyaan Bhi Kyun Udati Nahin, Aise Bhi Socho Na

He ask from cavya....... they also act like thinking.......

Socho Suraj Roj Nahaaye Ya, Baal Bhigoke Yeh Budhdhu Banaaye Hame

Manik sing making cute angry face.......

Saare Taare Tim Timaaye, Ya Phir Gusse Mein Kuchh Badbadaate Rahein

All start dancing again....... while Abhi is fully enjoying watching them....... especially Manik coz he is this much happy after those painful days.......

Khulke Socho Aao, Pankh Jara Failaao
Rang Naye Bikhraao, Chalo Chalo Chalo Chalo Naye Khaab Bunle

Manik & Cabir bring chocolate Box nd Navya brings balloons....... and start distributing them among the children's.......

Ye Ye Ye Ye Ye.....
Bum Bum Bole, Masti Mein Dole
Bum Bum Bole, Masti Mein Tu Dol Re

He completed the song nd all kids again hugs him.......

Kids(happily): thank you rockstar, thank u Navya di, Cabir bhai nd Abhi bhaiya.......

They smiles listening them....... sarika come near Manik nd sign him to bend upto her height....... Manik did the same she kissed his Cheek.......

Sarika(cutely): thank you rockstar....... we love you u r the bestest.......

All kids(shouts):we love you rockstar.......

Cavya nd Abhi smiles listening them....... while Manik gets emotional watching their love toward him.......

Man(lovingly):I love you too bacchas

Like this they spend their whole day in the orphanage with children's.......

It's evening approx 5 pm now kids are tired of playing nd Manik too....... he is feeling very tired but he is not showing....... but Abhi noticed it nd he knows now it's time to leave.......

Ab:so baccho ab hum chalte h....... I'm very tired now and I know aap log bhi honge....... but hum fir jaldi ayenge pakka promise.......

Saying this they bids bye to kids....... then Manik meets head of the orphanage Ms Smith....... whom they colled mother....... he hugs her....... she also kissed his forehead.......

Ms Smith:take care my child .......

Man(smiles):u too.......

Saying this he went to bid  bye to kids....... Ms Smith went toward Abhi & cavya.......

Ms Smith:I am very glad that u all r with him....... he is very nice boy....... ha thoda bachpana h usme jo kayi logo Ko irritate karta h kabhi kabhi....... but Dil ka bohot saaf h .......

Trio smiles as they already get to know that

Ms Smith:he lost his parents in  very young age nd then that disease....... I don't know y God is giving this much pain to this pure soul....... but uski himmat ki bhi daat deni padegi ki he doesn't lose his smile, his strength & doesn't lost himself in darkness....... I hope ki woh jaldi thik ho jaye.......

Ab(immediately):he will....... I won't let anything happens to him.......

Ms Smith(smiles):now I have full faith that nothing will happen to him....... aap log Jo h uske Sath....... bas kabhi use akela mat chodna....... warna agar is baar uska dil tuta na woh toh fir jodna bohot mushkil ho jayega.......

Cab:hum kabhi uska sath nahi chodenge....... we promise.......

Ms Smith(smiles):god bless you baccho.......

Trio smiles and then left from there

After sometime inside the car

Cavya were on front seat and abhinik @ passenger seat

Cab:I really enjoyed at orphanage seriously....... ab m regularly waha jaunga......

Nav(smiling):ha bohot sukoon milta h un baccho k sath....... kyu Abhi....... u enjoyed na.......

Ab:ha unke chehre me smile lakar I really feel overwhelmed.......

Nav:yeah nd they love Manik soo much....... right Manik.......

They look toward Manik nd see he is sleeping Navya smiles.......

Nav: aww he looks so cute while sleeping....... just like an innocent child.......

Cab(turn):aree ye so Gaya.......

Ab:ha tired tha bohot....... he was not suppose to do this much activities....... but he is Manik.......

Nav(chuckling):he is a ball of energy......

Abhi nd Cabir chuckles

Cab:now I get it....... ki woh tired wala  excuse kyu banaya Gaya tha.......

Ab(rolling his eyes): it's not like that....... I was also tired.......

Cab:ok ok Maan Liya.......

Like this they reached their home

Next day @ college

Manik enters in college....... @ that time Sid watch him and immediately went near him nd hugs him.......

Sid(worried):how are you buddy....... I was so worried for u....... koi khabar tak nahi thi.......

Man(smiling):I'm fine yrr....... tu faltu me chinta kar Raha h.......

Sid glared him.....@ that time someone taps manik's shoulder....... he turn nd watch Nandini there.......

Nan:w...Woh Manik I'm really sorry for that day....... I didn't realised what I said in anger I'm sorry.......

Sid angrily glares her....... while Manik frowns.......

Man(sarcastically):Is ur sorry mends everything.......

Nandini looks @ Manik....... as she is watching this Avtar of Manik Malhotra first time.......

Man(snaps his fingers infront of her):answer me....... Is ur not so feeling sorry wala sorry will erase ur poisonous words.......

Nandini looks @ him with blank expression

Man:what r u watching....... tumhe kya Laga ki tum mujhe sorry bologi aur m Maan jaunga right....... coz u think I'm a dumb isn't it....... but miss Nandini u r highly mistaken....... coz jo tumne Manik dekha h woh Manik tumse isiliye acche se baat karne ki koshish karta tha ,isiliye tumhari baaton par react nahi karta tha coz u were not important for me....... just ur brother and sister-in-law is important for me....... I respect them....... that's y I don't want any problems b/w us....... not like ki I want to do friendship with you or I like u....... u get it.......

Nandini gets angry listening that....... coz now it's come to her ego....... she was about to say something but Manik cuts in b/w.......

Man:kya kaha tha tumne k di nd jiju r showing sympathy on me....... but u r wrong....... u know what they love me they trust me....... now do whatever you want to do to spoil our relation....... but ye yaad rakhna kahin mere rishtey bigadne k chakkar me khud k rishtey na Bigad lo....... tumhara ye Jo attitude h na tumhe pachtane pe majboor na kar de.......

Nan(angrily):you....... dekh lungi me tumhe....... it's my mistake ki m tum Jese Insaan se sorry bolne ayi huhh.......

Man(smirked):ha ha dekh Lena....... ab toh dekhna hi padega....... but u'll see the different version of Manik Malhotra....... which I rarely shows to anyone.......

Saying this both give Eachother dangerous look nd leave from there.......

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Few words for manik

Few words for abhi

Few words for cabir

Few words for Navya

Few words for Nandini

Few words for manik's bond with kids

Few words for abhinik & cavya's bond

Few words for manan Tashan

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