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Continuing from previous part......

Manik is startled with sudden hug...... while the girl is crying continuously...... after awhile Manik broke the hug & cups her face......

Man(assuring):I'm fine......

Girl(crying): how could u Mani...... how could u hide this from me...... itni badi baat mani......

Man(hold her hand):I'm fine Navya di...... see perfectly fine......

Yes the girl is Navya guys

@ that time Cabir also entered inside the ward & smile watching Manik fine......

Nav(glaring him):yeah...... yeah...... perfectly fine...... dikh Raha h kitne fine ho tum...... ek bar ghar chalo dekhna kesi class leti hu tumhari ......

Man(pout):kyu......

Nav(teary):itni badi baat kese chupa sakte ho tum mujhse mani...... u told me that I'm ur sister na......

Man:kya di...... ye bhi koi batane wali baat h...... ab m khud se aakar aapse ye toh nahi kehta na ki...... di I'm going to die in some months......

Before he completes Navya, Cabir & Abhi shouts

Trio(glaring him): shut-up Manik......

Manik gets quite

Nav(glaring him): tum toh ghar chalo ek Baar fir batati hu tumhe...... ye mat sochna ki bimar ho toh chod dungi......

Ab:me too......

Cab:me three......

Manik looking shocked at the trio

Man(cutely):haww...... kitne Hitler ho teeno k teeno...... ek bimar Insaan par itna julm...... sharm nahi aati aap logo ko......

Trio rolled their eyes watching his drama

Ab:nahi bilkul nahi aati...... jab bimar Insaan khud hume itna pareshan karta h...... toh itna toh banta h......

Cavya chuckles...... while Manik pouts......

Ab: don't make faces...... rest karo...... u need rest I'll come after sometime

Man(raising his eyebrows): kaha ja rahe ho......

Cab: apni gf k pas......

Manik & Navya looks @ them shocked

Man(shocked): whatt...... kya bhai aapne Milaya bhi nahi mujhe......

Cabir chuckles...... whereas Abhi glares him......

Ab(glaring Cabir): shut-up Manik...... he is just joking...... m Apne cabin me ja raha...... my patients r waiting...... then I'll go to the doctor for ur discharge......

Man:ooo......

Ab:yeah now just sleep for sometime...... Navya take care of him properly......

Abhi winks & navya nodded...... Manik watch them and understand which type of care they are talking about...... he immediately lay down...... then Abhi left nd cabir chuckles......

Cab:itna dar......

Man(grumpily):aree unka kya bharosa...... abhi injection laga diya toh......

Cavya laughed at this......

Cab:accha baki baatein Baad me...... right now take rest m bhi thoda apne patients dekh lu......

Manik nodded then Cabir left from there

@ afternoon

Manik is sleeping due to medicine effects & Navya was sitting on nearby couch...... @ that time a doctor enter to check Manik & start his checkup...... coz of this manik's sleep gets disturb he woke up and watch doctor......

Doc:so how r u young man......

Man(smiling): I'm fine Dr......

Doc: that's great...... btw where's ur brother......

Man(confused):brother?

Doc:yes dr Abhi...... he only told us that u r his little brother......

Listening this Manik nd Navya gets shocked...... as acc. to Manik abhi don't like him much...... after listening this he feels very happy......

Doc: bohot pyaar karte h woh aapse...... bohot Jada tensed the kal se aapko esi condition me dekh kar...... ek min k liye bhi soye nahi h woh...... raat bhar aapke pas baith huye the aur aapke uthne ka wait kar rahe the......

Manik gets teary listening this...... he never imagine something like this will happen...... he was so overwhelmed by this behaviour of Abhi......

Doc:nd yeah ur jiju too...... u r really blessed to have them in ur life......

Man(teary):yes I'm dr......

Doc:ok take care......

After doctor leave navya come near Manik nd sit beside him...... and manik immediately hugs her......

Man(teary):do I deserve this love di......

Navya broke the hug and cups his face

Nav(wiping his tears):yes mani...... u deserve everything best baby...... y r u saying this......

Man(innocently): sacchi......

Nav(kissed his forehead): ofcourse......

Their moment gets disturbed by Voice of door...... they turn nd watch abhi & Cabir entered......

Cab(cheerfully):hy Manik how r u

Man(smiles): I'm fine jiju......

Ab(come near Manik):come on get ready u get discharge......

& This bring smile on tired face of Manik

Man(happily): really......

Ab: ofcourse...... m jhut kyu bolunga......

Man: wow toh chale......

Saying this he gets up from bed in excitement...... but feels dizzy and gets stumbled...... as he was still very weak he was about to fall but Abhi hold him on time & made him sit on bed ......while cavya r watching him worriedly......

Ab(angrily):r u mad dimag kharab ho Gaya h kya tumhara...... abhi gir jate na...... u know na how much weak u r...... 

Man(pouts):I'm sorry......

Cab:easy bro...... ghar hi jana h rajdhani express banne ki jarurat nahi h...... aram se bhi Kam ho sakta h......

Nav:exactly bilkul sabr nahi h......

Man(cutely):sorry na......

Cab(smiles):accha ok ese faces mat banao chalo I'll help you in changing...... Abhi tu jab tak discharge papers ready karwa......

Abhi nodded and left......

@ MM

Manik is settled in his bed while abhi is checking his medicines & Cabir is talking with Manik randomly...... @ that time Navya entered there with soup and some fruits for Manik...... she went near him and sit infront of him......

Nav:chalo ab bohot baatein ho gayi...... now have something tumhe medicines bhi khana h......

Manik look at soup and make faces

Man(whining):di please...... m ye nahi piyunga it's so tasteless......

Nav:are bina taste kiye kese pata it's tasteless......

Man: mujhe pata hai......

Nav:ese nahi bolte mani...... pina toh padega chahe kesa bhi ho......

Man(sadly): kya di kuch hi dino ki toh baat h...... khane do na...... esa tasteless food khakar kya hoga...... Jana toh mujhe h hi chahe kitna bhi healthy kha lu......

Listening this trio gets hell angry...... Fear of losing Manik engulfed them...... especially Abhi after so long he get someone who get this much important to him...... whom he called his family...... nd after listening manik's words his heart gets shattered......

Abhi(angrily):manikk...... shut up...... just shut up...... jo man me ayega bologe...... chahe usse kisi ko dukh kyu na pohoche but nahi tumhe toh bolna h...... agar m kahu ki I want to die...... toh accha lagega tumhe sukoon milega h na...... coz hum toh kuch h hi nahi sirf sympathy dikha rahe h......(pointing toward Navya) ye navya subha se jhoote asu baha Rahi h......  (pointing toward Cabir) ye Cabir kal raat se soya nahi h tumhari jhooti fikr me...... aur m mujhe toh chod hi do...... noone is going to understand me...... socha tha tum mil gaye ho toh mujhe ek bhai mil gaya ab akela nahi hu...... koi toh h mera apna bhi...... but (teary) but no akele rehna hi meri kismat h......

Manik gets teary listening this...... he never imagined that his words effects Abhi this much...... he don't know that Abhi think him as his family......

Ab(angrily): and kya kaha tumne kuch din bache h tumhare pas...... toh ek baat sun lo meri kuch nahi hone dunga tumhe m nahi Jane dunga kahin...... chahe tum mujhe apna mano ya nahi......

Saying this he left from there...... Manik watch cavya who was equally hurt......

Cab:u hurt him this tym Manik...... don't loose hope Manik atleast for us......

Saying this he also left only Navya was there

Man(teary):di......

But Navya didn't reply nd left from there...... manik gets guilty watching them like this......

Man:shit Manik kar diya na sad teeno ko...... how idiot u r kya jarurat thi ye bolne ki......

He get down from bed......

Man:I have to say sorry to them...... bohot hurt kar diya mene unhe......

Saying this he went down nd watch trio r sitting in living room...... he went toward them they watched him and get shocked+worried...... abhi's anger increased watching his carelessness toward his health......

Man(looking down):bhai,di,jiju I'm really sorry...... I don't mean to hurt you...... it's just ki everything is very new for me...... mene mom dad k jaane k baad ye kabhi experience nahi Kiya...... mene kabhi nahi socha tha ki mere rehne ya na rehne se kisi Ko fark padega...... kabhi kisi ne bola hi nahi...... (teary) isiliye mene woh bol diya...... I'm really very sorry for hurting u all...... please mujhse gussa mat ho next time se esa nahi hoga ......

Manik again looks down after saying this...... while cavya & Abhi r just flabbergast listening him every time this boy reveal something so heart-wrenching...... they don't know how to react...... but still they are angry on him for saying that words...... they don't forgive him easily...... so that he don't repeat this type of words again...... 

Nav: it's ok hume Bura nahi laga...... tum rest karo u r still weak...... m tumhare liye khane k liye bhejti hu kuch jo tumhe pasand......

Manik understand Navya's tone that she is still angry nd just pretending to be Normal...... he silently left from there nd Navya looked at abhir nd sighs......

Cab:yrr he have point...... use kese pata chalega ki hume uski batao ka bura lagega...... humne kabhi khul k usse nahi kaha ki he is important for us......

Ab:yes I know...... but ab batana jaruri h...... isiliye agar itni jaldi maan Gaye toh woh fir repeat karega ye...... yrr m nahi chahta ki he loose his hope of living......

Cavya nodded...... they were busy in talking...... @ that time they listen guitar's voice they turn nd get shocked watching Manik who was standing there strumming guitar...... they look @ eachother...... then Manik come near them and start singing......

Chalo jaane do..
Ab chodo bhi

He come near Abhi nd pouts......

Chalo jaane do..
Ab chodo bhi

He sings while making cute cute faces for melting their anger......

Itna bhi kya gussa karna
kuch apni kaho..
kuch meri suno..

Then he move toward Cabir nd sing

Yun chup chup rehkar
Dil hi dil me kya kudhana..

He hold his ears and ask for sorry 

Chalo jaane do..
Ab chodo bhi
Chalo jaane do..
Ab chodo bhi

He plays guitar nd walk around them...... trio r just mesmerized  by his voice......

Itna bhi kya gussa karna
kuch apni kaho..
kuch meri suno..
Yun chup chup rehkar
Dil hi dil me kya kudhana..

Chalo jaane do
Ab.. chodo bhi

He went near Abhi nd sings

Tum hi mujhse rooth gaye to
Kisse baat karu me..

He indicates trio

Jee utta hun tumse milke
Tum jo ho to hu me

He looks toward Navya

Tum hi mujhse rooth gaye to
Kisse baat karu me..
Jee utta hun tumse milke
Tum jo ho to hu me

Indicating Cabir he sings

Mujhse iss pal ho muh phere
Phir bhi ho tum mere
Dekho nahi accha hota hai itna chidhna

Cabir smiles but hides...... Manik sings further with holding his ears again......

Chalo jaane do..
Ab chodo bhi

He looks toward trio but don't find any changes in their expression...... he gets disheartened......

he was about to go but his eyes falls near stairs...... he watch a cute little child of 5 years sitting grumpily......

(Imagine him sitting grumpy)

@ that time his mother come near him singing......

Chalo jaane do..
Ab chodo bhi

Manik smiles coz he was imagining his childhood memory...... the child is he himself and the lady is his mom nyeonika...... she sings sitting beside him......

Mere dil ke tukde
Mere nanhe se sehjade

Neyo pulls his cheeks but manik turn his face otherside cutely......

Mujhse yum naraj na ho
Itni na mujhe saja de

She pouts nd hold her ears...... but manik didn't look at her......

Mere dil ke tukde
Mere nanhe se sehjade

She side hugs him but Manik stands up nd fold his hand near his chest......

Mujhse yum naraj na ho
Itni na mujhe saja de

Neyo stands beside him nd again hold her ears

Dekho kab se tumhe bulaye
Meri tarsi baahe

She gets little teary......

Aa pyar karu main
Bahut huwa ladna bhidna

Manik looks at her nd immediately wipes her tears and hugs her...... she again sings......

Chalo jaane do..
Ab chodo bhi

Manav also joined them and they are looking cute complete family......

Manik comes out of imagination and immediately wipes his tears so that no one can notice...... but cavya & Abhi noticed it...... they understand that he is missing his parents......

Manik sings sadly......

Chalo jaane do..

Ab chodo bhi..

He looks down sadly & turns to go but stopped listening abhi's voice

Ab:I hope it doesn't happen next time

Manik turns nd look at him confused

Ab:ese kya dekh rahe ho...... nahi ho ga na dobara......

Manik immediately shakes his head in no

Nav:pakka

Man: pakka promise

Navya went to him and hug him

Man:ab aplog mujhse gussa nahi ho na......

Cab(smiles): bilkul nahi...... aur itna cute song sunkar toh Sara gussa bhag Gaya......

Manik smiles widely...... but looking exhausted as he is not suppose to do this much activities now...... but Manik is manik nd Abhi as a doctor understand looking at his face that he needs rest......

Nav:accha ab bohot hua ab room me jao m kuch khane Ko lati hu......

Ab:Navya bring my food also there......

Cab:mera bhi......

Man(murmurs): that means fir se soup

But Abhi listened & smiles...... Manik start climbing the stairs running to go to his room Abhi stop him......

Ab:oye superhero......

Manik turns

Ab(glaring him): Normal insaan ho yrr tum...... bhul kyu jate ho abhi bhi bohot weak ho...... ese uchhal kud karoge toh chakkar ajayenge dheere dheere jao......

Manik nodded like an obedient kid...... & Cabir chuckles......

After sometime @ manik's room

Cabir nd Abhi r having there food sitting on couch...... while manik is sitting on bed nd Navya is sitting infront of him nd feeding him soup...... while Manik is having it by making faces......

Ab(chuckles):Manik don't worry ek do din me Normal khana kha lena...... esi shaklein mat banao......

Nav:ha Mani aur kal na m tumhare liye kheer bana kar laungi ok......

Listening this Manik gave his million dollar smile

Man(excited):kheeeer.... Wow di u r best

Trio hit their forehead

Nav(wink): woh toh m hu......

All chuckles listening her...... after sometime all completed their food then Navya left to kitchen for having food nd then come again nd all start talking......

Nav:wese Manik tum bohot accha gate ho...... nd song toh bohot hi accha tha......

Listening this Manik expression changes he gets teary......

Man(in low voice):my mom dad used to sing this song for me...... whenever I get upset or angry with them...... (murmurs) ab toh Jese fark hi nahi padta unhe meri usdasi se......

Trio looked at eachother painfully

Man(smiles in tears):u know my mom dad have very beautiful voice...... tabhi toh mujh me ye quality ayi......

Navya placed her hand in his hand and smiles

Man(teary): they loves me so much di...... u know kabhi mujh par hath nahi uthaya unhone...... marna toh dur ki baat h kabhi mujhse unchi awaj me baat tak nahi ki......

Cavya nd Abhi also gets teary listening him

Man:mom used to call me Jaan nd dad baccha...... people called us a perfect family...... and we were...... meri itni si chot dono ki Jaan nikal deti thi...... ek aansu bardasht nahi kar sakte the meri ankhon me...... ek bar toh dad punched my teacher coz he slaps me for my mistake......

He smiles in tears nd others too

Man(teary asked from navya):Abhi kyu nahi dikhta unhe mera Dard di...... kyu m rota hu toh woh chup nahi karate...... kyu meri chot unhe takleef nahi deti...... u know unke jaane k baad kayi bar gussa hua m unse...... socha ki woh ayenge mujhe manane but nahi aye...... chale Gaye mujhe akela chod kar...... chale Gaye......

Saying this he start crying badly...... Navya also start crying with him...... Abhi come near him nd hugs him tightly...... Cabir was also in tears......

Ab(teary):shhh... Manik bas Kahi nahi gaye woh...... yahi hai tumhare andar...... tumhare Dil me......

But Manik is crying which is making Abhi worried...... he remembers last night and shiver ran down in his spine...... he immediately broke the hug and cupped his face......

Ab:bas manik no more crying ok...... u r brave boy na chalo Rona band karo......

Nav:ha mani please humare liye......

Manik stops crying finally but still sobbing...... then Abhi made him lay in bed then start caressing his hairs lovingly...... Cabir is sitting either side of bed...... Manik is in middle after sometime Manik sleeps nd Abhi, Cabir too coz trio r too much exhausted from last night......

Navya smiles watching them made them lay properly with the help of butlers...... then covers them properly and kissed manik's forehead and left to her home...... coz she don't want to leave Nandini alone she msged cabir nd left...... 

Screen freezed on sleeping faces of Manik, Cabir & Abhi

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