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After Roric leaves. Karayan is alone in his room, going over all the memories he can remember, trying to delve deeper, when he looks into the mirror, and his eyes are red. Then the Sorceress gets a hold of him and makes him relive all his memories. Starting with his father dying and his mother's remarriage, and his killing of stepfather and mother, and it all goes in from there.

Now that Iphnis is back with the others, he's able to help Karayan with some memory things, and is there when The Sorceress reveals all his most terrible memories. Iphnis is there, and is able to calm him with some more calm, nice memories.

Scene where Roric visits Miryanna to tell her of the news (that Karayan is now a wanted man and him and his deeds are known to many), while Karayan is still bed bound for the most part. He pretends to be asleep, but overhears their conversation. He's puzzled about Roric, and what he said Karayan did. It also brings back a few memories; unpleasant ones. (← Put this part before Iphnis returns, and after he leaves.)

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Miryanna looked up from her reverie when she heard a knock at the door.

"Yes?" She called, glad that Iphnis was outside. He didn't like it when people came, and it couldn't be him, for his knock was much softer.

And exactly how many people have come that you could ascertain that?

"Hallo, ma'am. There's a man here who wishes to see you," The voice of the cook came in.

Miryanna's brows furrowed. Who could it be? The cook apparently didn't know him. She stood up and went to the door to open it. She gasped when she saw who it was. "Roric!" She exclaimed at once.

"Oh, so you know him, then?" the cook said first. "I'll leave you two, then." She said, scuttling away.

Miryanna didn't blame her. Roric was never an altogether nice sight. He was cloaked in black, and weatherworn. And armed. Right now, he looked especially wild. His dark hair was unkempt, more than usual that is, and the furrow between his brows deeper than usual. He looked like he hadn't slept for at least a day. Yes, not a very welcoming, or pleasant sight, but he was Miryanna's dear friend, and she was usually glad to see him. Right now, however, she was worried and perplexed more than anything. Why was he here? He knew that his nemesis was here, and that she was taking care of him. A horrible thought struck her: Was he here to kill Karayan?

"Roric, what a pleasant surprise." She said with pasted smile.

"How false you nobility can be." He replied.

Her false smile fled. "Alright, some ruse I can put up," she sighed. "What are you here for?" She asked.

He didn't answer for a moment, and looked down at his muddied boots, his hand gripping the hilt of his sword till the knuckles were white. "Would you believe me if I said I were here for pleasant conversation?" He questioned, looking up.

She smiled wryly in spite of herself. "And you say nobility are the actors."

that wasn't acting, that was a query

He sighed and ran a hand through his shaggy hair. "I want to talk to you."

"Naturally," She said. "Promise you won't do anything uncivil?" She asked coldly.

He started at the ice in her voice and eyes. He nodded, "Yes."

"Alright then. Come on in." She opened the door to admit him.

He stepped in and at once scanned the room, as was his habit. Always wary.

"So, what did you want to talk about?" Miryanna asked.

Roric's gaze settled on Karayan, lying asleep in the bed.

Miryanna stiffened. Mixed emotions flashed across Roric's rough face. He looked at her suddenly. "Him."

She relaxed slightly. "I might have known."

Roric raked a hand through his hair. "I still don't understand."

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"That doesn't mean anything. He could return to his ways. He could remember the pleasure of killing. The thrill of knowing you have the power to take life as easily as that." Roric snapped his fingers.

Miryanna was silent for a moment before saying in a terrible voice: "You speak quite graphically. Are you reliving old memories?"

OOOOOOHHHHHH MIRYANNAA NOOOOOO D:D:D:

And now i made a little outline

Karayan remembers everything and is remorseful to say the least

Miryanna asks for half of the kingdom

Karayan helps the others in defeating the great Sorceress

Yanev gets over her fear of Karayan

The Sorceress returns Karayan's memories and makes him scared of himself. Iphnis helps

Iphnis opens up to Karayan about being cast out from the Gnomes

And that's that! I'm no longer in italics because there's nothing more to commentate on :D So there ya go. That's my 2016 NaNoWriMo novel. Thanks for reading, hope u enjoyed :)