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░﹐ᶻᶻ꒰⋆ Name: SSears90   ๋࣭ ᵎᵎ  𓂋 ✦

░﹐ᶻᶻ ꒰ Dream tag: SSears90 ᭪ 𓂋 ✦

░﹐ᶻᶻ ꒰ The author: A BTS fanfic writer whose stories focus on the platonic brotherly relationship between the members, my stories are usually themed around drama,mystery,
thriller and horror.    .ᐟ 𓂋 ✦ .

░﹐ᶻᶻ ꩜𓂃Current Status:  Finished  ⑅ོ+ march 23rd 2024 𓂋 ✦

░﹐ᶻᶻ Genre: Vampire thriller 𓂋 ✦ .

░﹐ᶻᶻ Chapter Count: 16 𓂋 ✦ .

░﹐ᶻᶻ Mature/LGBTQ Themes: it is mature for violence. No to lgbtq. 𓂋 ✦ .

░﹐ᶻᶻ Highest Dream Ranking: #80 in vampirefanfiction/3.4k+ as of August 31st 2024 𓂋 ✦ .

░﹐ᶻᶻ Protagonist(s): Jeon Jungkook, the youngest member of the KPop band BTS. An adventurous nights turns to horror after he gets hurt and sick, leading to chaos. 𓂋 ✦ .

░﹐ᶻᶻ Dream Summary: The night Jungkook woke up with a fever, his world changed. He craved human flesh and blood, he'd even murder for it. How can he protect everyone he loves from himself? And once the government finds out and snatches him, can he escape from being used as their little lab rat?

Can he get rid of what's destroying him? 𓂋 ✦ .

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🗝ㅤ۫ Promoted by: N1lyyx ‹𝟹
🗝ㅤ۫ Voted by: Elixyzsss‹𝟹
🗝ㅤ۫ Review by: Elixyzsss ‹𝟹
🗝ㅤ۫ Chapter cnp by: N1lyyx ‹𝟹
🗝ㅤ۫ Notes: It's a little late, but congratulations on getting featured twice. It's crazy in how many awards you've gotten high place. Also I had to vote with the Community account because of some issues... Don't mind it please!‹𝟹

❝ ⌗ . Short Feedback on the first chapter . ⁺ 

In the first chapter, the author introduces the reader to Jungkook's sensational, terrified experience by using the cave and his increasingly horror as obvious drawings. The actual drama is between the cave scene and hospital recovery.

Improvements needed: The pacing feels uneven with abrupt shifts between action and quieter moments. The improvements that I have to suggest to this part are left out transitions and the deepening of the emotional connection with Jungkook that comes from Jungkook's mental struggle. Character development could be more delicate and smoother pacing can be worked on for a better impact.

Another thing would be that the Characters have no introduction and readers are just plunged in, but that is alright as it's a fanfiction and readers are likely fans. 

𝖂𝖊 'thank you for choosing 𝐮𝐬

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