7 | Tasting Evil
【Cover by Storywriterkato 】
Those children. God, those children. They give me the creeps and I can't stand watching them for too long, but they totally suit the theme and that is excellent!
They do not blend with the background that well though. Maybe adding a bit more green lighting over the edges would've worked. They look slightly out of place. The font you used for the title is great and it really stands-out, so amazing job for that. However, the subtitle is hard to read due to the shaky font and the red over green, so perhaps choosing a different font for it would be better in this case.
Still, nice work!
Review by rock_dreamer
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