【Cover by Y_allen 】

Those children again. Man, I hope I won't have nightmares of them tonight. But seriously, Ilike the paint effect on them (and how they seem to stare right into my soul), though I don'tseem to understand what the thing underneath them is.

I understand the artistic purposebehind it, but I feel like it occupies too much space and it kind of gives me that "too much"feeling again. 

The title looks good, I like the font and how the children are covering the loweredges of it. 

Though I think that the color of the children and the color of the title do notblend that well together. That prominent red doesn't work that well with matted grey, Ibelieve. The red text you added at the bottom of the cover is something I don't quiteunderstand the purpose of either. I don't know what it stands for and I don't think the fontsuits the rest of the cover.

But still, you deserve credit for all the work you put into it, and Ido believe you have something interesting here. Good job! 

Review by rock_dreamer