Title: SOULMATE COOKIES
Author: findmysteryinme

Description:
One diary, one girl who has the ability to wield its hidden powers, four individuals beguiled by Cupid's cookies and entrusted to find the wielder's, true love.

But from these four individuals who would her true soulmate?

Meet Ivy -desperately craving for some love and attention  -a young chef -who, despite years of culinary training has had bad luck in landing a job. Her luck is bad, that is until she stumbles into 'Soul Food Cafe' and easily gets picked as a chef there.

For Ivy, things have a weird way of happening and that's seen when for some reason, everyone who eats the special sweet treats at the cafe has their luck changed for the better.

Does this have something to do with the dairy that's been locked away for years?

Has it finally found it's wielder?
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I want to start by saying that the premise of this story is quite intriguing. It's the sort of idea that's relatively cute, but also attracts people from multiple genres because of its nature. It's a promising plot line, and I think you have a story with a lot of potential.

With that being said, I do have a lot of concepts here for you to consider.

Firstly, your title is in all caps. I'm not sure if you're going for aesthetics with this, but I am a little put off by it. Perhaps give readers some sort of explanation as to why you decided to do this. If you didn't intend for it to come out that way, I would definitely recommend changing it so that only the first letter of each word is capitalized.

I think your summary gives us a nice indication of what the story will be about. However, there are some grammatical errors that should be corrected. This way, readers are encouraged to read on, and aren't scared away when they discover errors before they encounter the first chapter. If you need any sort of direction as far as the description goes, I would be glad to help you out.

As I mentioned before, I think your plot has a lot of promise. However, I feel like the pacing is a little bit hard to follow, and the grammar is a bit unpredictable. This may make some readers shy away, even though the ideas you've introduced are interesting. I think, if you were to give this a thorough edit, the story could certainly reach its full potential, and readers would be happy to stick with it.

Would I recommend this story? Right now, I think it's a work-in-progress that needs a bit of reconstruction. If you were to go through and edit it a bit, I would certainly recommend it to readers here on Wattpad.

OVERALL SCORE: 75/100