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-- ACHIEVEMENTS --


"Glory in War" has been a long ride ever since I have started the first chapter of the story. The amount of lore details and secrets I have created for this universe alone is beyond the imagination capability of a simple human being with no talent in writing or storytelling. But it was worth it. This series remained my dream story from the very beginning to the very present, and will probably stay this way until the very moment I won't be here to tell the story. So, to see that it actually managed to get such achievements after all the hard work put into it makes me regret nothing when it comes to creating it. No amount of words can describe how grateful I am to all the people who have read even for five minutes this story. Thank you for making my dream come true!

These achievements are for you, readers. You are the real winners of the war. Hopefully they made you smile as much as they did with me. Be proud to be called a warrior.







--- ACHIEVEMENTS ---



WINNER OF THE "Slayer book awards" (Hosted by @slayyer777)






CATEGORY: Science-Fiction

Reviewer: @AprilJester


World Building 20/20

Excellent! The above world with M borns (Immortals) and the below world with C borns (Creators) are done well. I'm still a bit confused about the powers, but I'm sure that will come out as I read more of the story. There is the R borns. They have no powers and are like us. The war between the Immortals and Creators was changed forever by an R born, M1NERV4.

Original Plot 20/20

This is an animated story put onto paper about two different species who share a world. The race with powers hides in cities below ground as the Immortals above will kill them. The mortals with no power are stuck within the confines of this ongoing war.

Characters 15/15

N04H, LUK3, KYR4, CONNER, CHESTER, RYAN 

N04H is your typical high schooler, scared but showing a good face to all. Finding help for his friends showed character. Setting out to see the bartender- and finding LUK3-made the next step in his dream a little closer. LUK3 is a wonderful, fun-loving guy. KYR4 is your straight-as-an-arrow worker, and CONNER is... well-CONNER. He doesn't want to be involved but does it anyway.

Engagement 15/15

This story follows the right pace while giving the right amount of information so the reader is not overwhelmed. Beautiful job.

Sci-Fi Ideas 15/15

The wonder of this new and exciting world is tempting to all, even those not into anime (myself included!).

Writing Style 10/10

The style is that of a screenplay. I found no SPAG errors. The writing style matches the story perfectly, and I would not change a thing!

Theme/Message 5/5

Freedom is an illusion. The people above ground are supposedly free; however, D4NT3's change in personality easily shows that living below ground in the C born city is more of a freedom than anything he had above ground.


Total 100/100

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