Hidden behind The Mask by hellyeahghost

First of all, I kind of like the cover. But I'm bad at art, so I wouldn't know much. All I know, it gave a hint about superheroes and masks being involved together.

Okay, let's start :)
I'd only review the description and the 1st Chapter for now! :3

First off, the description.

You start with "What's your power?" straight away, which kind of perked interests in readers, and that's good.

It's supposed to be, "What, didn't they tell you?" Or "What, they didn't tell you?"  It sounds nicer that way :3 (I know your keyboard and autocorrect is to blame, I understand, bcos my keyboard is too, but I'm correcting this because that's the point why you request me to read it..? :D)

It should be Static, with a capital S.
Or people would just think you're talking about electric statics.

"I still can't figure out where they go when they disappear," I look at Static with a sly smile as I slowly lower my finger and move it into his direction, "Want to help me find out?"

I jerk my finger his way.

I'm suggesting these! You can simply fix the grammar if you want! :3
Only, if you write them apart like above, it'd build more suspense, and surprise.
Also, it'd give an impression of how sneaky the MC is.

"Now, really, what's your power?"
↑↑↑ It'd build more suspense like this XD, and make readers wonder, WHAT IS HER POWER?!

Chapter 1

I like this whole idea of superheroes being common in everyday life,and how people go crazy over them. But maybe you can describe, specifically, why the MC didn't like them? It doesn't have to be in the 1st chapter, you can reveal them in later, more dramatic chapters.

I imagine superheroes arguing and staking spotlights here and there and stuff, like in Avengers... but I didn't read this whole thing yet, so I'll wait :3

Blue Lagoon.

If you don't use capital, I'd think you're talking about a blue lagoon out of nowhere.

"You really need to stop with this whole super stuff," I point out, "They're overrated."

The first bell rings.

Idk about you, but we he recalled classes History Class. So, I guess it could be Super Studies.

They're just so amazing! And they're so hot!" Taylor giggled, "What if I'm a super? What do you think?"

She nudged me as everyone starts filling the class, urging me to answer her questions.

Idk about you, but since I go to a Girls School, we talk about boys all the time (fictional for me :3) and no matter how athletic or boyish we are, we all would giggle when we see or hear or talk about hot guys.

How would she know his eyes land there? It could've land on a table! Or another guy beside him!

Maybe you can write, "Mr Dunn's eyes searched the classroom and he called out the geekiest person around....."

I don't get why explaining her wiki page something to be laughed at..?? When someone in my class do that, we'd just whistle smugly (opposite gender, btw) or look in awe.

Mr. Dunn, btw.

"If I'm a super, my name would be... hmm, I actually don't know!" She taps me on the shoulder, "Why aren't you even talking?"

"Sorry, I just... kind of don't feel like talking about supers... or ever, really," I said, "It's getting old."

"Look who's coming!"

How do someone points with an eye?
"Tayler's eyes darted between me and someone by the far end of the corridor. I peeked by the corner of my eyes too see a boy. The hottest boy.

"Um, hi,"

T

ayler, btw.
How did she get out of the lockers?

"Tayler starts giving me that smug smile..."

Sup things guy do sent me laughing, because I have no idea what it is, but it sounds cool. XD

That's it for the first chapter! XD