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"Daddy!"Louis is shouting throughout the house, storming around the large house bored and cranky and really all he wants its to be held and kissed and cuddled or given attention. Yeah, attention, he wants attention right now and he's not at all getting it from his daddy because work seems to be far more important than Louis.

He was sent home from college after having a tummy ache, and even at that Liam didn't come to pick him up and instead scent Declan to. Louis was mad at Liam for that, he was hoping that Liam would come and pick him up and maybe give him a kiss, and bring him home and tuck him up on the sofa or give him soup, not that Louis would openly ask for that since he hated to ask for things.

Instead, Declan picked him up, and he was told not to go and bother Liam by one of the housekeepers and then the chef that seems to hate Louis' guts made him soup that tasted like he bathed in it but he had to eat it because Jackie was told by Liam to monitor Louis as he eats to make sure that he does.

He's bored, he has been Home for two ours now, ate soup that he didn't really want to, watched crappy day time television and did all types of coursework and homework that he needed to do. Liam has seemed to be up in his office all day, he was in there all morning whenever Louis was leaving for college and now all afternoon, he must be tensed, and lonely, and maybe Louis should be his cute and strangely generous self and go and treat him with attention.

"Daddy, I'm bored."Louis exclaims loudly with a pout on his lips, opening the door of the office without knocking or sparing a second thought of what could be behind the door. It's not as if he's going to open the door and there's someone else in the room, or that there's a girl or something, no one has came into the house all day so he knows that Liam is alone, and Working.

God Louis hates that word, he can't stand the thought of having a job and working. It was one of the reasons why he was so glad that he was a science and maths genius, there was no way in hell he was going to end up in some office job, being a scientist was a cool job, he would be able to blow stuff up in labs if he had the right chemicals and if he wanted to, but he'd rather be one that focused on cures for illnesses if anything.

Alt thought he can't really say that Liams job was boring, dangerous if anything, he was in charge of a gang, he was a gang leader with guns in the secret room to the side of his office and able to have mass amounts of drugs in his hand whenever he pleases. He kills people, Louis still couldn't get his head around that but it seems he has to live with the fact that whenever someone doesn't pay a fee that Liam and his gang has borrowed out, that the guy could either end up cripple for the rest of his life or found dead in some ditch.

Liam grunts in surprise, slamming the lid of his Laptop close with such force that Louis is sure that the screen of the laptop is now smashed. Louis gasps a little at the sound and the quick actions, wide eyes watching as Liam fiddles under the desk before clearing his throat, hard eyes glaring across the room at Louis.

"What do you want? I'm busy."He speaks, his voice so unusually gruff and his pupils dilated. Louis knows that look, he's seen it so many times whenever he's walked into Zayns room whenever he's in the middle of getting himself on. Louis was never one to knock on the door, it got him into awkward situations in the past, and then he really didn't know what to do with himself and instead just finds himself standing awkwardly in the doorframe and asking Zayn to make him Mac'n'Cheese.

"I'm bored,"Louis whines again, cheeks flushing pink and eyelashes fluttering. He steps into the room uninvited, closing the door behind him and taking small, teasing steps. Louis isn't wearing socks so his feet are bare and his shoes were flung across the livingroom and picked up by some maid who glared at the boy. Louis was quickly becoming disliked by the staff due to his untidiness.

"Louis,"Liam groans, eyes following his every move."I still have alot of work to do princess, go and do homework or something."He watches as Louis pouts, standing in front of Liams large desk, hands clasped In front of him, feet turned in a little. He pushes his glasses up his nose, the pout still on his lips as he looks at Liam with wide blue eyes, as if he was trying to guilt trip him over something that Liam isn't even sure of.

"But your tense, and stressed out, that isn't good."The 19 year old exclaims, pouting more."You need to relax, blow off some steam."He lets his finger tips dance across the top of Liams laptop and before Liam can grab at it, Louis has already snatched it and is running across the room with it.

"Louis! Give me back that laptop, now!"Liam shouts but Louis ignores him and is quick to running while opening the laptop. The screen hasn't smashed, and even if it was broken Liam would be able to buy a new one with the snap of his fingers. The screen has warmed up and loaded and Louis gasps just a little.

"Oh..."Louis smirks at the video which has continued to play of a Twink, whom looks a lot like Louis, getting fucked into a desk by his obvious Dom. The laptop is roughly taken away from him and Louis stumbles at the force, Liam closes it and slams the laptop down on the table by the sofa in the office."I don't think you should treat your electronics like that."The Doncaster lad shakes his head at the poor treatment.

"You're being very bad Louis,"

"No I'm not."Louis argues."I'm just trying to help Daddy."He places his small hands on Liams broad shoulders, head tipped to the side and battering his eyelashes up at his Dom. Louis presses his body close to Liams, the man doing nothing but place his hands on Louis' broad hips and oh, Louis can now feel the problem at hand and it's a turn on in all honesty. He doesn't let himself on, and instead makes sure that Liams erection is pressed against his own clothed member.

"You're breaking alot of rules,"Liam seethes, biting his bottom lip to stop himself from grinding his erection on Louis because it's so tempting, and maybe Louis is right, maybe Liam should blow off some steam."You're being a very naughty Princess."The nickname has Louis shivering all over, goosebumps rising on sunkissed skin and the hair on the back of Louis' hair rising. It's a nickname that Louis adores, and he doesn't want to be stopped calling it.

"But Daddy, I'm bored and horny, and you're tense and horny, I think you know where I want this to be heading."He whines deep in his throat, kissing Liams neck softly. "We can make your little video true, you can fuck me into the desk, into oblivion."Louis' voice gets that little bit higher whenever Liam grips his bum harshly whenever the swear escapes his lips.

"You've tempted my mind,"Liam breathes out, lips ghosting over Louis' own pretty lips but not touching. He squeezes more pressure onto Louis' ass, the younger boy squeaking when he's practically hoisted up onto Liams hips, legs wrapped around the mans waist and arms around his neck. The Doncaster lad can feel the pressure of Liams clothed member if he pushes down, But Liams hands are roughly gripping his ass to keep him in place.

"I-"

"I think with all this teasing, and naughtiness you deserve a couple of well deserved spanks aswell."Liam growls, cutting Louis off his words. The boy wriggles in Liams arms, not even noticing that they have walked to the desk again and Liam is wiping it clear of papers qnd the sorts (rather neatly Which makes Louis roll his eyes as he's set down on the desk that's clear from paper or work).

Liam presses his lips to Louis' own, catching the boy off guard. Hands are placed on either side of the doms head, head tilted back to reach up for the kiss, legs spread to let Liam slot against them. Liam fumbles with the belt around his waist, pulling it from his belt loop signify break the kiss he shares with Louis.

Louis whimpers when the metal buckle of the belt hits the wood of the desk, breaking the kiss and turning his head to view the folded leather belt that lays on the desk beside him. He can feel Liam fiddle with the button of Louis' jeans, pulling them down with the help of the boy lifting his hips so that his jeans can be kicked off by his feet.

"You haven't had the belt yet,"Liam smirks, lips pressed to Louis' forehead, listening as Louis' breath hitches when there's large hands groping his bare thighs, sure to leave marks. He lets his head lower down to Louis' right earlobe, nibbling on it as he speaks, his tone lower."5 for not knocking, 5 for not doing as told, and a further five for that swear you let slip from that pretty little mouth of yours." Louis freezes, and before he knows it Liam has turned him over so that his stomach is pressed to the table, his hands gripping the end of the large wooden table and forced to stand on his tip toes so that Liam has a better view of his ass.

The white lace of his panties stretch over the width of Louis' arse perfectly, the back of his white shirt sleeve shirt pushed up and exposing the dimples at the bottom of Louis' spine. The dominate of the two presses a soft kiss behind the boys left ear, a hand placed firmly on his hip and the other on the desk to keep him up right as he whispers;

"You remember your safe word sweetheart? Just in case."Liam just wants to make sure, after the incident with the panic attack.

Louis nods, a shaky breath escaping his lips and before he knows it, he can actually hear the whistle of the leather belt whooshing in the air and feel the slap of the leather against the now bare skin of his ass since the lave was pulled to his thighs. Louis' body jerks forward, eyes clenching close and hands gripping the edge of the desk.

Liam plants the spanks on each cheek, Louis' sit spot and top of his thighs, each spank with the belt making Louis gasp and shudder, forehead rested on his arm. There's tears leaking from his eyes just a little, knuckles white fro, the death grip he has on the desk edge and his arse a fiery red with the marks of the belt marked onto his skin.

Worst of all, he's hard, so fucking hard that it aches and his prick is leaking pre-come and he knows he can't do a thing about it.

"3 more baby boy, count them."Liam murmurs into the back of Louis' damp hair, sweat on his own brow. The back of Louis' white shirt is sticking to the skin of his back from the sweat, his bum is red and painfully sore and he's sure he won't be able to sit correctly. He has bite mark on his arm from him biting through the pain to stop himself from cursing out loud because then that'd cause more lashes from the belt.

"O-one,"His body jerks like it has on the rest of the lashes, eyes closing once again. There's no pain for the first couple of seconds until it hurts him like a ton of bricks. The second to last lash is slapped onto his left cheek, he hears the whoosh and hears the slap and he can't help but curse outloud as the slap over laps another.Before he can mutter the word Two there's the final and last lash coming down between his cheeks, his cheeks spread so that the leather belt hits the ring of muscle of his hole.

Louis cries out at the last one, breathing hitching and kicking his legs at the pain.

He hears Liams drop the belt to the floor and runs a hand up Louis' back, kissing the back of his head once again and murmuring praises, telling him how much of a gold boy he was and how well he took his punishment. The submissive can feel his body start to relax at the Rough but gentle hands that caress his back.

"Cream?"Liam suggests, hands now rubbing over Louis' red ass soothingly. The touch is so gentle but feels like stinging nettles to his sore backside.

"Thought we were going to make your video fantasy a reality? That is what I requested."The boy huffs a small laugh and turns his head to peer up at Liam upside down. His cheeks and nose are red from the small tears he has shed, Blue eyes bright and that little smirk dancing on his lips.

"And since when do I take orders from you?Hmm?"Liam smirks, chuckling as he lets a hand get lost in Louis' soft Hazel hair. Louis melts into the touch and that's the older males plan before he lets his grip tighten and he pulls at Louis' hair, making his neck crane back and to wince in pain."I'm pretty sure I'm the dominate, and you're the submissive. Am I correct?"

Louis would nod his head but he can't so he squeaks out; "Yes Daddy."

The submissive of the pair listens as Liam fumbles in one of the drawers of his large desk, no longer pulling Louis' hair. His mind feels hazy but he keeps clinging to that little string of reality. His member is still hard and untouched and he can't bring himself to pry his hands away from the edge of the desk he is still gripping.

Before Louis can connect the dots in his head, he can feel something slick enter his hole and it's only when it starts to wriggle around that Louis realises it's Liams pointer finger. He pushes back, his first movement of hips since the beginning on the punishment. Liam is steadily working his index finger in and out of Louis' tight hole, adding a second digit and twisting his fingers, curling and prodding until he's knuckle deep and curls his fingers and Oh.

That's the spot

Louis doesn't last long, and it's pretty disappointing because he was looking for east to being fucked into the desk but being turned on, and his punishment and the fact he has been painfully hard for the last 20 minutes plus doesn't help his vulnerability. He last a further 2 minutes maybe, Liam 4 fingers in and stretched out, still curling and jabbing and in that moment that he lets go he sees white.

He feels like he's on cloud nine, seeing starts, his body going lax and the catching of arms under his armpits and the soft, sweet voice of Liam whispering praises in his ear.

SO I SAID ID UPDATE IN LIKE A WEEK AND I DID KINDA

Okay I was gonna do full blown smut but I want Louis and Liams first Time not to be up against a desk in Liams office xD plus I thought subspace would be class to add in

Oh and a punishment ;)

So tell me what you thought ;)

Who wants subspace Louis in the next chapter? (I might do it)

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