Week 4: March 21 - 27, 2016

Title: The Golden Riff Chronicles (ongoing novel)

Author: purple_porpoise

Blurb: Waldorf Wox, a boy from the impoverished dominion of Mrooth, is an anomaly: he is the only one in all of the musically-impaired Mroothian race to have Perfect Pitch. Through a series of events that started with the arrival of a suspiciously over-cheerful geography teacher, Waldorf Wox finds himself in the middle of a secret war. He and his allies must then embark on a quest to find the mysterious Golden Riff and its sworn protectors in order to get to the bottom of the world's best-kept secrets: the tragic fate of Thyssen, the God of Music and Creator of Periqoth, and the true meaning — and power — of Music.

Link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/22359317-the-golden-riff-chronicles

Message to the reviewers:

Hi, FWFC reviewers! I have a few questions for you, if it's all right. XD

1. Do you think there should be more action than narration in Chapter 1?
2. Do you feel like I'm info-dumping at times (or all the time)? Is it difficult to keep up with the names, places, events, etc.?
3. How is the pacing? Does the plot move along slowly or just right?
4. Most importantly, how did the story make you feel? Were you engaged? Bored? Indifferent?

Thank you so much! ^_^