|| THIRD WEEK RESULTS ||
THE MOST AWAITED RESULT IS HERE!
First of all, I want to thank everyone na sumali dito. Pati na rin po ang mga sumuporta sa contestants, Thank you very much po!
To my contestants, sobrang ganda po lahat ng akda niyo. Pero ganoon talaga ang competition, may mananalo talaga. Ganoon pa man, lahat naman kayo ay may siguradong premyo para sa effort ninyong lahat. Napakaganda ng inyong mga akda.
About sa judging, lingid sa inyong kaalaman na nagkaroon ako ng mga Special Judges na nakasama dito. Sinigurado kong wala silang kilala na kahit sino sa inyo, upang maging patas sa lahat. Meaning, hindi lang po ako ang nagbasa at nagbigay ng score sa inyo.
So ito na po, hindi ko na papahabain pa ang intro na 'to.
CONGRATULATIONS TO ALL!!!
Rank 6: 🎖MacBijj | Natapos Tayo🎖
Votes: 5 points
Book Cover - 3
Content- 16
Lesson - 9
Title- 4
Grammar , Punctuation, Spelling - 8
Total: 40/50
Overall: 45/100
Judge's Feedback: First of all, sana all for the couple na nakapunta sa Korea. Sa Book Cover, it's nice po pero may room for improvement pa. With the plot, hindi siya bitin pero medyo cliche niya ang plot. Advice ko lang po na mas gawin pa itong unique. You can put plot twists na sa tingin niyo po ay unexpected talaga. Although maganda po ang narration niyo. Sa lesson po, may matutunan which is about sa relationship. Na kailangan magkaintindihan talaga. With the technicalities, may mga errors po pero hindi naman po iyon maiiwasan. You can edit it pa. Overall, may potential ka po to write. Never give up lang kasi pwede ka pa po mag-improve. Congratulations!
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Rank 5: 🎖dadamood | Dream X Reality: Two in One🎖
Votes: 13 points
Book Cover - 2
Content - 17
Lesson - 9
Title - 4
Grammar, Punctuation, Spelling - 10
Total : 42/50
Overall : 55/100
Judge's Feedback: Maayos ang pagkakasulat, walang mali sa grammar, spellings and etc. pero nakulangan ako sa pagbibigay ng meaning sa title. What I mean is- The title and description is catchy pero dapat mas lalong nakakaengage yung content ng story. Hindi niya mapanagutan yung title. Napanagutan man niya ang title pero hindi siya ganoon kathrilling. Try to explore those ideas and add some spice to it. But let me congratulate you sa lessons, Aba! napakahusay. Napasok niya lahat ng lessons, you did it well! Smooth ang flow ng story. Hope to see you after 3-5 years publishing your own book :))
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Rank 4: 🎖da_unknown_writer | Nang Dahil Sa Pag-ibig🎖
Votes : 15 points
Book Cover - 3
Content- 18
Lesson - 10
Title- 3
Grammar , Punctuation, Spelling - 9
Total: 43/50
Overall : 58/100
Judge's Feedback: The cover suits the story really well. Sobrang sweet ng Father-Daughter Tandem. Sobrang makabuluhan ang kwento, sapagkat bihira nalang iyan ngayon. Usually kasi mga love story, fantasy, mystery, horror na ang isinusulat. So nice of you to write this kind of story po. I shed a tear, legit. I remember my papa and his sacrifices. The plot, it's so unexpected. Yung lesson, very relevant. May minimal errors pero hindi naman po maiiwasan. Edit nalang po. Ang advice ko lang po is to have a unique title next time. The potential is there po. Keep it up! Never give up. Congratulations !
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3rd Place: 🥉gril18 | Enraged🥉
Votes: 50 points
Book Cover - 3
Content - 19
Lesson - 8
Title - 4
Grammar, Punctuation, Spelling - 9
Total : 43/50
Overall: 93/100
Judge's Feedback:Mas maganda sana kung pati yung title filipino ang ginamit BTW magaling ang pagkakalahad and pure filipino ang ginamit pero nakakalito ang timeline ng istorya and may nakita rin akong isang typo pero hindi naman ito nakaapekto sa flow ng story. I love it! parang inspired siya sa mga nobelo ni Dr. Jose Rizal. Advice ko lang na huwag ka sumuko magsulat may potential ka and one day hindi na ako magugulat kung isa ka sa mga may million readers sa wattpad.
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2nd Place: 🥈VimLights | The Scorching Heat of Sun🥈
Votes : 50 points
Book Cover - 4
Content - 20
Lesson - 9
Title - 5
Grammar, Punctuation, Spelling - 9
Total: 47/50
Overall : 97/100
Judge's Feedback:Nice book cover but I know that it can be more better. So first of all, dimwit. Yeah sorry for the word but aym in a "holy crap" mode right now and still frigging analyzing the events. So, I've seen stories like this before but I did not find it cliche or whatever so. I like you construct sentence, choose the right words, describe a certain subject and arrange your ideas. The title is really unique but I'm searching for something that will really justify it. Though you described it very well at the end. The ending literally killed me. And my stomach hurts like hell right now. Well, I ain't a fan of sad stories because I don't wanna cry. Though I love hurtful scenes and some nachos in a story but I still hope for a happy ending. This one made me incredibly insane. Of course, I noticed some minimal errors ( I know it's not that easy) like typos and grammars. I really want a happy ending! But yeah, we really need to accept that there are things in life that won't go like how we want it to be. So yeah, kudos to you! Keep writing!
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1st Place: 🥇persephone_sparks | Between the Lines🥇
Votes : 50 points
Book Cover - 4
Content - 20
Lesson - 10
Title - 5
Grammar, Punctuation, Spelling - 9
Total : 48/50
Overall: 98/100
Judge's Feedback:I think there's a room for improvement in your book cover. I like that you consider the reader's sensitivity that's why you put warning at the start of the chapter. Suicide and depression isn't a joke and I know a lot of people is experiencing it right now. I also noticed that the MC is experiencing a serious disorder caused by trauma. I was touched about her last note before she tries to commit suicide. I can feel the she doesn't wants to prolong her sister's agony anymore. She felt like a burden to her because her sister can't do those things she want for herself. So instead of being a burden to her, she decided to end her life. I somewhat felt happy when someone at least treated her nice while travelling to her last destination. But we really can't dictate what life wants for us. We'll meet people. Some will stay and some will go. Some will remain part of your history and one is your destiny. I learned that no matter how hard life is, life is not worth ending. It's a gift from God that must be treasured. A lot of people wants extension and here are some people, ending their life for nothing. No problem will be given to us if God knows that we can't face it. All we need to do is to be brave and take those risks. I love how you justify your title. Your choice of words and how intricately constructed those sentences are. I noticed minimal errors in punctuation. The one with "....", uhm actually there's a thing called ellipsis or the three consecutive dots usually used in the end of incomplete sentence. Well, I noticed that you put four dots instead of 3 and also no space in between the dots and the next word. Another thing is the word "kan'ya". No need to put apostrophe in between. To wrap it all, it was an amazing masterpiece. Kudos to the author. Keep writing!
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CONGRATULATIONS TO ALL PO! KEEP WRITING!
PRIZES WILL BE GIVEN ASAP.
SEE YOU SA NEXT CONTEST!
LOVELOTS, KAZ 💕
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