Week 3: Competition
"16 of you remain... Soon to be 14"
"14th is Velka. Your dance was flawless, and everything was amazing. You would of won if you showed up to choose your costume..."
"13th of Alyssa. Again, costume. It was well done, but focus on emotion. I need more of that"
"Twelfth is Sophia. You were nervous, and it was obvious"
"In 11th is Chloe. It was a bit childish, and you didn't really stand out for any reason"
"10th is Kalani. It was really good, but you didn't seem yourself. Is something up?"
"9th is Daviana. You did really well, and your facials were amazing. Focus more on your flexibility as it really shows in an Acro routine"
"In 8th is Areana. It was really good. It could be Sharper, and you need to hit harder. But it was a really well done routine. Flexibility could be strengthened as well, but all in all, a great number"
"7th is Payton. It was really well done, but you lacked your technique. If you could of gotten the technique like I know you could, you would of came first"
"Sixth place is Kenzie. Your technique was amazing, and your control was flawless. Work on the facials though"
"5th is Paige. A well executed number, and it was very enjoyable. That is something, that you would see in a musical, your definetly musical material."
"4th place is Lilly. Your technique was stunning. It is much better then most of the elites! Your someone with amazing technique. A few more emotions, and work on the front tuck"
"Third is Maddie. It was stunning, like all your tap routines. But it seemed funny and off beat, unlike normal. However your emotion and technique was flawless"
"Second place is Kendall. That was a massive improvement. It was amazing, but work on straightining your knees"
"Brooke, Asia and JoJo. One of you are our winner"
"Brooke, congratulations. That was flawless, just like all your acro routines. Well done. Work on emotion, but it was stunning. Congratulations"
(Also, I'm doing a few things where people who get knocked out come back later in the season. I have 1 or two characters, but if you get knocked out and are interested in coming back, message me and I'll see if I can plan something. I can't promise anything)
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