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Book Cover & Title (5/5): The cover is super simple, and doesn't offer much, but not a lot as well. It's just enough to give you an introduction as to what you're about to dive into.
It's great! And it delivers the message.
The synopsis strikes you with a sense of nostalgia, making you reminisce on what kind of photos you've taken in your life—forcing you to dive deep into your mind at those happy memories. This, too, is short and sweet.

One thing I noticed upon further inspection is that the word(s) are off centered. I won't dock points because of this, just something I wanted to point out.


Plot(50/50): This short story revolves around a happy family. We are introduced to a few characters: Rajendra, his wife Swarajyam, and daughter Mudita.
A gift is presented; a picture of Mudita's parent's wedding, where they smiled greatly. It's their anniversary. Mudita makes a point where her mother doesn't smile enough.
Fast forward, Mudita is getting ready for her wedding. The house is full of happiness and laughter leading up to the wedding. Rajendra wants to take pictures, eventually gets convinced to live in the moment with no distractions.
Meanwhile, Mudita gets dressed in vibrant colors. Her husband-to-be peeks in on her to reminisce, and takes a photo of the happy memory before being shooed away.

A lot of this story is about capturing the happy moments in life, no matter where it is, and who you are with. In hopes that when the memory comes back around further down the road, you'll smile like you did back then.

Character Development(25/25): Though short, there is a lot and it's rich with minuet details. None of the characters are sour, rather sweet. Nothing much to judge here.

Overall Enjoyment(17/20): The flow of the story could use a touch up. Some punctuation could be used to help with this. But overall, pretty easy to read with little to no issues.

(97/100)

Other notes: This one was pretty simple, and there isn't much to critique here, other than, again, adding punctuation to help the flow. Overall, great story, great delivery. 

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